This roleplay is being hosted by myself and Superior Kunivas.

 

This is the sign-up thread (and yes, we are still accepting new players!), whereas the actual RP thread is here: http://kh13.com/forum/topic/93574-ashes-of-a-fallen-empire-rp/ .  Note: we are currently only accepting new players for the Seraphim Order or New Empire.

 

A year has passed since the fall of the Korbenic Empire.  A war had been waged between the empire and its rebels, promoted by surrounding territories free from the empire’s reign.  The late emperor, Korben, sought to create a world filled with law, rule, and justice, but at the cost of so many lives.  Those deemed inferior were slaughtered or experimented upon, and magic by birth was considered a curse rather than a blessing.  Elves and those possessing magic were raided and slaughtered, or brought into the imperial labs for experimentation.  The world had already been faltering, and it only plummeted further at the development of tanzynite: a chemical substance produced by imperial labs that had the power to sustain one’s life, augment their abilities or create them, or, in some cases of prolonged use, kill.  The dawn of the Korbenic Era was one filled with oppression, blood, and poverty; the world cried for this tyrant to reach his demise, a calling to which was answered.

 

Eclaire Tonnerre, ex-general of the Empire, organized and orchestrated the Order of Lux to battle the Korbenic Empire.  She was a brave warrior who fought for true peace and justice, wishing to recreate the government into a republic rather than an empire.  Unfortunately her army was weakened during the war, and traitors lived within her midst that she was not privy to.  Now she resides with a smaller group than before, her kingdom and order being taken over a rebellion follower, Yevgeni Malachite.  While the empire had indeed fallen, a new world power came to take its place.  Oryx, a god of power, seized the Korbenic Empire and sits upon what once was Korben’s throne, his rule hardly any better than that of the late empire.  The war, however, has left the world in ashes, a state worse than it had been before.  Langerdon, a city once flourished, now is trying to recover from the war that devastated them a year ago, though they are not succeeding well.

You may choose a character from either the New Empire or Yevgeni’s rebellion called The Seraphim Order.  There are many races available for you to choose from, though I request that no new divine deities are created to prevent power-creep from occurring.  Your world is a dying one filled with chaos after a devastating war, and, while technology was once at its prime in this futuristic era, very little of it is left in working order after the damage that had been done.

 

1: No Godmodding/Meta-Gaming.  This includes controlling another person’s character under ANY circumstances.

2: All KH13 RPing rules are in effect here.

3: There is no character limit, but I would request that you only take as many characters that you feel you can properly handle.

4: If any rules are broken, you will be given a warning.  Should you break them again, and under the same violation, you will be asked to leave the RP.

5: Feel free to contribute to the story. This is an RP, after all. : )  However, I would ask that you do not dominate the entire plot or massively change the direction in which all players are going without prior approval.  A good example of this would be to make a character use unearthly powers to just terrorize and distract all characters, making their initial goals impossible.  This is destructive behavior, and in doing so I will issue you a warning.  There’s a difference between contributing to a plot and dominating one.

6: Keep everything PG-13, including violence, romance, language, and all that good stuff.  This includes themes as well as explicit content.  If it’s something that you won’t see in a PG-13 movie because it’s considered inappropriate in content or visualization, don’t do it.

7: For non-human races, you can pick practically anything you please.  Be creative!  However, please be mindful of over-powered characters.  I’m no longer accepting any new divine deities, as we already have plenty.

8: You may choose from the tanzynite list provided should your character desire them.  However, you may request custom tanzynites be made via PM and I shall evaluate them.

9: Auto-hitting and mass slaughter are highly restricted here.  Auto-hitting is when your character lands a strike in combat without prior approval from the other player or RP host.  Mass slaughter cannot be done on a whim, only if asked for and we shall evaluate.
To ensure that you’ve read the rules, please state your favorite color below your character sheet.

10: For those of you who will be continuing with the same characters from Tainted Blood, please copy-paste your character sheet with a revised biography reflecting what happened over the past year, as well as their role in Tainted Blood.  I will be more lenient toward existing characters pertaining weapon limits, magic, et cetera, but any new characters must strictly abide by the rules.

To show that you've read the rules, please state your favorite color below your character sheet.

 

Tanzynite options (instigator):

 

Electro Bolt: "Feel like the Thunder God himself! Electro Bolt will let you fire off bolts of Electricity at will! Warning: Water and Lightning don't mix." With this chemical compound, you can fire Electricity/Lightning from your hands, be it in bursts, a constant stream or a simple jolt. Manifestation: Blue Energy courses through the users veins, along with Electricity coursing around the users body occasionally on its own or at the will of the user.

 

Satan's Touch: "Feel the heat! Satan's Touch will cause you to be able to wreathe whatever you want in Flames! Warning: Fire spreads." This chemical compound will allow you to light anything on fire with Fireballs, Flamethrowing, Fire Breath and allows you to heat anything you touch with your Body Heat. Manifestation: Severe burns on the user's body along with a visible, pulsing and glowing orange heat underneath the body of the user, Irises glow Orange too and Fire seems to be burning inside, ready to be unleashed.

 

Sting of Winter: "Feel the chill in your bones! Sting of Winter gives you Icy Powers to freeze your enemies! Multi-Purpose Capabilities Guaranteed." This chemical compound grants the ability to freeze your enemies, water and other objects. It can also be shaped into Armour and Icy Spikes can be extended from your hands to make yourself a Cryo-Weapon. Manifestation: Permafrost covers body, with the hands having Ice Burns along with small Icicles/Spikes protruding from the skin (Yes, they have blood in them) which can be extended. An Icy Mist emanates from the user and when Armoured and/or using the Icicles as weapons, more ice and burns cover the user.

 

Flash Flood: "Go with the flow! Flash Flood can wash away your enemies! Warning: Water's stronger than you may think." This chemical compound allows you to assail your enemies with Waves of Water to push them away, High-Pressure Jets to wear away at them, mildly telekinetically suspended in the air Bubbles filled with water that can either explode to shower opposition or encase opponents in it to drown them, wear down their limbs or be exploded out of them to weaken and surprise them. Manifestation: Water courses and drips down the users hands but it can be contained around the hands and manipulated for effect, mutations similar to suction cups and barnacles on an Octopus form on the hands and condensation emits from their body.

 

Cyclonic Rush: "Stand firm against the breeze! Cyclonic Rush will blow your enemies away! Warning: Wind does more than push." This chemical compound will let you blow away enemies with Gusts of Wind. It can also allow formation of Mini-Cyclones or Tornadoes to cause major damage. You can also breathe strong air currents from your mouth that can be sustained as long as you can exhale and all wind effects can cause Wind Erosion on a quickened scale, which is particularly painful to enemies. Manifestation: Wind currents circulate around users arms and hands while veins pulse with White Energy, clothing and hair is in a constant Windswept effect due to internal winds blowing.

 

Telekinesis: "Steel your mind! Telekinesis is as blunt as it gets, allowing you to pick up and throw objects with your mind!" This chemical compound allows you to use the Psychic Energy/Potential in your mind to use Psychokinesis/Telekinesis to levitate and throw objects at whim. However, it can also be used to assault the minds of Weak-Willed people, incapacitating them. You can also read minds, but to a limited extent. Manifestation: The force used is visible, but no other discernible effect is present externally on the user. Internally, brainwaves and MRI Readings are radically different from a normal brain.

