On a note, I feel extremely strong about this world. Although it is not disney, TWEWY wasn't disney not final fantasy but it still made it in. I think you should think about the theme of this world, and then write back. It'd be beautiful. But this is just my opinion! Also, this is only 1/3 of the script.
(Sora, Donald and Goofy arrive in the middle of a bustling English city. The year is 1912. Many people are standing on the edge of a giant platform to gawk at a huge ship.)
Sora: Wow! Look at THAT!
Donald: Sora, I don't think there are any heartl-
(Sora begins to run towards the crowd)
Sora: Come on!
(Goofy shrugs, and runs after Sora. Donald sighs, and begins to walk in their direction. Cue "Suthampton Theme" from Titanic. (link is here: (listen to it while you read the rest) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4Lx9tTq7vE ) The camera pans to the ship, and the words "The Ship of Dreams" explode onto the screen. The sceen fades out.)
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(Sora stands on the edge of the platform, waving slowly and smiling at the people aboard.)
Sora: So what if there aren't any Heartless here? That key Merlin was talking about could be.
Donald: (Crossing his arms) You just want to ride the ship!
Sora: Putting his hands behind his head, smiling) Maybe.
Donald: No!
Sora: Aw, come on! Why not!
Donald: No! (Crosses his arms and smugly looks away with his eyes closed) Hmph!
Sora: Come on, Goofy!
Goofy: Shucks, okay!
(Both walk out of view, Donald opens his eyes)
Donald: Hey! (Runs after them, screen fades to black.)
Gameplay:
You are now in the middle of a crowded city. Use flowmotion to kick off of the walls, to get past the large crowd of people. You will notice by a huge platform that there is a Save point and Moogle next to it. Use these if you wish, then run to the top of the platform, to talk to the man by the door of the ship.
Scene:
Sora: Hey there!
Ticket Collector: Yes? What can I do for you?
Sora: How much are tickets?
Ticket Collector: 3,000.
(Sora, Donald, and Goofy jump back startled)
Sora: 3,000!? For the THREE of us!?
Ticket Collector: (Crossing his arms) Per passenger, sir. This is the Titanic! The most luxurious ship in the world. Surely you knew?
Sora: R-right.. We'll be right back!
Donald: Sora? How will we get the money?
(Sora turns around)
Sora: (hushed) I've got a plan! Maybe Merlin will make us tickets will a spell or something!
Goofy: Are ya sure that's a good idea, Sora?
(Sora begins to think, then just runs off. Donald and Goofy stay there.)
Donald: (Looking forward) This is what I was talking about.
(Fade out)
Gameplay:
After you get the tickets from Merlin, give them to the ticket collector. Once you choose to step aboard, a cutscene will play.
Analysis of the rest of the world (Opinions?)
After Sora boards the ship, the scene plays where Jack wins his tickets, and runs to the ship to step aboard as well. The screen fades out, and opens with Donald, Goofy, and Sora in their second class suite. Donald is sitting on his bed, Goofy is napping, and Sora is watching the ocean outside. They agree to go look around, and eventually pass Rose when she is on her way to jump of the ship. Sora and the gang run after her, all the commotion causes Jack to run after them. After a long talk with Rose, she agrees to step down. After the talk with Cal and the guards, Jack thanks Sora. He tells him that he believes Sora's heart is very strong, and that it actually influenced Rose. He admits he is quite worried about her, and requests that they help keep an eye on her to make sure she's okay. After a few events which I haven't came up with, Sora talks to Rose when she says she doesn't want to see Jack anymore. He talks her into seeing him again, and she agrees to. They walk to the starboard of the ship together, and Sora stands behind a box, giving her a thumbs up. (Cue "Rose Theme" from Titanic. (Link is here:
) listen while you read.)
Scene:
Rose: I changed my mind.. Fabrizio said you may be up here...
Jack: Shhhh. Come 'ere.
Rose: (Smiling, walks over to him.) Sora-
Jack: Take my hand (She does.) And step onto the railing.
Rose: Jack...
