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Lu Xun's stories : A Frightful Prevision

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  • February 27th   Hello again. It’s been a while since I last wrote here. Some things have happened since that day. But, first, I think you’d be more interested in hearing the rest of my dream -- whi

  • Thanks guys, here is a small update   May 20th   Drak   Hello again. How have you guys been? I haven’t been fine. Actually, I’m not the one who is writing this now. I can’t even write until I

  • Thanks guys, for the comments There you go more!   I’ve decided not to tell more about it for you guys, at least not now, let’s leave it for later. So, as I was speaking, I got more and more fascin

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  3. 3. Do you like this style of story? (I mean, two characters writing a diary)

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I loved it. It was amazing as always can't wait to read what the other letter says. :D

i loved it! can't wait for the other letters!

I agree 100% with what that letter is saying.

I can't wait for more letters. Keep going :D

Makes sense. I'm glad Eiwrd and Das ended up good.

Nooooooooooooooooooooooooo.

=o!!!! who has a wife?

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=o!!!! who has a wife?

 

Eirwd. They have a son too.

Eirwd. They have a son too.

 

ahh, i get it

awwwwh come on! i wanted to know what was in the letter and i hope you get better soon!

Poor you :( ... Hope you'll get better soon. And the epicness of your story is increasing!!!

Dang it, I was all psyched up, ready to read the letter. Oh well. Hope you well better, Lu Xun.

I hope you get to feel better soon Lu Xun. :(

 

It was short but still epic. :D

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A Frighftul Prevision

 

Final Battle

 

Epilogue, part 2.2

 

So, Eirwd began to read the letter.

 

http-~~-//www.youtube.com/watch?v=-Jo1iOJZRaI

 

“To my dear friend, Eirwd.

From your friend, Drak.

 

Hello, my boy. It seems as if it was yesterday when I found a little boy in a street... That was my favorite day during this life. Although no one knew about this, and instead, they thought you were my little cousin.

 

I’m sorry if I did not spend a lot of time with you, like we used to in the past... I’ve been so busy this last months... And now you’re no longer a little boy, you are a big man, one that certainly will have a great future. You were the one that I should have put as my successor... I’m deeply sorry, but past is past... and it will never come back.

 

I think it was not just a mere coincidence that you were the last one of my Generals alive... I think this was connected to a much bigger chain of events, which I will, sadly, never truly find out... At least not on Earth, but maybe in the Heavens.

 

But now, enough of sad things... I wonder what kind of King you will become... it is truly the only regret I have for dying now... But you will never be alone... I will be always watching for you, wherever I go... and you can remember the good moments we’ve spent together... I will always be in your heart, you must never forget that.

 

Now, I need to take my leave. I wish you good luck on your mission -- which will not be very easy... But you will do the right thing... I am sure of it. As the new King of Europe, you and the woman you choose to marry -- you both will be very happy, I’m sure of it.

 

Never forget what our religion tells; you need to think about others as well. Don’t be selfish, and maybe this world will not meet its end soon. If you do that, then others will surely follow you. Please, never forget for what we’ve fought for during this battle.

 

Lastly, I want to say a “see you soon”, instead of a farewell.

 

With love and care,

Drak.”

 

And then, a feeling of happiness took over Eirwd’s heart. He felt like he had done exactly what his master, and father ordered.

 

“I’m so happy...” he said.

“That’s good, my dear... Now, we should go to Drak’s grave, don’t you think?” she said.

“Yes, of course! Let us go now!” he replied.

“Ok, but wait... Let us take our son with us!” she said.

“Of course... Get him quickly and let us go!” he replied.

 

And so, they went to Drak’s grave to tell him what they had felt once they read the letters.

 

Now, a prosperous time ruled... but for how long would it be? No one could say. But, for now at least, peace was once again ruling over the land.

 

Drak could be considered only a man from the Heavens that was only entrusted to bring a message to humanity... And if so, could someone arrive in the future, and be more than a simply messager?

Omg. This was a really good story.

Now if only that would happen.

intresting....

i really enjoyed this story.... it was awesome

I really did loved this story, words can't described how great this story was. :D

A great conclusion to a great story. Excellent work, Lu Xun.

I so damm enjoyed this last chapter!!! And that song also suits the words!

 

Can't belive that story is over...

 

But you brought epicness right onto that site! You should publish it, to tell others the message of nature... just like Drak did.

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Thank you all who have been reading this story since the beginning!

 

You were the one that made me want to write more and more!

 

An author is nothing if he or she doesn't have at least a person that reads their stories :)

 

I might begin to write a new one very soon, so you need to stay tuned!

 

Also, some times, I'll come back to this thread and make questions to you, my dear readers :)

A-W-E-S-O-M-E I LOVE YOU! It touched my heart! You are epic!

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