Hello guys. I've sent this first part of the story to some members here, and they liked it a lot. So, I thought it'd be better to share it with everyone. Hope you like it

 

 

 

A Frightful Prevision

 

At a night, of May 29th of the year 2049, to be exact, something strange happened. But, before discovering what occurred, it’s better to know what had been happening in some time before that day. In the next lines, you will be able to read and put your imagination to work -- or at least give it a try -- in order to understand everything that this story has to tell.

 

-> March 11th <-

 

Today was an excellent day. Why? Because I got a promotion, and the rumors of some kind of “threat” coming to earth have been almost completely destroyed.. But, there are still some people who believe that we may be in risk of facing the last days of our lives -- of the humanity.

 

There were already many people who predicted a lot of things like that, but in the end, we are still here and alive, after all. Yet again, it’s still too early to say that this prediction is completely impossible to happen... Even I, who was instructed to calm the people, and tell them not to panic, still have doubts if this is really only a false rumor, or if it’ll really happen... But I pray that it doesn’t happen.

 

However, you might be interested in knowing what that prevision has to say.. But I think it’s still to early for me to tell it.. After all, what IS supposed to happen is only in some months, so I’ll tell about it in the near future. At least I managed to accomplish my duty; the people seems to be more calm now. We just need to carry on with our normal lives, that’s it. No need to worry.

 

 

-> March 30th <-

 

It has already passed some days since I last wrote in this diary. I can’t believe I am really enjoying this -- although it was an idea of my own daughter. But, returning to the main subject, there are more and more people supporting that prediction.. My duty has become very hard, even though people do respect me. When I’m not around, many of them begin to talk about it. I have been busy during this time I was off.. Me and the other politics -- we need to make sure that the people are not attracted by that idea -- but what if, we ourselves are?

 

I am not saying I believe in it, but I can’t tell the contrary as well.. Something just tells me this is not really wrong at all. But, who knows? It might be only my imagination. Maybe I’m just getting old. With almost fifty years, it’s hard to face what I face everyday. Well, let’s stop talking about my personal life... My main goal with this is to find out more about the rumors...

 

So, as I’ve said before, many people continue to fight for these ideas... And look, we haven’t fought since 1927... And, with our own people.. Where will this world end? Can’t people have different opinions without respecting the others? Maybe this is really the end of this race -- which was once a pure and good race, in which people treated the others well, and not only worried about their interests, the money -- its name? Humanity.

 

But, if we think properly, this wouldn’t be a bad end at all.. You might be calling me a crazy or something like that, but see: We’ve killed thousands of animals, and don’t come with the argument: “we need to eat”, because in those thousands, many were only killed because men have their own interests.. They want to make new things, and don’t care with what or who they have to cross down to achieve their goals. With time, the humans have been more and more selfish.

 

I remember.. In thirty years ago, we weren’t so bad as we are today. We had water, but what have we done with it? We spent it without caring about the consequences.. And who is going to pay for that? We. It can be sooner or later, but we will end paying for what we’ve done. Nowadays, it’s very rare to find the old and good water. With the new technology, and since we don’t have the food we used to, we have to eat some strange things made by these scientists.. But I can’t badmouth them, can I? Because, if it weren’t for them, we might have met our end sooner.. In 2040, 91.56% of the entire rain forests of the world were completely destroyed, and with it, many species of animals, our natural resources... But I ask: Is this really good enough? We have to get rid of the forests to get more technology? Really?

 

My answer to this question is this : No, we shouldn’t have done that. But who am I to say this to the entire humanity? I would end up being killed by the owners of the factories and others.. But, while our great technology doesn’t build a Time Machine, we have to hang on. Do you know how we live today? Thanks to the Factories and their gases that have destroyed our Ozone Layer, we were forced to build new houses.. Ones with Oxygen. Why? Because it’s very rare to find some nowadays. The rays of the sun have turned the temperature to 58.5Cº, which makes it almost impossible to hold on that temperature for more than twenty minutes.

