I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD

I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE

I SHOULD KILL MYSELF #haiku

Edited July 20, 201411 yr by Cucco

"They call me Sokka,

That is in the Water Tribe.

I am not an oaf."

 

"You think you're so smart,

With your fancy little words,

This is not so hard."

 

"I calls it easy.

Like I paddle my canoe,

I'll paddle yours too!"

 

"Squish, squash, sling that slang.

I'm always right back at ya,

Like my...boomerang!"

You beat me, Ruby

I also thought of Sokka

And his haiku skills

What is a haiku?

Did I learned it in school?

Is this a haiku?

I can make haiku.

Five seven five is the key.

But I run out of...

Two Black Rectangles

November Twenty-Second

November Fifteeth

 

Bor-ed, bor-ed, bored

Bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored, bored

I am really bored.

Edited July 20, 201411 yr by Gamerazor247

I don't like haikus

Mine were always really bad

Really fuc.k this shit

Gathering wishes

Become a new shining star

Take flight my Stardust!

 

Peace!

Winner is the best

And he has proof of this fact

It can't be denied

Kingdom Hearts III is

Coming in 2016

Where is Half-Life 3?

Five, seven, then five.

 

This is harder than I thought.

Pretty sure I failed.

These aren't

Japanese poems

sokka tried

These aren't

Japanese poems

sokka tried

That's not an haiku.

Use seventeen syllables

or else they're just words.

Apparently haikus are a thing

 

Danex and Squirting Demyx tried this before

 

Butt I'm stil better than them at this

I AM TWELVE YEARS OLDI LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVEI SHOULD KILL MYSELF #haiku

Third line a bit longWhy would you do that CuccoAt least learn the rules

Third line a bit longWhy would you do that CuccoAt least learn the rules

 

You think you are smart

But you have made a mistake

It is actually short.

 

Hmm I used a syllable counter online, since I can't count syllables in English. Turns out it also doesn't

 

Okay, a Haiku right from the roots then.

 

花火見る

弟の目が

赤青黄

Edited September 15, 201411 yr by SkyKeybladeHero

You think you are smart

But you have made a mistake

It is actually short.

 

Hmm I used a syllable counter online, since I can't count syllables in English. Turns out it also doesn't

 

Okay, a Haiku right from the roots then.

 

花火見る

弟の目が

赤青黄

Third line a bit long 1 1 1  1 1Why would you do that Cucco  1   1   1   1 1   2 At least learn the rules 1 1 1 1 1575(I am just showing my count since you called me out on it, and because you stated you had to use an online syllable counter.)Though good job on doing a haiku in the language they were designed for.edit: oops I misread your message.... I will edit again.Edit: He had #haiku on the third line, which would add at least 2 syllables. Though now looking at it again, if I didn't count the #haiku, he actually had the proper form.I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD1 1 1   1   1I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE1  1 1   1 1 1 1I SHOULD KILL MYSELF1 1 1   2575

Edited September 15, 201411 yr by Tigerruss

Third line a bit long 1 1 1  1 1Why would you do that Cucco  1   1   1   1 1   2 At least learn the rules 1 1 1 1 1575(I am just showing my count since you called me out on it, and because you stated you had to use an online syllable counter.)Though good job on doing a haiku in the language they were designed for.edit: oops I misread your message.... I will edit again.Edit: He had #haiku on the third line, which would add at least 2 syllables. Though now looking at it again, if I didn't count the #haiku, he actually had the proper form.I AM TWELVE YEARS OLD1 1 1   1   1I LIKE TO PLAY X BOX LIVE1  1 1   1 1 1 1I SHOULD KILL MYSELF1 1 1   2575

 

Long, thin and green trees

Useful and beautiful they are

Hail, bamboo leaves.

 

Did I count it right? It's freaking hard counting the syllables of a fonetic language u.u

And in haikus that counting is even different then normal, for what I understood reading yours.

Take note of the clowns

The misfortune of their lives

Is part of the joke

Death and agony,

Where hope and despair awaits,

It's the dark blasters.

i am marukyu

i enjoy eating apples

i am marukyu