 

Blinding Light: "Shine amongst the stars! Blinding Light gives you control over the Light to blind your enemies! Warning: It can also burn." This chemical compound allows you to control the Light Element of the Universe to blind, scorch or otherwise impede your enemies with what basically amounts to Pure Energy. Burning Beams can be fired straight from the hands when the power is charged up. Manifestation: Pure Energy courses through the users veins, pulsating at all times. The users hands are crackling with power while the scorching effects of the Light leave blackened burns on the some parts of the skin and visible cracks and tears in the arms produce light as the body attempts to contain it all within.

 

Smothering Darkness: "Cast your enemies into the Shadows! Smothering Darkness lets you control the Darkness and Shadows to assault your enemies! Warning: Power corrupts." This chemical compound allows you to control the Darkness Element of the Universe to smother, corrupt, hurt or otherwise make your opponent suffer with the Shadows themselves or the literal Darkness that resides in everything, including yourself. Shadow Orbs can be created and thrown to explode on impact when the power is charged up. Manifestation: Dark Purple Energy courses through the users veins, softly and slowly pulsating at all times. The users hands are swathed in Dark Mist while the corrupting effects darken the skin on the hands and arms and the skin is flaking off while Dark Tendrils are latching to the skin like parasites. Visible cracks and tears in the arms produce Darkness as the body attempts to contain it all within.

 

Pack-A-Punch: "Feel the power coursing through your muscles! Pack-A-Punch allows you to push boulders and punch walls! Warning: Don't strain yourself." This chemical compound increases your strength greatly, increasing Muscle Mass to 4x their normal mass, allowing for harder punches and kicks along with the ability to lift up heavy objects and even throw them. Manifestation: Bigger, evenly distributed muscles throughout the body, all veins are more pronounced and occasionally a green, glowing fluid flows through them.

 

Rocky Road: "Make the Earth tremble at your step! Rocky Road allows you to shake up the place and throw rocks! Warning: Rocks are hard." This chemical compound allows you to control the Earth Elements to shake the ground with Earthquakes, raise Rock Pillars, throw Rocks, split the ground open and toughen yourself up with Earthy Armour. Manifestation: Hands and forearms are entirely covered in a thick rock cover but still have full mobility, small stones form on the upper arm and the users voice becomes Earthy.

 

 

Tanzynite tonics:

 

Scamper Speed: This Tonic allows the user to run 2x faster than the average person, also allowing them to run for longer, but the user would be at risk of overheating like a Cheetah if they run for too long. Has no manifestation.

 

Chameleon: This Tonic allows the user to become invisible to the naked eye when they stand still for a period of time. It activates after 5 seconds of standing still. It cannot be used when moving. Manifestation is quite evident.

 

Tough Guy/Girl: This Tonic toughens the user up, allowing them to soak up a more damage than a normal person before weakening, dying etc. Has no manifestation.

 

Marksman: This Tonic increases the users Hand-Eye Co-ordination, allowing them to aim firearms better and more effectively. Has no manifestation.

 

Brains and Brains: This Tonic increases the users intelligence and their ability to tinker with things. Has no manifestation.

 

Houdini: This Tonic allows the user to teleport at will. Manifestation: Only appears when teleporting, all veins and irises turn red before the user disappears in a flurry of Rose Petals and Red Mist.

 

Enduring Bolt: This Tonic boosts the stamina of the user, allowing them to run longer, fight longer and exercise longer. Has no manifestation.

 

Night Piercer: This Tonic allows the user to see in the Dark of Night more effectively, works as organic Night Vision Goggles. Manifestation: Eyes glow Night Vision Green when active.

 

Animal Instinct: This Tonic allows the user to sense nearby organics, regardless of species unless they are Demons or Angels. Has no manifestation.

 

Gymnastic Expert: This Tonic grants the user enhanced flexibility and mobility, allowing them to move more fluidly, flip and slink into tight spaces. Has no manifestation.

 

Experimental Tanzynite (not for everyone--only one each available, and must receive prior approval before use):

 

 

Experimental Strength Compound - Codename "Venom": This Instigator-Class Chemical was in development by order of the Emperor himself as he wanted Super-Human enforcers with the strength to topple any opposition. It derives partially from the Pack-A-Punch Chemical in concept but strength would be increased to a far greater level than that chemical can offer and makes the subject far more bulky, but requires a Injector System/Harness mounted to the subject to keep the chemical flowing and in effect. It is also far more addictive than average compounds, with the withdrawal symptoms often being so severe that they result in death. Initial tests on human subjects often resulted in death, be it from Cardiac Arrest or their Hearts flat out exploding from the pressure and rush of bodily chemicals and the chemical itself. It was only after one Subject survived and subsequently broke out that they had enough results to make a stable compound. However, the escapee stole all research notes and all samples of the fluid, learned how to produce more and perfect it and has since sold it in the Black Market in the Criminal Underworld. Manifestation: Users are often Seven-Feet Tall, with large muscles, facial scarring, heavily pronounced veins and green glowing fluid frequently flowing through them. Behaviour is often far more aggressive but intelligence is not dampened.

 

Experimental Strength Compound - Codename "TN-1" (Taken by Scrap's planned character backstory.) : This Instigator-Class Chemical is currently in the testing phases under the eye of the man who escaped Venom Testing with the compound and is currently trying to improve it and remove its addictive qualities while at the same time creating a "Super-Venom". initial tests made have shown promise, a more permanent transformation of grotesque proportions, with subjects growing to 10 Feet in height, their muscles expanding massively and their strength great enough to blast through a platoon of enemies while shrugging off bullets. As it is in testing phases, there are problems. While the subject is bulletproof and insanely strong, they are not invincible as the full effect takes 10 minutes or more to take effect and usage damages the Memory Centres of the Brain, causing Memory Loss and Brain Damage. Intelligence is dampened as the user roars and is reduced to Hulk Speak and is very single minded, but usually makes up for it in brute strength and it does not require the Harness from Venom. Manifestation: Gargantuan Muscle Growth, greatly pronounced veins with the same green glowing fluid flowing, covered in a green and black mist, eyes glow white-green and temperament is greatly compromised.

 

Experimental DNA Bonding Compound - Demonic DNA - Codename: "Devil's Blood" (Taken by Mystics Apprentice.): In an attempt to harness the great power Elder Demons, or "Devils" as they are nicknamed, the Emperor captured an Elder Demon and took a sample of its DNA to his scientists to bond it to subjects in order to give his Guards more power, maybe even himself if successful. The bonding process was initially a disaster, Subjects being literally torn apart as the Devil Cells destroyed their Cells, making it impossible to create a Viable Life Form. However, in a last gambit, they attempted to create another cell to stabilize the Devil Cell into co-operating with the Subject's Cells and merging with them, called "GENOCELL". This artificial cell was mixed into the compound and injected into their last subjects, creating what they wanted, giving the Subjects the Powers, physiology and ability of the Elder Demons, slightly filtered down due to the Artificial Hybrid nature. Unfortunately, only one was left and they escaped due to an oversight that the Survivor has since corrected: GENOCELL was hastily made and thus was not perfected and eventually deteriorated, leaving many of them to be torn apart like the rest, while the survivor was able to fix the Artificial Cell and survive in the Criminal Underworld as a Super-Villain alongside many others, including the Venom Survivor. Manifestation: Demonic Wings, Talons, Demonic Energy crackles unstably and their power is but a shadow of a True Elder Demon. Their skin is scaly, red and their eyes completely yellow and glowing, small horns protrude from their head.