(Jack steps up too): Do you trust me?
Rose: Yes.
(He lifts her arms outward, as if they are flying.)
Jack: Open your eyes..
Rose: Jack... I'm. I'm flying!
(Meanwhile, where Sora is hidden)
Sora: (Laughs quietly, and smiles.) I miss Kairi.
Donald: We'll see her again soon.
Sora: Yeah. I think our work is done here.
(They walk away, while Jack and Rose stand where they were before, not noticing. Deeply immersed in each other.)
PART 2:
Much later in the game, the gummi ship directs Sora to the Titanic on autopilot. When they disembark, they realize they are in the basement of the ship. It is flooded, and he sees a group of people standing near the door, crying and banging on the door trying to get out. Sora runs towards the crowd.
Sora: What's going on!?
Jack: Sora! You came!
Sora: Why won't they let you leave?! The basement is flooding! Everyone'll drown!
Tommy: If only they cared!
Sora: (Grabbing cell doors) What're you doing! Everyone in here is in danger!
Officer: Step away, sir! This door is LOCKED!
(Sora looks at donald, and donald nods.)
Sora: Not for long! (He points his key at the door, and unlocks it. The people run out.)
Rose: Sora, t-thank you!
Sora: It was nothing! Come on, we gotta get onto the deck!
Jack: Right! Come on!
Rest of the Story:
Sora, Donald, Goofy, Jack, Rose, Fabrizio, and Tommy run to the deck. Sora notices a hooded figure behind him, beckoning. The three stay, and tell the others to go. The hooded figure walks toward Sora, and tells him that his TRUE friends are in trouble. And who shall be saved? Sora asks what he's talking about, but the figure fades into darkness. Sora tries to run towards Rose and the others, but the ship tips foward and Sora, Donald, and Goofy fall backard and hit their heads. The scene fades out, and opens where Jack dies. He tells her never to give up. Just like the movie. It then later shows her blowing the whistle, and surviving. When Sora, and the others wake up, they are in the Gummi Ship. The titanic had sank.
On a note, I feel extremely strong about this world. Although it is not disney, TWEWY wasn't disney not final fantasy but it still made it in. I think you should think about the theme of this world, and then write back. It'd be beautiful.
But this is just my opinion! Also, this is only 1/3 of the script.
(Sora, Donald and Goofy arrive in the middle of a bustling English city. The year is 1912. Many people are standing on the edge of a giant platform to gawk at a huge ship.)
Sora: Wow! Look at THAT!
Donald: Sora, I don't think there are any heartl-
(Sora begins to run towards the crowd)
Sora: Come on!
(Goofy shrugs, and runs after Sora. Donald sighs, and begins to walk in their direction. Cue "Suthampton Theme" from Titanic. (link is here: (listen to it while you read the rest) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D4Lx9tTq7vE ) The camera pans to the ship, and the words "The Ship of Dreams" explode onto the screen. The sceen fades out.)
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(Sora stands on the edge of the platform, waving slowly and smiling at the people aboard.)
Sora: So what if there aren't any Heartless here? That key Merlin was talking about could be.
Donald: (Crossing his arms) You just want to ride the ship!
Sora: Putting his hands behind his head, smiling) Maybe.
Donald: No!
Sora: Aw, come on! Why not!
Donald: No! (Crosses his arms and smugly looks away with his eyes closed) Hmph!
Sora: Come on, Goofy!
Goofy: Shucks, okay!
(Both walk out of view, Donald opens his eyes)
Donald: Hey! (Runs after them, screen fades to black.)
Gameplay:
You are now in the middle of a crowded city. Use flowmotion to kick off of the walls, to get past the large crowd of people. You will notice by a huge platform that there is a Save point and Moogle next to it. Use these if you wish, then run to the top of the platform, to talk to the man by the door of the ship.
Scene:
Sora: Hey there!
Ticket Collector: Yes? What can I do for you?
Sora: How much are tickets?
Ticket Collector: 3,000.
(Sora, Donald, and Goofy jump back startled)
Sora: 3,000!? For the THREE of us!?
