Hello guys

As I posted earlier today in a thread titled New Idea, I'm gonna start a new story. And this one may be the best one I've ever written. But, firstly, as mentioned there, here are two drawings, and the description for these two characters. Hope you enjoy it so far! It's just the start!

Many more will be out soon, and then, we can start with the story itself!

 

 

 

Princess Kelsty - Born in the year of 1700, she was graced with both beauty and intelligence. Received the name of 'Young Genius' for what she managed to accomplish during her last years of life.

 

 

She's the Emperor's youngest daughter, and even though she is pretty, she has also a brilliant mind. She was the one who told her father to call all of the Lords of the land, and request that they all fight together to eliminate the first conflicts that started to split the Empire.

 

Even though she was pretty and smart, she did not have a husband. which was not normal in that land. Her father tried to force her into marriage twice before, but as she was truly smart, at the point of being a strategistic later on, she managed to be free to do whatever she wanted, as long as she could be useful to her father. She has a strong personality, and doesn't like to be ordered around. It was thanks to her efforts that the Empire lasted a year more than it should have.

 

 

 

 

 

James Kunn - Princess Kelsty's bodyguard, who always took his job seriously, and did not leave her side for any second. Born in the year of 1696, he was promoted after showing off his abilities in a talent contest held to see who was strong and reliable enough to be able to stand by the Emperor's youngest daughter, and to protect her for all eternity.

 

He swore for his own life that, as long as he could breath, no harm would befall Kelsty, and he surely would give his life in order to save hers. While quiet and calm, once in battle he turned into a machine that strikes anything and anyone that would be audacious enough to even think of harming the princess. Many tried to kidnap her, trying to make the Emperor transfer his powers to them, but none succeeded. At least now until the Empire met its end....

 

It was clear that he had feelings for her, but apparently, she didn't feel the same love that was the reason for why James was so brave and strong. When the Empire ended, he took care of the princess. They were a perfect pair -- with her intellect and his strength.

 

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So, is my idea of describing the characters actually working? Thanks for reading and feel free to post your opinion! More is about to come shortly. Follow the topic and receive a notification once this is updated! Hope you're looking forward to it just as much as I'm.

 

Chapter so far

 

*An Example to Follow http://kh13.com/foru...post__p__722433

*The Contest http://kh13.com/foru...post__p__730574

*The Bad Guy http://kh13.com/foru...post__p__733222

Nice job!Waiting for the Main Story! =D

Nice job.I see Kim will soon get his vengeance when there is another special event to happen in the future.

I really liked that story, I was kinda wondering why he was cheating before readig that, nice job!

wow!! your story just keeps getting better and better! nice job!

Wow!! i cant w8 to see the next part of this story!! nice job!!

Great work, Lu Xun

I love your writing <33

great as always , and the song

Jim must had a tough life when he grew up.

Sounds interesting. Keep doing the stories. They're great.

Just passing by to say thanks to each and everyone of you (; and to say that I'll write a new chapter once I get home (I'm in the other house where there's no computer and writing from my iPhone is just wrong hahaha look forward to it!