 

 

Character sheet:
Name:


Gender:


Age:


Side:

Race:


Appearance:


Weapon (limit of two):


Tanzynite tonics (limit of three):


Tanzynite Instigators (limit of three--experimental Tanzynite has a limitation of one, and only with prior approval):


Race abilities (nothing too great or powerful, please: basic enhancements preferable):

Magic (if any--I’m not providing any strict limitations, but please don’t have every possible magic available.  If I feel your choices are too strong I may ask you to reduce them):


Personality:


Backstory:

 

World map:

 

New Empire side:

Leader is Oryx (Male Ancient Demon God)

Yltriss Hyulli (Female Elf Tanzynite User)

Dex Marthur (Male Human host to Oryx)

Tiriel (immortal Female Fallen Archangel)

Zane (Male Zanzia)

Zack (Male Zanzia) (KIA)

Kinzoku (Female, Human? Metal Mage)

Isaac Farbenion (Male Human Tanzynite User)

Indy Caelum (Male Human Tanzynite User)

 

 

Rebellion (The Seraphim Order) side:

Leader is Yevgeni Malachite or Yev (Male Human/Angel Tanzynite user with Angelic Magic)

Vortludo Prince (Male Human Magical Artifact Wielder)

Cobica Quinn (Immortal Male Demon/Angel Hybrid)

Ava Peltiere (Female Human Tanzynite user)

Yagyu (Female Human Ninja Mage)

Jynn Venas (Male Human Mage)

Kaspar Ulrich (Male Human Mage/Necromancer)

 

Messiah (Eclaire's small group) side:

Leader is Eclaire Tonnerre (Female Human/Succubus Mage)

Ciriel (Female Fallen Angel Tanzynite user)

Ryonne Neyelmnik (Male Human Tanzynite user/Divine Swordsman)

Doctor Julius Verstand or The Doctor (Male Human Monstrumologist)

Mikhail Drak (Male Witcher)

Gabriel Stross or The mute or Omega (Male Human Mechanical lord)

Jeremy Tobias Hunter (Male Human/Angel)

Rika Hunter or Chrysalis (Female Human Experimental Tanzynite User/Divine Warrior)

Victoria du L'ete or the Goddess of Victory (Immortal Female Minor Goddess)

Sasha Valentine (Female Augmented Human)

Jadis Sorein (Male Elf Mage)

Maxis or Prime (Male? Tenno Ancient Ninja Warrior)

Fiora Tonnerre (Female Human Mage)

Ace (Male Human Razgriz Air Command Squadron)

Edge (Female Human Razgriz Air Command Squadron)

Bladedancer (Male Human Razgriz Air Command Squadron)

Reaper (Male Human Razgriz Air Command Squadron)

Allitt Caelum (Female Human Tanzynite User)

Zion de Wynter or Goddess of Light (immortal Female Goddess)

 

 

Criminal Underworld side:

Serves under Oryx (Male Ancient Demon God)

Cyler (Male Human Tanzynite User)

Die (Male Human Tanzynite user & Leader of the crow's eyes gang)

Scherp (Male Human Tanzynite user & member of the crow's eyes gang)

Lan (Male Human Tanzynite user & member of the crow's eyes gang)

Heksen (Male Human Tanzynite user & member of the crow's eyes gang)

Naja (Female Human Tanzynite user & member of the crow's eyes gang)

Kol (Female Human Tanzynite user & member of the crow's eyes gang)

Dark Heart (Female Zanzia 2nd Gen) 

Sahail (Female Human Gunslinger Mage)

 

Neutral side:

No Leader

Rufus Contralto or Captain (Male Human Mage)

Neena Mors (Female Elf Combat Mage)

Henry Hansees (Male Human Dread Lord or dreadnaught)

Arian Vondrin or the gust (Male Human & part of Orient Trading)

Nalia Gallagher (Female Human & part of Orient Trading)

Deuce Gallagher (Male Human & part of Orient Trading)

Garret Reuental or Grim (Male resurrected Human & part of Orient Trading)


Dorian Bittenfeld or Gray (Male Cursed Human & part of Orient Trading)

Johathan Heaton or ghost doctor (Male Human & part of Orient Trading)

Ariana Cabret (Female Human Experimental Tanzynite user)

Keyes (Male Tenno)

Rei or Blue Heart (Female Zanzia 1st Gen)

Edited March 24, 20169 yr by Mystics Apprentice

Yeah I just up and misunderstood the state of the assault, my bad. My posts c should just be considered an hour 8n the future, easier.

 

Sigh. I need more days off

Arya Stark plz

heh, well, she was the main Stark I was considering for this, so I guess Arya it is. I'll start work on a character sheet.

So here are Tolan's main theme, since I forgot to add them.

 

 

Picks up a lot by the end. Mostly when he pulls out his sword.

 

 

And Mary too.

 

 

 

 

 

 

This is their main themes, not their battle themes...but it works just the same I guess.

I was actually kind of thinking the same thing.  I mean, I don't want to say that Jynn *couldn't* learn of this information, but Messiah has been kept a secret for over a year and it's unlikely that its name is even breathed (unless THEY have an information leak, which they don't).  I also am a little miffed that he sensed darkness within Yevgeni.  He's very discreet about his tampering with necromancy, and he's also very secretive about the attacks on imperials.  If he does do it for the Order he claims it was a necessity or in error, and if he doesn't either he or a small secret group of troops does it.  I sincerely don't think Jynn could know that Yevgeni is up to anything ill; it is far from common knowledge. I don't know; I don't want to ask KHDude to edit the post, but at the same time the amount of knowledge that Jynn has is rather unfathomable and kind of disrupts things.

Im fine with editing. If you feel that it is disrupting things, then I'll lessen the amount of Intel Jynn receives. Now looking back at my posts, I'm starting to feel the same.

Character sheet:

Name:
 Nymeria "Nym" Red

Gender:
 Female

Age:
 14

Side: Neutral (sides with her brother, Stark)

Race:
 Werewolf

Appearance:
 https://www.theuntappedsource.com/image.php?id=33963

http://orig09.deviantart.net/3469/f/2010/304/3/d/shadowstep___prelim_f_worgen_by_frisket17-d31w8w0.jpg

Weapon (limit of two): Adamantine sword; http://orig14.deviantart.net/47a0/f/2012/290/4/7/concept_art___arya_stark_by_pardoart-d5i3jli.jpg

Wrist blaster; http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/13/133675/2586181-wrist_blaster_03.jpg


Tanzynite tonics (limit of three):
 None

Tanzynite Instigators (limit of three--experimental Tanzynite has a limitation of one, and only with prior approval):
 None

Race abilities (nothing too great or powerful, please: basic enhancements preferable): Werewolf transformation. Enhanced strength, speed, senses, and durability. While not as physical powerful as Stark, Nym retains her mind in wolf form, allowing her to use tactics and weapons. While she prefers using her claws and fangs, her Adamantine sword is excellent for cutting through armored opponents and the wrist blaster affords her some long range attacks.