Ticket Collector: (Crossing his arms) Per passenger, sir. This is the Titanic! The most luxurious ship in the world. Surely you knew?
Sora: R-right.. We'll be right back!
Donald: Sora? How will we get the money?
(Sora turns around)
Sora: (hushed) I've got a plan! Maybe Merlin will make us tickets will a spell or something!
Goofy: Are ya sure that's a good idea, Sora?
(Sora begins to think, then just runs off. Donald and Goofy stay there.)
Donald: (Looking forward) This is what I was talking about.
(Fade out)
Gameplay:
After you get the tickets from Merlin, give them to the ticket collector. Once you choose to step aboard, a cutscene will play.
Analysis of the rest of the world (Opinions?)
After Sora boards the ship, the scene plays where Jack wins his tickets, and runs to the ship to step aboard as well. The screen fades out, and opens with Donald, Goofy, and Sora in their second class suite. Donald is sitting on his bed, Goofy is napping, and Sora is watching the ocean outside. They agree to go look around, and eventually pass Rose when she is on her way to jump of the ship. Sora and the gang run after her, all the commotion causes Jack to run after them. After a long talk with Rose, she agrees to step down. After the talk with Cal and the guards, Jack thanks Sora. He tells him that he believes Sora's heart is very strong, and that it actually influenced Rose. He admits he is quite worried about her, and requests that they help keep an eye on her to make sure she's okay. After a few events which I haven't came up with, Sora talks to Rose when she says she doesn't want to see Jack anymore. He talks her into seeing him again, and she agrees to. They walk to the starboard of the ship together, and Sora stands behind a box, giving her a thumbs up. (Cue "Rose Theme" from Titanic. (Link is here:
Scene:
Rose: I changed my mind.. Fabrizio said you may be up here...
Jack: Shhhh. Come 'ere.
Rose: (Smiling, walks over to him.) Sora-
Jack: Take my hand (She does.) And step onto the railing.
Rose: Jack...
(Jack steps up too): Do you trust me?
Rose: Yes.
(He lifts her arms outward, as if they are flying.)
Jack: Open your eyes..
Rose: Jack... I'm. I'm flying!
(Meanwhile, where Sora is hidden)
Sora: (Laughs quietly, and smiles.) I miss Kairi.
Donald: We'll see her again soon.
Sora: Yeah. I think our work is done here.
(They walk away, while Jack and Rose stand where they were before, not noticing. Deeply immersed in each other.)
PART 2:
Much later in the game, the gummi ship directs Sora to the Titanic on autopilot. When they disembark, they realize they are in the basement of the ship. It is flooded, and he sees a group of people standing near the door, crying and banging on the door trying to get out. Sora runs towards the crowd.
Sora: What's going on!?
Jack: Sora! You came!
Sora: Why won't they let you leave?! The basement is flooding! Everyone'll drown!
Tommy: If only they cared!
Sora: (Grabbing cell doors) What're you doing! Everyone in here is in danger!
Officer: Step away, sir! This door is LOCKED!
(Sora looks at donald, and donald nods.)
Sora: Not for long! (He points his key at the door, and unlocks it. The people run out.)
Rose: Sora, t-thank you!
Sora: It was nothing! Come on, we gotta get onto the deck!
Jack: Right! Come on!
Rest of the Story:
Sora, Donald, Goofy, Jack, Rose, Fabrizio, and Tommy run to the deck. Sora notices a hooded figure behind him, beckoning. The three stay, and tell the others to go. The hooded figure walks toward Sora, and tells him that his TRUE friends are in trouble. And who shall be saved? Sora asks what he's talking about, but the figure fades into darkness. Sora tries to run towards Rose and the others, but the ship tips foward and Sora, Donald, and Goofy fall backard and hit their heads. The scene fades out, and opens where Jack dies. He tells her never to give up. Just like the movie. It then later shows her blowing the whistle, and surviving. When Sora, and the others wake up, they are in the Gummi Ship. The titanic had sank.