 

Ahhh.. If only I could go back to 2012 or 2014, when our world was so amazingly good to live.. But I can’t blame it, because it was our fault -- we were the ones who didn’t listen to what was right in front of us -- The terrible future we were creating. Those amazing campaigns for the reforestation.. Nowadays, it doesn’t exist anymore. The Humanity is too busy to think about protecting the less than 10% we still have.

 

Oh.. It’s late. 11:59p.m. I need to go sleep now. Might come back and write more in this diary in a week or so. Who knows? Maybe more and more people will continue to support that prevision. Bye for now.

 

->April 12th <-

 

I guess I haven’t had much time to write here. More than one week, eh? But don’t worry, I have a good reason for that. Nowadays, our population is around 5,000,000,000 of people. Why am I informing this, you ask? Because between this incredibly big number, 1,000,000,000 of people have just began to support the prevision! My duty has become more and more difficult with time. So, I have to spend most of the time doing it. I’m getting tired of it.

 

Besides that, do you know what’s the worst? The day of the prevision is coming. It’s in a bit more than one month. As time passes, I’m getting more and more frightened. I know nothing will happen, but still... What if this time, the prevision is right? Well, you might be curious to know what the prevision says. However, I’m afraid I don’t have a proper definition , since it’s strange, because there are subgroups. Some say that it foresees the end of the World, others say that it’s the end of our Planet, that the world is going to be rebuilt, that some other species are going to invade the Earth... That’s why it’s so hard to block its advance, since it has many currents.

 

Although the politicians don’t seem to believe in that, I’ve been told that they’re making some new vehicles, which are capable of flying without oil, and that can use its lasers to destroy anything. What they do not know is that, even I am building a new escape route, for myself and my family. But I can’t talk about it now. However, I am praying that I don’t need to eventually use it in the future.

 

Wait! What? My friends -- the other politics responsible for maintaining the peace between the people -- have just warned me that the leader of the prevision has been spotted! I’m sorry, but I need to go right now. If we kill him, we may have a chance to stop the rumors right from the source! I’ll try to report the results of the battle as soon as possible. Good-bye and see you soon!

 

How was it? Did you like? I'll write more about this story with time. Just share your thoughts below, please

Hmm, the plot thickens. How shall it end? No one knows...well, Lu Xun knows, but that...ah heck with it. Good work.

THIS STORY IS SO WONDERFUL, THAT I AM AT A LOSS OF WORDS...

Yup, we have a very good story here, keep going.

Nice story! This the best story I have read it in my life!

 

Keep up the good work!

Cool keep it up!

Thanks guys! Hope you enjoy this new part

 

April 30th

 

Hello guys. How have you been? It’s been just nine days, but it seemed like forever, didn’t it? I’ve been doing great. We got more followers. The world is almost split into 50% of people, who help us, and 50%, who are against us. But, as destiny may tell, it will soon convert to 99% people aiding us. No need to worry about anything. I’m just so calm. I’m sure that we will win!

 

The politics still have a good resistance... But that’ll soon be over. With God’s help, there’s no one that can withstand us! Wahahaha! I’ll be the hero. After the end of May, you all will see that.

 

With more people, we need more supplies, so we are spending a lot of money to get it. How do we get money, you ask? Well... everyone who follows us are forced to give their money in order to make our Religion better to everyone -- and so we built a lot of common houses -- in where they can all live together, sharing their ideas and living like a real community.

 

They’re all equals there -- no one has more or less money than the others. This is the perfect society. We follow the communism, which bases itself on people being equal, without any difference. Also, everything that’s property of a person, it’s of every one's as well. People are accepting that quiet well.

 

I’m so happy for that. Finally, the differences are slowly fading away, and everyone will have the same rights, and no one will ever have to suffer humiliation from others because of their economic situation!

 

Now, I’m afraid I need to go. Bye, see you soon. Don’t forget, you shouldn’t treat other people bad because of their money. We’re all humans. Just... Please don’t forget, and have an awesome week!

Uh oh. I'm sensing a bubble busting moment a-comin'.

Good work.

So good.

The last part of this is gonna be so good

Keep going

in love with this story cant wait for more

Lu-Xun, once again, your talents as a storyteller have boggled my mind. Brother, you truly have an amazing gift. You have the potential of being a best-selling author. Wow, man, just wow! I can't wait for the next chapter, the story has me on the edge of my seat!!!! Anyways, that was my logical side thinking, my crazy side says: " Oh snap, holy mother of f'ing awesomeness, make more!!! More!!!!".