Magic (if any--I’m not providing any strict limitations, but please don’t have every possible magic available. If I feel your choices are too strong I may ask you to reduce them):
 None.

Personality: Independent, tomboyish, loyal, vengeful, headstrong, a cold killer, and cunning.


Backstory: Stark Red's younger sister, Nym started out as a happy, energetic tomboy. But as the Empire took more and more of her people and family, she grew colder. When Stark made his escape, Nym used the chaos to track down a personal tormentor and ripped his throat out. Taking his weapons, she followed after Stark, eventually finding him and joining his band.

 

Violet

 

By the way.Just so I know I'm on the same page, I've been assuming Kaipora is where at least half of the Seraphim Order's fleet is located. Back in TB I was planning to steal the seaborne navy, and it would have been pulled off, leaving the Order with probably 50~ ships at their disposal. Retrofitted to fly, maybe 30 ships after canabbalising the heavily damaged survivors.I'd assume 15-20 of these would be at Kaipora, correct?Let me know if my train of thought is wrong, since I've labored under this assumption due to Kaipora location and significance to the Order and it's home base of Orience.

I just wanted to give you guys a quick heads up: I'm embarking on a cross-country move on January 18th and won't have a solid Internet connection until the 23rd.  I'll try to keep up as much as possible via my phone, but I apologize if my posts are short in the meantime and you may only hear from me in the evenings.

Im fine with editing. If you feel that it is disrupting things, then I'll lessen the amount of Intel Jynn receives.Now looking back at my posts, I'm starting to feel the same.

Actually, if you don't mind tweaking it a little that would be wonderful.  Sorry about that; I probably should've stated more clearly that some of this information is very confidential.  Perhaps Jynn could learn of an unknown air force that seemingly is getting in the way of the empire but doesn't know anything further, and perhaps he could be suspicious of Yevgeni's character.  Within the heart of the empire it is rumored that he had something to do with a Godolvia slaughter, so maybe he caught wind of that and is now suspicious.  Plus, Yevgeni has a cold/friendly demeanor about him, but then again he's always been that way even when he was a straight-up protagonist. : P

 

Thanks again, and sorry for the inconvenience.

 

Character sheet:Name:
 Nymeria "Nym" RedGender:
 FemaleAge:
 14Side: Neutral (sides with her brother, Stark)Race:
 WerewolfAppearance:
 https://www.theuntappedsource.com/image.php?id=33963http://orig09.deviantart.net/3469/f/2010/304/3/d/shadowstep___prelim_f_worgen_by_frisket17-d31w8w0.jpgWeapon (limit of two): Adamantine sword; http://orig14.deviantart.net/47a0/f/2012/290/4/7/concept_art___arya_stark_by_pardoart-d5i3jli.jpgWrist blaster; http://static.comicvine.com/uploads/original/13/133675/2586181-wrist_blaster_03.jpg
Tanzynite tonics (limit of three):
 NoneTanzynite Instigators (limit of three--experimental Tanzynite has a limitation of one, and only with prior approval):
 NoneRace abilities (nothing too great or powerful, please: basic enhancements preferable): Werewolf transformation. Enhanced strength, speed, senses, and durability. While not as physical powerful as Stark, Nym retains her mind in wolf form, allowing her to use tactics and weapons. While she prefers using her claws and fangs, her Adamantine sword is excellent for cutting through armored opponents and the wrist blaster affords her some long range attacks.Magic (if any--I’m not providing any strict limitations, but please don’t have every possible magic available. If I feel your choices are too strong I may ask you to reduce them):
 None.Personality: Independent, tomboyish, loyal, vengeful, headstrong, a cold killer, and cunning.
Backstory: Stark Red's younger sister, Nym started out as a happy, energetic tomboy. But as the Empire took more and more of her people and family, she grew colder. When Stark made his escape, Nym used the chaos to track down a personal tormentor and ripped his throat out. Taking his weapons, she followed after Stark, eventually finding him and joining his band.Violet

Accepted!

 

By the way.Just so I know I'm on the same page, I've been assuming Kaipora is where at least half of the Seraphim Order's fleet is located. Back in TB I was planning to steal the seaborne navy, and it would have been pulled off, leaving the Order with probably 50~ ships at their disposal. Retrofitted to fly, maybe 30 ships after canabbalising the heavily damaged survivors.I'd assume 15-20 of these would be at Kaipora, correct?Let me know if my train of thought is wrong, since I've labored under this assumption due to Kaipora location and significance to the Order and it's home base of Orience.

That'd make sense, actually, and would explain why such military forces are concentrating there rather than in Hylvania.  Sounds good to me.

I just wanted to give you guys a quick heads up: I'm embarking on a cross-country move on January 18th and won't have a solid Internet connection until the 23rd.  I'll try to keep up as much as possible via my phone, but I apologize if my posts are short in the meantime and you may only hear from me in the evenings.

Actually, if you don't mind tweaking it a little that would be wonderful.  Sorry about that; I probably should've stated more clearly that some of this information is very confidential.  Perhaps Jynn could learn of an unknown air force that seemingly is getting in the way of the empire but doesn't know anything further, and perhaps he could be suspicious of Yevgeni's character.  Within the heart of the empire it is rumored that he had something to do with a Godolvia slaughter, so maybe he caught wind of that and is now suspicious.  Plus, Yevgeni has a cold/friendly demeanor about him, but then again he's always been that way even when he was a straight-up protagonist. : P

 

Thanks again, and sorry for the inconvenience.

 

Accepted!

 

That'd make sense, actually, and would explain why such military forces are concentrating there rather than in Hylvania.  Sounds good to me.

No problem! I'll make it so that Jynn can only gain intel from experience.

All changes have officially been made!

 

I have a bit of a concern regarding your latest post and Zane.  I do not think it would be very plausible for Zane to teleport and get into the ship so easily.  For one, the airship is still in the air (and moving, from what I can understand), so teleportation would be very difficult.  Second, the ship is protected by some high tech shields, so for Zane to teleport to the ship, break through the shields, and go through the roof all seems highly unlikely.  I am not sure if shields were verified in Sabre's post, but after conversing with him it seems that they were in place.  Sorry about the error.  If you wouldn't mind making it a little less possible for Zane to easily arrive on the airship that would be splendid.  Perhaps he could be trying to destroy the ship's shields instead, so he can sneak aboard later?

Well, Cobica's here, sooo..... (One more character after this and he'll be a new one. But for now!)

 

Name: Zanza Quinn

Age: Immortal, many years old.

Gender: Male

Race: Demon/Angel Hybrid, aka: Nephalem.

Side(Rebellion, Empire, Criminal Underworld): Neutral, not sure about The Order.

Appearance:

Human Form:

Regular/Calm:

Irregular/Emotional: 

 

Demon Form:

 

Angel Form:

 

Weapon(s): Yamato: His main weapon of choice in human form. The blade can be imbued with Angelic or Demonic Power, granting it a Blue or Red flowing and powerful aura respectively. Angelic provides faster attacks while Demonic provides slower, harder hitting ones.

