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Phew kinda long time since I updated anything, huh? I admid it - school is getting hard. Kinda sadly I needed an injury to have some "vacation" and write some new chapters. Okay story continue and th
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Chapter Fifteen: Song of Heart After nearly a day of sleeping, Roxy finally woke up. She felt a bit dizzy duo to the drug. As she got up, Whirl now in a hawk form flew to her. The moment he rubbed
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Once again Hawkie, I congratulate you on your stunning storytelling skills. LOL, to tell you the truth, I was actually imagining that this was a Square Enix game with Kingdom Hearts style graphics, a
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1. Just a simple question, before you start. Have you ever read any of my other stories?
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Yeah, a new story, but this time it isn’t about kh. Well, it does have some things that can remind you on kh, like a power of friendship, mystical powers, being chosen for something… Story will focus on a normal teenage boy ( how original! ) who lives a normal life. But then something happens and he meets a mysterious girl, who seems to know something….
And that will also be a story where I'll use characters simmilar to some of my kh13 friends! So keep reading if you're my kh13 friend!!!
Chapters:
( 1 ) Flying Through the Memories - Done
( 2 ) He’s the One… - Done
( 3 ) Answers? - Done
( 4 ) Sleep Over - Done
( 5 ) Men In Gray - Done
( 6 ) Abby - Done
( 7 ) Experiments - Done
( 8 ) Breaking out - Done
( 9 ) Surviving - Done
( 10 ) Promise - Done
( 11 ) Realm of Spirits - Done
( 12 ) Captured - Done
( 13 ) From Rookie to an Ial - Done
( 14 ) Game With Circle - Done
( 15 ) Song of Heart - Done
( 16 ) Big City of Dark - Done
( 17 ) Haunted House - Done
( 18 ) New Home - Done
( 19 ) Escape While You Can - Done
( 20 ) Advent Children - Done
( 21 ) Mission - Artificial - Done
( 22 ) Cold Way - Done
( 23 ) Rescuing Innocent Life - In working
Chapter One: Flying Through the Memories
Another school day was over and Alex was going home. Boys met up with their gangs, while girls were going towards the shopping centre. Alex wasn’t one of them. And yet, it seemed like none sees him. He was kinda used to that life. You’re in the backstage, all alone, none cares…
For him that was ok, because he liked to be alone. Well, he wasn’t completely invisible. For girls, of course. For them he was “the cutest thing in the school”. And that was true. Unlike his classmates, he had red spiky hair and bright green eyes. Girls were totally crazy about that.
But Alex was still lonely. Even thought girls were crazy about him, he never had an actual friend. All other boys called him a “nerd” or something even weirder. They didn’t like him because, he was different.
Alex loved drawing.
Every day after the school, he went in park and drew in his sketchbook. That was his relaxation after the school. Right now he was sitting under the tree while he was drawing a girl. He didn’t know why, but the thing he most liked to draw were girls. Drawing was almost finished, when he was thinking about girl’s hairstyle.
“Let’s see…”
Pencil was drawing by itself. Soon after, girl had two long ponytails. While looking on her, he thought what kind of personality she would have.
“Cool… creative… never squealing… loyal… an adventurist!”
All those thinking about that girl made his head heavy, so he decided to go home.
“Too bad that kind of girl doesn’t exist…”
He walked towards the small apartment, near the park. This was his home since he was 3. That was the age when he lost his parents in a car accident. Fortunately his uncle raised him into a smart and creative kid. But unfortunately, he was always busy.
Like now, apartment was empty. Alex sighed and looked on the message that was lying on the table.
Hey there Kiddo!
Today I had a bit more work to do, so I’ll be late. I left you some money if you’ll be hungry.
His stomach talked faster than his head. Alex was very hungry duo to his small lunch that he had in school. He took the bike from the garage and rode it towards the shop. It was pretty far away and yet, it started raining.
“Great! Now I’ll have to eat in the shop!”
And that was true. 20 minutes later, he was standing next to the shopkeeper, eating a sandwich and french fries.
“So, how’s school?” shopkeeper asked.
“Like always… nothing new…” Alex said.
Alex came to eat in this shop often, so shopkeeper pretty memorized him. Shopkeeper’s name was Flynn and he had shaved blond hair, with a ring in his ear. He was also the one of Alex’s only friends.
“It’s getting late. I have to go home.”
“Hey, it’s raining outside. Why don’t you wait here until it stops?”
“Don’t worry, I’ll be fine.”
“Be careful…”
Alex nearly regretted that he didn’t listen to Flynn. The rain got from bad to worse and road was full of water. His mind was full of memories again.
“Can I play around the puddles, mom?”
“Of course you can, dear. Just be careful!”
“Don’t worry mommy I will.”
A tear drop slipped down to his cheek when he was thinking about it. The last walk with his mom just before she died in that car accident along with his dad…
His thinking was broken by loud lighting in the sky. Alex now realized that he’s getting wetter by every second.
“Man, I need a shower when I come home.”
When he was about to turn in his street, a giant van rushed right into him!
Alex didn’t feel the pain when van crush into him. He only felt the feeling of flying that ended with a pain on the ground. Driver seemed to realize what he had just done. He quickly came out of his car.
“Hey, can you hear me? Are you alright?”
There was no reply. Alex was just laying on the ground, bleeding.
“ Oh, my goodness.” driver said as he looked on Alex’s wounds.
Driver quickly called an ambulance on his cell phone.
“Please come quick… I hit a kid with my car… yes, on the 4th street… he’s bleeding! Hurry!”
While man was phoning, Alex saw someone in the corner. His sight was foggy, so he couldn’t fully see it. But he did saw a girl, who looked exactly like from his sketchbook.
That was the last thing he saw before passing out.
When the ambulance arrived was already too late. Even thought doctors connected him with many life – saving machines, his heart didn’t beat. His skin turned pale as his eyes stared into the corner where that girl was…
Alex’s life was taken away.
Edited by hawk