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The Complex Universe I - Start of the Journey

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Very nice!! another fabulous and great story!! :DD this is a great story! are you going to continue with it?

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Very nice!! another fabulous and great story!! :DD this is a great story! are you going to continue with it?

 

thanks. Yes, I'll! :D

I must say, this is a wonderful story. I look forward to reading some more. The music definitely matched that part. Good job.

Aside from a few grammar errors nice story.

WOW! okay first off, i really like the song~

haa, second, interesting start, great connection between characters, and fantasic plot!!

i cant wait for the next part as well! keep it up!!

I really like the impact the music makes when reading it, keep up the good work dude!

Really good man. I wanna keep reading!! :P

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Thank you all guys!

I appreciate it a lot :D

Really good man. I wanna keep reading!! :P

 

Then follow the topic!

i think it's a really nice story it's entersting and sad that his dad dies but i love the story :D

definently a great read! keep going!!

Excellent as always Lu Xun! Great plotline, and very fast paced. (Maybe it actually isn't, but I'm reading the Count of Monte Cristo right now, and anything is fast paced compared to that.)

It's a nice story. The only thing I didn't like is that you revealed that his brother was downstairs too early. You could have revealed him in the next chapter. I thought it was a monster or something, lol, it was suspensful for a second. Anyways, it seems to be shaping up into an interesting story, I'd definitely read the next chapter. Just becareful with revealing too much. You always have to keep the reader on their toes ;)

awesome intro

Can't wait for more!!! Nice work! :D

Hope the next chapter will be coming out soon!!

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