 

Power Status(Mage, Tanzynite User, Race Power e.g: Demonic Power if a Demon): Angelic/Demonic Power.

Magic(If a Mage, can be Elemental, Illusionary, Necromancy or Summoner based, Limit of 3 Specializations):

Instigator Chemicals (If a Tanzynite User, can become one if Human and if not already one, Limit of 3.):

Tonic Chemicals(Same as above. Limit of 3.):

Experimental Compound(If a permitted user, limit of 1. Can have 1 other Instigator and 2 Tonics.): 

Race Power(If Non-Human): Being a Nephalem, Zanza has access to both Energies of the Immortal Spirits of Heaven and Hell, as well as his own powers.

Base Abilities:

• Decent Healing Factor, minor injuries are negligible while serious injuries do heal faster, thus impede him for less time and make fatal injuries harder to pull off.
• Enhanced Strength.
• Enhanced Mobility/Speed.
• Enhanced Durability.
• Heightened Senses.
• Energy Manipulation/Conduction: As well as being able to freely use both Energies in his Human State, he can channel energy from other sources to boost his power. The most viable source being other people willingly giving him power, but he can drain Electricity from Generators.
• Teleportation - Can teleport into a Dark Blue Mist short or long distances, also allowing him to Flash Step.
• Portal Creation (Using Yamato) - He can cut so fast that he can rip a hole in Dimensions to allow for transportation to wherever he wishes.
• Dimension Slash - This faster than sight cutting can cleanly cut anything, but also by utilizing the Dimension ripping properties Zanza can use numerous moves using the energy gained and manipulated from such slashing.
• Summoned Swords/Sword Illusion - Using basic energy, he can conjure Blue-Green Holographic-like Broadswords that can be summoned in great quantities or one at a time to throw them at enemies as projectiles either singular or in a volley, spin around him in a defensive motion and re-positioned into more offensive formations such as above the enemy, around the enemy or shot out away from him. They can also be summoned in a large group above enemies and throw down in a rain of swords that stay in the ground and cause significant damage. They are indeed tangible and sharp and can even be grabbed by Zanza to be used more personally. Their sizes vary from normal Sword sized to absolutely gigantic. They can be infused with Demonic or Angelic Energies to act as either a direct teleport (Angel) or a Pull/Lasso/Spear to yank opponents towards him (Demon).

Angel Powers/Angel Mode:

• Speedier Attacks - All attacks are faster and lighter, allowing for more combo opportunities but do less damage overall, as well as using Angelic Energies to do certain special attacks.
• Crowd Control - Some moves are wider range, allowing for an easier time with large groups of attackers, at least making sure to hit all of them at least once in one motion, usually.
• Teleport Dodge - Dodging at the last second allows for a Double Dodge for a tactical advantage/battlefield positioning change.
• Holy/Light-Based Powers - Includes Holy Fire, Light Pillars/Beams, Light Orbs etc.
• Angel Glide - Moving across buildings and platforms is made easier as he can thrust his arms back after a jump to propel himself forward using Angelic Energy in a Blue Stream, like Jet Plane Trails.
• Angel Trigger "Dark Ascension" - Allows full usage of his Angel Powers by transforming into a more powerful state; His Angel Form, which while dark, can make more use of his Light Powers than his normal form in Angel Mode can.

Demon Powers/Devil Mode:

• Slower Attacks - All attacks are slower but harder, allowing for maximum damage potential at the expense of speed and combo potential, as well as using Demonic Energies to do certain special attacks.
• Singular Opponent Focus - The extra damage and hard hitting nature of Demon Mode allows greater focus on single individuals, usually more powerful, tougher enemies, while sacrificing the range of Angel or even Base Mode.
• Power Dodge - Dodging at the last second grants a temporary power-up, wreathing Zanza, mainly around the arms, a red-white aura that enhances strength for a short period.
• Unholy/Dark-Based Powers - Includes Hell Fire, Darkness-Based attacks, Raw Crimson Demonic Energy etc.
• Devil Trigger "Hollow Decent" - Allows full usage of his Demon Powers by transforming into a more powerful state: His Demon Form, which is far darker, distorts his voice and allows him to make more use of his Dark Powers than his normal form in Devil Mode can.

Bio/History: Born from a Demon Father and Angel Mother, Zanza was an only child and no one was sure what to make of him, as he was a Nephalem and the union of Angel and Demon was unheard of for many millenniums. Some frowned upon it, some embraced it and others were indifferent, treating it as mundane even. Either way, he had an interesting life, having a mainly good childhood with numerous friends and a good relationship with his Parents, all before Korben's rise to Power, but not all that much longer. During his time in College, he met someone who would go on to be a very, very good friend of his and even became Blood Brothers with him. This person was Pure-Blooded Human, from Langerdon before Korben rose up, who met Zanza and gave him his Humanity through his relationship with him, preventing him from becoming Pompous...or Malevolent. This however would all change once Korben took over, with Zanza's parents immediately opposing the Dark Emperor and wishing to rebel in secret, but they were ratted out by Zanza's Blood Brother, who thought it might of helped them see that Rebellion wasn't a good idea, but it led to Zanza's Mother and Father being hunted down, with his Mother dying and his Father being Imprisoned, tortured and then killed after he literally begged for death. Prior to all of this however, his Father managed to hide Zanza away, telling him to lay low, stay away for the time being and make an impact on the world before he was found and taken.

 

Alone, betrayed and uncertain, Zanza wandered for many years, gaining power, training and contributing to history in his own way, but still felt empty and battled a Dark Side that had manifested through his Demonic and Angelic Powers that kept chipping at his Humanity, but had no luck even though he had suffered so much. When the Order of Lux formed, he initially wanted to go and join, but stopped when he saw Eclaire, a Half-Succubus and the Archangel: Tiriel, as they would more than likely shun him and send him away due to his Hybrid Nature, so he has kept neutral ever since, but will one day approach the Rebellion and accomplish what his Family never could due to his life-changing betrayal and that he was too weak...he needed more power.

 

Personality: Well-spoken, focused, sarcastic, troubled and very intelligent and forward-thinking, Zanza has developed and nurtured his mind very well, as he considers it a great weapon, possibly his greatest when his Sword can't cut it or his powers can't destroy/solve it. He uses his Katana like a Cane when out-of-combat or keeps it fastened to his waist. He is capable of making a joke and snarking a little while having a good sense of humor, so they're not crap and he can lighten the mood if need be, unless he needs to be completely serious. He struggles with what it means to be a Nephalem and what it means to be Human at Heart, for if he were to lose his Humanity, he doesn't know what he'd turn out to be, but he figures it would not be good considering his life. He has a silver tongue and can reason with people easily, as well as unmatched politeness, but when the need calls for it, he is a Combat Pragmatist and will not hesitate to take advantage of any window of weakness.

 

Changes for Ashes of a Fallen Empire:

Regrettably, Zanza had to stick to the sidelines during the attacks against the Empire by the Order, except for Langerdon where he did enter the fray, so he bore witness to the rise of The Taken King and his subsequent conquering of Korben's Empire and driving away the Order of Lux and forcing Zanza into hiding. During this time, he'd made his presence half-known to Nolan "Arkham" Vigil and his Dark Side was still ever-present and pestering him...but Zanza knew it would only get worse at some point in his life. He had still not found his Brother, Cobica Quinn, yet he still looks for him without relenting in his search.

