Hey guys. This is just a draft of a possible idea for a story I just thought of. I'm also writing this from my iPhone so sorry for any mistake. Please reply with what you think so that I may consider writing more about this. Thanks!
I might edit and make it better once I get my new laptop
The Tragic Kingdom - (Small) Prologue
In a Kingdom named Fyluna, peace was kept for more than 50 years. There had only been one war, which happened when it was first built. Two friends named Jiin Hilton and Kevin Klaytob were the ones who decided to create that kingdom.
However, once it was finished, one of them had to become the King. But things like this never end peacefully. Both of them desired the throne, and civil war seemed inevitable. The war lasted for many years, and only finished when Kevin died of a serious illness.
Jiin was already an old man by that time. He had a son and a daughter, but even so, he felt like no one cared about him. He regretted everything now-- the war, his best friend's death-- even though he clearly knew nothing could change the past.
Some years later, he died from the same illness that had taken his best friend away from this world. A nation, named Retart, ruled by Reynald II, ended up discovering about the King's death, and saw this as an opportunity of conquering another territory. The kingdom was going through chaotic times since they lost their King. A spy managed to tell Jorge, Jiin's son, about the plan of attacking the Kingdom.
But it might had been too late. They prepared a plan to at least defend themselves from the enemy's massive attack. But in the end, they lost the war, and were forced to leave their home. Rafaella, Jorge's sister, together with him, promised to get their kingdom back, and kill every single person from that terrible nation, which took advantage from them during the worst moment of their lives.
Hey guys. This is just a draft of a possible idea for a story I just thought of. I'm also writing this from my iPhone so sorry for any mistake. Please reply with what you think so that I may consider writing more about this. Thanks!
I might edit and make it better once I get my new laptop
The Tragic Kingdom - (Small) Prologue
In a Kingdom named Fyluna, peace was kept for more than 50 years. There had only been one war, which happened when it was first built. Two friends named Jiin Hilton and Kevin Klaytob were the ones who decided to create that kingdom.
However, once it was finished, one of them had to become the King. But things like this never end peacefully. Both of them desired the throne, and civil war seemed inevitable. The war lasted for many years, and only finished when Kevin died of a serious illness.
Jiin was already an old man by that time. He had a son and a daughter, but even so, he felt like no one cared about him. He regretted everything now-- the war, his best friend's death-- even though he clearly knew nothing could change the past.
Some years later, he died from the same illness that had taken his best friend away from this world. A nation, named Retart, ruled by Reynald II, ended up discovering about the King's death, and saw this as an opportunity of conquering another territory. The kingdom was going through chaotic times since they lost their King. A spy managed to tell Jorge, Jiin's son, about the plan of attacking the Kingdom.
But it might had been too late. They prepared a plan to at least defend themselves from the enemy's massive attack. But in the end, they lost the war, and were forced to leave their home. Rafaella, Jorge's sister, together with him, promised to get their kingdom back, and kill every single person from that terrible nation, which took advantage from them during the worst moment of their lives.