Wow, that last chapter really kicks my mind out! Your stories are very well writen and I really enjoy by reading it! Good job, bro!

Thanks for the comments, guys! That’s what makes me write as best as I can ~~

 

Now, I’ll change this part to another person, the one who started with.

 

However, you still don’t know what his name is, right? Then here you go.

Tligh

 

You’ll have to pay attention, because I’ll be changing the person who writes sometimes! So, read the name of who’s writing the report!

 

Now, to the story!!!

 

April 29th

 

Hello. It’s been a while. That idiot Drak... We need to kill him as soon as possible! The prevision is coming up! Time’s ending... And I just get more and more frightened... But we must not give in. We will fight until the last day of our lives!

 

Our next attack is planned to be on May 5th, and then, if we fail, we’ll make small attacks twice a week until we can finally kill their leader! I will go myself, in one of these battles. I haven’t fought for some time, but I know I’m strong enough to kill that lunatic!

 

He says he talks to God! He must be crazy! No ordinary human can be capable of talking to Him... He just lies all the time, and I must put an end to his madness! Let me tell you more about our plans.

 

Our main plan is divided into some parts. I’ll explain them in small topics to you :

 

*We will attack them on May 5th, and try to sneak in the palace, and with luck, kill Drak.

 

However, as there is always the chance of failure, we already thought of what we will do it if fails.

 

*We will attack the Common Houses -- some buildings created by Drak, where most of his followers are living -- and then kidnap as many as we can, and use them to make Drak come to us -- and then, we’ll end him once and for all.

 

That’s our plan so far. Until May 4th, we will think of something else. There are still a lot of places that we need to fill with strategies! But, I’m sure that we’ll save our society from the madness of Drak and his followers!

 

Nowadays, the world is divided into 60% of people who are still with us, and 40%, who have put their trust in Drak. But, I’m afraid that if we don’t do anything quickly -- this number will turn into equals (50% for each).

 

Ah, it’s getting late. Almost midnight. I’m sorry, but this is all for today. I’ll help our strategists tomorrow. My goal is to formulate a plan, which will be responsible for Drak’s defeat, but that will take me a lot of time. So, see ya! Bye! I’ll report back soon!

awesome job!!! keep that creative mind working!

he want to kill a leader =0 intresting, and making plans of how to kill him ,nice stroy Lu Xun! keep up the story!! i want to see the bloddy war!!! lol jkjk

Ah, I was wondering what the original character was. Cool. The back and forth between the two should be really good.

No poor Dark.

I like this kind of story!

 

write more, I want to know what will happen to the leader!!!

cant wait for more!!

Thanks for the comments, guys

Drak

 

May 4th

It’s been just a few days since I last wrote here. It seems like I’m really enjoying it. In these days, I have been fine. There was no sign of attack from the enemy -- but that’s what worries me the most.

 

If they keep so quiet as they have been until now... Then, I’m guessing they’ll do a full-scale attack... And I’m afraid we may not be ready for that... not yet... I can feel that something really bad is about to transpire... But I hope I’m wrong... We can’t lose... We are the followers of God!

 

Yes, we shall not lose! Our great protector will be always there to give support to us! We can’t lose hope! But, anyway, tomorrow, at the evening, I’ll ask my soldiers to stay in defense positions...

 

In these days, I haven’t had any dreams with God... It’s strange... It’s as if my connection with him has just disappeared... But, I’m ready for any and everything! I’m not afraid of anyone! I shall guide my people until my very last day on this Earth!

Oh, at this very moment, I am not feeling well... I’m coughing... What does this man? Is my last day approaching? I can’t die now... not yet... Not until my ambition is realized!

 

I must stop writing... I’m having a headache... I might be getting sick... I’ll write soon. See you all later, and hope you all stay fine!

Keep going

Hmm, Drak's death or disablement due to illness could have interesting repercussions on his followers. Possibly dissolving the movement or whipping them into a frenzy. I'm interested to see how this turns out.

So sad.