 

His powers remain much the same and he retains his weapon, but his Dark Side has fully manifested in his brain, but not yet spiritually, yet it can speak to him in his mind in attempts to influence his actions. He now has a rather dapper hat upon his head that he usually takes off before combat. He seeks to join Messiah when the time comes.

Edited January 16, 20169 yr by SuperiorKunivas

why'd you post it again

 

ALSO THEME TIME

The Crow's Eyes:

 

 

 

 

There's six of them, three themes is totally okay

 

Neena Mors:

 

 

Pre-Revelation

Post-Revelation

 

 

 

BONUS: Neenry ship song:

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JAhP5eo8soo

get it

because she wants to kill him

lmao

 

 

 

Ryonne Neyelmnik:

 

 

 

 

it's like he was made for rwby

 

Cyler:

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J4KkPX98054

 

 

Doctor Julius Verstand:

 

 

 

Vortludo Prince:

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q73Bm-rO4LI

Assuming he actually changes sides to Messiah, then this fits.

because he's the only one actually in a relationship right now he gets the love song

 

 

 

Cobica Quinn:

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WUh34DXikGA

because parties

but also i have no idea what to give him

maybe this:

NO WAIT:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Z7YM9gAVeMs

 

 

 

Stark Red:

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=w3QW8PVyyNM

lmao

couldn't help it

have an actual song:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=o5tPYjeClnQ

 

 

 

Kinzoku:

 

 

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3qBPvfUmGOY

because reasons

 

 

 

all done now

Edited January 16, 20169 yr by Emerald Sustrai

why'd you post it again

 

ALSO THEME TIME

The Crow's Eyes:

 

 

 

 

There's six of them, three themes is totally okay

 

more coming obvi

Slight loading issue.

 

Still, we got both Nephalem now!

Slight loading issue.

 

Still, we got both Nephalem now!

yes

 

i was unsure what i was going to do with cobica's character arc

but with zanza around things should go down

I have a bit of a concern regarding your latest post and Zane.  I do not think it would be very plausible for Zane to teleport and get into the ship so easily.  For one, the airship is still in the air (and moving, from what I can understand), so teleportation would be very difficult.  Second, the ship is protected by some high tech shields, so for Zane to teleport to the ship, break through the shields, and go through the roof all seems highly unlikely.  I am not sure if shields were verified in Sabre's post, but after conversing with him it seems that they were in place.  Sorry about the error.  If you wouldn't mind making it a little less possible for Zane to easily arrive on the airship that would be splendid.  Perhaps he could be trying to destroy the ship's shields instead, so he can sneak aboard later?

 

I was assuming Sasha's airship was one of those big commander ships that move much slower than the others & has alot of troops. Cause Zane can warp onto those cause their big ships & warping on them is easy for him as they move slow & all, Zane can also get onto a medium ship too as long as their not build for super speed. But if any ship has energy shields that totally stops Zane altogether . I did check to see if the ship had any shields in the post but I didn't see any mention of any, But in any case I'll make the edit now & I'd appreciate it if those around Zane could verify in their posts if anything they use is/has/using magical or energy wise just so I don't make this mistake again thanks guys  & thanks for the idea Mystic, It'll work well in my edit    

 

Well, Cobica's here, sooo..... (One more character after this and he'll be a new one. But for now!)

 

Name: Zanza Quinn

Age: Immortal, many years old.

Gender: Male

Race: Demon/Angel Hybrid, aka: Nephalem.

Side(Rebellion, Empire, Criminal Underworld): Neutral, not sure about The Order.

Appearance:

Human Form:

Regular/Calm:

Irregular/Emotional: 

 

Demon Form:

 

Angel Form:

 

Weapon(s): Yamato: His main weapon of choice in human form. The blade can be imbued with Angelic or Demonic Power, granting it a Blue or Red flowing and powerful aura respectively. Angelic provides faster attacks while Demonic provides slower, harder hitting ones.

 

Power Status(Mage, Tanzynite User, Race Power e.g: Demonic Power if a Demon): Angelic/Demonic Power.

Magic(If a Mage, can be Elemental, Illusionary, Necromancy or Summoner based, Limit of 3 Specializations):

Instigator Chemicals (If a Tanzynite User, can become one if Human and if not already one, Limit of 3.):

Tonic Chemicals(Same as above. Limit of 3.):

Experimental Compound(If a permitted user, limit of 1. Can have 1 other Instigator and 2 Tonics.): 

Race Power(If Non-Human): Being a Nephalem, Zanza has access to both Energies of the Immortal Spirits of Heaven and Hell, as well as his own powers.

Base Abilities:

• Decent Healing Factor, minor injuries are negligible while serious injuries do heal faster, thus impede him for less time and make fatal injuries harder to pull off.
• Enhanced Strength.
• Enhanced Mobility/Speed.
• Enhanced Durability.
• Heightened Senses.
• Energy Manipulation/Conduction: As well as being able to freely use both Energies in his Human State, he can channel energy from other sources to boost his power. The most viable source being other people willingly giving him power, but he can drain Electricity from Generators.
• Teleportation - Can teleport into a Dark Blue Mist short or long distances, also allowing him to Flash Step.
• Portal Creation (Using Yamato) - He can cut so fast that he can rip a hole in Dimensions to allow for transportation to wherever he wishes.
• Dimension Slash - This faster than sight cutting can cleanly cut anything, but also by utilizing the Dimension ripping properties Zanza can use numerous moves using the energy gained and manipulated from such slashing.
• Summoned Swords/Sword Illusion - Using basic energy, he can conjure Blue-Green Holographic-like Broadswords that can be summoned in great quantities or one at a time to throw them at enemies as projectiles either singular or in a volley, spin around him in a defensive motion and re-positioned into more offensive formations such as above the enemy, around the enemy or shot out away from him. They can also be summoned in a large group above enemies and throw down in a rain of swords that stay in the ground and cause significant damage. They are indeed tangible and sharp and can even be grabbed by Zanza to be used more personally. Their sizes vary from normal Sword sized to absolutely gigantic. They can be infused with Demonic or Angelic Energies to act as either a direct teleport (Angel) or a Pull/Lasso/Spear to yank opponents towards him (Demon).

Angel Powers/Angel Mode:

• Speedier Attacks - All attacks are faster and lighter, allowing for more combo opportunities but do less damage overall, as well as using Angelic Energies to do certain special attacks.
• Crowd Control - Some moves are wider range, allowing for an easier time with large groups of attackers, at least making sure to hit all of them at least once in one motion, usually.
• Teleport Dodge - Dodging at the last second allows for a Double Dodge for a tactical advantage/battlefield positioning change.
• Holy/Light-Based Powers - Includes Holy Fire, Light Pillars/Beams, Light Orbs etc.
• Angel Glide - Moving across buildings and platforms is made easier as he can thrust his arms back after a jump to propel himself forward using Angelic Energy in a Blue Stream, like Jet Plane Trails.
• Angel Trigger "Dark Ascension" - Allows full usage of his Angel Powers by transforming into a more powerful state; His Angel Form, which while dark, can make more use of his Light Powers than his normal form in Angel Mode can.

Demon Powers/Devil Mode:

• Slower Attacks - All attacks are slower but harder, allowing for maximum damage potential at the expense of speed and combo potential, as well as using Demonic Energies to do certain special attacks.
• Singular Opponent Focus - The extra damage and hard hitting nature of Demon Mode allows greater focus on single individuals, usually more powerful, tougher enemies, while sacrificing the range of Angel or even Base Mode.
• Power Dodge - Dodging at the last second grants a temporary power-up, wreathing Zanza, mainly around the arms, a red-white aura that enhances strength for a short period.
• Unholy/Dark-Based Powers - Includes Hell Fire, Darkness-Based attacks, Raw Crimson Demonic Energy etc.
• Devil Trigger "Hollow Decent" - Allows full usage of his Demon Powers by transforming into a more powerful state: His Demon Form, which is far darker, distorts his voice and allows him to make more use of his Dark Powers than his normal form in Devil Mode can.

Bio/History: Born from a Demon Father and Angel Mother, Zanza was an only child and no one was sure what to make of him, as he was a Nephalem and the union of Angel and Demon was unheard of for many millenniums. Some frowned upon it, some embraced it and others were indifferent, treating it as mundane even. Either way, he had an interesting life, having a mainly good childhood with numerous friends and a good relationship with his Parents, all before Korben's rise to Power, but not all that much longer. During his time in College, he met someone who would go on to be a very, very good friend of his and even became Blood Brothers with him. This person was Pure-Blooded Human, from Langerdon before Korben rose up, who met Zanza and gave him his Humanity through his relationship with him, preventing him from becoming Pompous...or Malevolent. This however would all change once Korben took over, with Zanza's parents immediately opposing the Dark Emperor and wishing to rebel in secret, but they were ratted out by Zanza's Blood Brother, who thought it might of helped them see that Rebellion wasn't a good idea, but it led to Zanza's Mother and Father being hunted down, with his Mother dying and his Father being Imprisoned, tortured and then killed after he literally begged for death. Prior to all of this however, his Father managed to hide Zanza away, telling him to lay low, stay away for the time being and make an impact on the world before he was found and taken.

 

Alone, betrayed and uncertain, Zanza wandered for many years, gaining power, training and contributing to history in his own way, but still felt empty and battled a Dark Side that had manifested through his Demonic and Angelic Powers that kept chipping at his Humanity, but had no luck even though he had suffered so much. When the Order of Lux formed, he initially wanted to go and join, but stopped when he saw Eclaire, a Half-Succubus and the Archangel: Tiriel, as they would more than likely shun him and send him away due to his Hybrid Nature, so he has kept neutral ever since, but will one day approach the Rebellion and accomplish what his Family never could due to his life-changing betrayal and that he was too weak...he needed more power.

 

Personality: Well-spoken, focused, sarcastic, troubled and very intelligent and forward-thinking, Zanza has developed and nurtured his mind very well, as he considers it a great weapon, possibly his greatest when his Sword can't cut it or his powers can't destroy/solve it. He uses his Katana like a Cane when out-of-combat or keeps it fastened to his waist. He is capable of making a joke and snarking a little while having a good sense of humor, so they're not crap and he can lighten the mood if need be, unless he needs to be completely serious. He struggles with what it means to be a Nephalem and what it means to be Human at Heart, for if he were to lose his Humanity, he doesn't know what he'd turn out to be, but he figures it would not be good considering his life. He has a silver tongue and can reason with people easily, as well as unmatched politeness, but when the need calls for it, he is a Combat Pragmatist and will not hesitate to take advantage of any window of weakness.

 

Changes for Ashes of a Fallen Empire:

Regrettably, Zanza had to stick to the sidelines during the attacks against the Empire by the Order, except for Langerdon where he did enter the fray, so he bore witness to the rise of The Taken King and his subsequent conquering of Korben's Empire and driving away the Order of Lux and forcing Zanza into hiding. During this time, he'd made his presence half-known to Nolan "Arkham" Vigil and his Dark Side was still ever-present and pestering him...but Zanza knew it would only get worse at some point in his life. He had still not found his Brother, Cobica Quinn, yet he still looks for him without relenting in his search.

 

His powers remain much the same and he retains his weapon, but his Dark Side has fully manifested in his brain, but not yet spiritually, yet it can speak to him in his mind in attempts to influence his actions. He now has a rather dapper hat upon his head that he usually takes off before combat. He seeks to join Messiah when the time comes.

 

Accepted!  Dang, I really need to update the character roster. : P

 

I was assuming Sasha's airship was one of those big commander ships that move much slower than the others & has alot of troops. Cause Zane can warp onto those cause their big ships & warping on them is easy for him as they move slow & all, Zane can also get onto a medium ship too as long as their not build for super speed. But if any ship has energy shields that totally stops Zane altogether . I did check to see if the ship had any shields in the post but I didn't see any mention of any, But in any case I'll make the edit now & I'd appreciate it if those around Zane could verify in their posts if anything they use is/has/using magical or energy wise just so I don't make this mistake again thanks guys  & thanks for the idea Mystic, It'll work well in my edit    

It's quite alright, and not wholly your fault.  I realize too that shields weren't mentioned in the original post, and I figure this is predominately a misunderstanding of sorts.  I do agree that clarification is crucial for all of our posts, and once more I apologize that it wasn't mentioned.  Thank you very much for the edit; I'm sure this will make things smoother. : )

Accepted!  Dang, I really need to update the character roster. : P

 

It's quite alright, and not wholly your fault.  I realize too that shields weren't mentioned in the original post, and I figure this is predominately a misunderstanding of sorts.  I do agree that clarification is crucial for all of our posts, and once more I apologize that it wasn't mentioned.  Thank you very much for the edit; I'm sure this will make things smoother. : )

 

No problem & edit has just been made too, I'm sure the edit works better now too  

Finally got the time to post to these

 

 

GAAAAHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! I'm trying to make my character, but I just cannot draw a freakin' face! Why is it that I cannot draw a human face?!

 

I feel your pain man, I can't draw fingers or feet I can sometimes get them right but their just so hard to draw haha

 

Eh............. I finished, but I'm not too proud. I cannot draw well on a touch screen. The screen on the 3DS was too small to add facial features. You'll have to use your imagination. Btw, he has blue eyes.Jynn.png

I think I turned an RP signup into a drawing discussion..............

 

That drawings pretty darn good man, you must have some skills in art since your drawing isn't like this the first time

 

Haha

 

I know I should have posted earlier, but I recently learned how to convert a sketch and edit using a photo editor, so I had to give it a go.  Plus, the first day back in college left me braindead and drawing seemed so much more appealing than writing. : P  Anyhow, I'll get a post in soon, but first I wanted to share my first drawing of Chrysalis:

 

Looks great. : )  Accepted!

 

nice as drawing, I like her flowing hair

 

Also, real talk. I was just diagnosed with a concussion. With that, I've been told to limit my computer usage. Theoretically, this won't slow down my posts, but I just wanted people to be aware that I'll be not as active as I was for a little bit.

 

What! hope your doing okay. 

 

You're probably right.  I was covering my bases by discussing both forms of his darkness, just in case.  His darkness of morality is not common knowledge, either.  He's incredibly discreet about his attacks on imperials, unless of course he has an excuse and can put it to the Order's name.  If people are referring to the Godolvia attack in assuming his dark moral I could slightly see the point, though funnily enough I was never going to actually have him blatantly attack Godolvia like that. : P  I'm still kind of thinking that attack shouldn't have been him, which means we've got another party to worry about.

 

In one of Yagyu's posts she explains her side of the story of what happened in Godolvia which explains it wasn't Yev that attacked that city or even his orders to attack it either, Yev's going to be told Yagyu's side with some more info in her report K.

 

Here's the whole attack on Godolvia in a spoiler for anyone who doesn't know & it's current state, I'm sure I got all this stuff right  & I've included where the dwarves are within Godolvia too if thats cool with everyone that is K.

 

3-4 days ago now the village or city of Godolvia was destroyed & many died without remorse, mercy or guilt & most of them were ex-imperials. Oryx took this attack as a sign of war after hearing it & that the Seraphim Order was the cause of it all. But this was false info that Zack created to not only frame the Seraphim Order to the world seeing them as nothing but killers but to also anger Oryx into full swing against them. Zack tricked & used Dark Heart into sending her to the village or city to destroy it & it's people. 

 

While at the same time Yagyu was on a mission in Godolvia with a group of allies that Yev sent her on to recruit more people to the Seraphim Order, Yagyu's group tried to recruit some ex-imperials to join them but instead they chose to attack her group causing a battle that slightly damaged the village or city. After the battle Yagyu's group was approached by Dark Heart, Dark heart took out her groups leader so Yagyu held off Dark Heart to let her group escape to safety with her leader but they were killed off by Sahail who had entered the town mainly aiming to kill off any imperials & anyone else she wanted. This is were Dark heart & Sahail met each other. Yagyu couldn't defeat Dark Heart & barely escaped which Rei finds her later on. 

 

After which Dark Heart & Sahail join up to destroy the village. Afterwards Zack finds Dark heart but is betrayed by her & with help from Sahail kills him off & greatly damages the whole village of Godolvia leaving a massive hole in the middle of the village. Dark Heart left some survives which Sahail hated greatly, mostly being kids. Ariana was in a nearby diner & could see Sahail in her dragon form before they left. The dwarves at this time are & have been underground through the whole thing as the dwarves city is under the village of Godolvia as they are mainly mining & stuff. Zack didn't know about the dwarves underground & that's why their still alive. Eclaire doesn't know Godolvia has been greatly damaged yet but knows the dwarves are under the village or city of Godolvia.

 

Edited January 16, 20169 yr by The Unversed

I will allow Jynn's troops to be NPC's

I will allow Jynn's troops to be NPC's

I feel kind of bad about continuing to bother you about things, and this is less of a rule and more of a preference, but is there any chance you could write in the past tense? There was something bothering me about your posts and I just figured out it was this. It's kind of jarring to go from tense to tense without any real separation or reason.

Wait so jeremy attacked biromoore? Well this was rather sudden. Still

 

Where did chrysalis attack though. I am very confused. Possobly because I just woke up

Wait so jeremy attacked biromoore? Well this was rather sudden. StillWhere did chrysalis attack though. I am very confused. Possobly because I just woke up

Jeremy was always set to attack the Caldwlfen, drop it on the base at Biromoore and throw the northeastern fleet in chaos. That never changed. Maxis was sent to Godolvia; the division there needs to be destroyed so Jeremy doesn't get flanked.Chrysalis is between Brenaen and Kaipora destroying a patrol fleet. This opens a hole in the air defense network, which now serves to keep the Kusanagi hidden while it prepares to help Kaipora.This was all set pages ago in my giant order spree post and we talked about this on Discord.

sup guys

i wrote something

 

Shipping Squire's Ship Sfics; Volume 2, Ashes of a Fallen Empire

 

Chapter 1 (3?): Ava & Vortludo; Just do it

 

"I'm just unsure Cobica." Vorltudo paced back and forth. Cobica lounged on a nearby couch, pouring a bag of chips into his mouth. 

"Chill out dude, it's just a girl." Cobica replied to Vortludo's concern easily.

"But it is not just a girl!" Vortludo exclaimed, exasperated. He ran a hand through his hair. The Half-Breed sighed.

"You're like the smoothest guy alive Vort. You flirted with Ariana and Teka, two of the most dangerous women in the world, and didn't even bat an eye. Asking Ava out should be like the easiest thing in the world." Cobica continued to encourage his friend as he grabbed a soda from the minifridge and chugged it to wash down the chips.

"My friend, I think you have forgotten that both of those women promptly hit me through a wall after I so poetically flirted with them." Vortludo filled out the rest of the stories that Cobica had started.

"Details, details. Ava is nothing compared to those femme fatales, so I don't see the problem."

"I also didn't know it was them when I did that." Vortludo continued to mention parts of the stories that Cobica had so conveniently ignored.

"Shut up Vort. Go and ask her out now." Cobica said, grabbing a cheese danish and devouring it.

"But..." Vortludo began another counterargument, but Cobica had had enough of his stalling. The Half-Breed stood up, opened the door, and shoved the Noble outside.

"I've had enough of you wasting space in my room, disturbing my beauty sleep, just so you can complain about having to go get a girlfriend. Ask her out so I can tease you more and not feel as bad about it." Cobica said, then slammed the door in Vortludo's face.

"That's my room though." Vortludo whimpered. Then he took a deep breath, and started for Ava's room.

~~~~

"I'm just unsure Yev." Ava paced back and forth. Yevgeni sighed, exasperated. She'd been here for half an hour, and though he'd said nothing, she'd kept talking. He could have been a mannequin, and he was pretty sure she would kept babbling on regardless. Finally, the leader of the Seraphim Order took a break from his work to look at Ava. The poor woman looked like she wabout to faint from nervousness. He shook his head slightly. 

"Vortludo is, for all intents and purposes, a teddy bear when he's talking to you. He's not about to say no."

"But..."

"I'm done listening to you. Get out of my office now and don't come back until you've asked him out." Yevgeni kicked her out, then returned to his work. Ava frowned, but obeyed, and left to head towards Vortludo's room.

 

It was only a short time later, when both rounded the same corner form opposite directions and collided. Each took a step back, and began to apologize before they realized who the other was.

"Ava."

"Vortludo." A moment of silence passed.

"Willyougotodinnerwithme?" They both asked at the same time, breathlessly. Realizing that they had both asked the same question, they both smiled widely.

"Yes." Spoken once again at the same time.

I feel kind of bad about continuing to bother you about things, and this is less of a rule and more of a preference, but is there any chance you could write in the past tense? There was something bothering me about your posts and I just figured out it was this. It's kind of jarring to go from tense to tense without any real separation or reason.

I understand and I apologize. I'll try to use past tense more often. I'm just not an amazing writer.

Edited January 16, 20169 yr by Khdude

Okay.

 

So.

 

Ava x Vortludo is hilarious and adorable. Needs a sequel

That drawings pretty darn good man, you must have some skills in art since your drawing isn't like this the first time

 

Haha

Well then...... Now I feel a lot better!