Hello guys. I've sent this first part of the story to some members here, and they liked it a lot. So, I thought it'd be better to share it with everyone. Hope you like it

 

 

 

A Frightful Prevision

 

At a night, of May 29th of the year 2049, to be exact, something strange happened. But, before discovering what occurred, it’s better to know what had been happening in some time before that day. In the next lines, you will be able to read and put your imagination to work -- or at least give it a try -- in order to understand everything that this story has to tell.

 

-> March 11th <-

 

Today was an excellent day. Why? Because I got a promotion, and the rumors of some kind of “threat” coming to earth have been almost completely destroyed.. But, there are still some people who believe that we may be in risk of facing the last days of our lives -- of the humanity.

 

There were already many people who predicted a lot of things like that, but in the end, we are still here and alive, after all. Yet again, it’s still too early to say that this prediction is completely impossible to happen... Even I, who was instructed to calm the people, and tell them not to panic, still have doubts if this is really only a false rumor, or if it’ll really happen... But I pray that it doesn’t happen.

 

However, you might be interested in knowing what that prevision has to say.. But I think it’s still to early for me to tell it.. After all, what IS supposed to happen is only in some months, so I’ll tell about it in the near future. At least I managed to accomplish my duty; the people seems to be more calm now. We just need to carry on with our normal lives, that’s it. No need to worry.

 

 

-> March 30th <-

 

It has already passed some days since I last wrote in this diary. I can’t believe I am really enjoying this -- although it was an idea of my own daughter. But, returning to the main subject, there are more and more people supporting that prediction.. My duty has become very hard, even though people do respect me. When I’m not around, many of them begin to talk about it. I have been busy during this time I was off.. Me and the other politics -- we need to make sure that the people are not attracted by that idea -- but what if, we ourselves are?

 

I am not saying I believe in it, but I can’t tell the contrary as well.. Something just tells me this is not really wrong at all. But, who knows? It might be only my imagination. Maybe I’m just getting old. With almost fifty years, it’s hard to face what I face everyday. Well, let’s stop talking about my personal life... My main goal with this is to find out more about the rumors...

 

So, as I’ve said before, many people continue to fight for these ideas... And look, we haven’t fought since 1927... And, with our own people.. Where will this world end? Can’t people have different opinions without respecting the others? Maybe this is really the end of this race -- which was once a pure and good race, in which people treated the others well, and not only worried about their interests, the money -- its name? Humanity.

 

But, if we think properly, this wouldn’t be a bad end at all.. You might be calling me a crazy or something like that, but see: We’ve killed thousands of animals, and don’t come with the argument: “we need to eat”, because in those thousands, many were only killed because men have their own interests.. They want to make new things, and don’t care with what or who they have to cross down to achieve their goals. With time, the humans have been more and more selfish.

 

I remember.. In thirty years ago, we weren’t so bad as we are today. We had water, but what have we done with it? We spent it without caring about the consequences.. And who is going to pay for that? We. It can be sooner or later, but we will end paying for what we’ve done. Nowadays, it’s very rare to find the old and good water. With the new technology, and since we don’t have the food we used to, we have to eat some strange things made by these scientists.. But I can’t badmouth them, can I? Because, if it weren’t for them, we might have met our end sooner.. In 2040, 91.56% of the entire rain forests of the world were completely destroyed, and with it, many species of animals, our natural resources... But I ask: Is this really good enough? We have to get rid of the forests to get more technology? Really?

 

My answer to this question is this : No, we shouldn’t have done that. But who am I to say this to the entire humanity? I would end up being killed by the owners of the factories and others.. But, while our great technology doesn’t build a Time Machine, we have to hang on. Do you know how we live today? Thanks to the Factories and their gases that have destroyed our Ozone Layer, we were forced to build new houses.. Ones with Oxygen. Why? Because it’s very rare to find some nowadays. The rays of the sun have turned the temperature to 58.5Cº, which makes it almost impossible to hold on that temperature for more than twenty minutes.

 

Ahhh.. If only I could go back to 2012 or 2014, when our world was so amazingly good to live.. But I can’t blame it, because it was our fault -- we were the ones who didn’t listen to what was right in front of us -- The terrible future we were creating. Those amazing campaigns for the reforestation.. Nowadays, it doesn’t exist anymore. The Humanity is too busy to think about protecting the less than 10% we still have.

 

Oh.. It’s late. 11:59p.m. I need to go sleep now. Might come back and write more in this diary in a week or so. Who knows? Maybe more and more people will continue to support that prevision. Bye for now.

 

->April 12th <-

 

I guess I haven’t had much time to write here. More than one week, eh? But don’t worry, I have a good reason for that. Nowadays, our population is around 5,000,000,000 of people. Why am I informing this, you ask? Because between this incredibly big number, 1,000,000,000 of people have just began to support the prevision! My duty has become more and more difficult with time. So, I have to spend most of the time doing it. I’m getting tired of it.

 

Besides that, do you know what’s the worst? The day of the prevision is coming. It’s in a bit more than one month. As time passes, I’m getting more and more frightened. I know nothing will happen, but still... What if this time, the prevision is right? Well, you might be curious to know what the prevision says. However, I’m afraid I don’t have a proper definition , since it’s strange, because there are subgroups. Some say that it foresees the end of the World, others say that it’s the end of our Planet, that the world is going to be rebuilt, that some other species are going to invade the Earth... That’s why it’s so hard to block its advance, since it has many currents.

 

Although the politicians don’t seem to believe in that, I’ve been told that they’re making some new vehicles, which are capable of flying without oil, and that can use its lasers to destroy anything. What they do not know is that, even I am building a new escape route, for myself and my family. But I can’t talk about it now. However, I am praying that I don’t need to eventually use it in the future.

 

Wait! What? My friends -- the other politics responsible for maintaining the peace between the people -- have just warned me that the leader of the prevision has been spotted! I’m sorry, but I need to go right now. If we kill him, we may have a chance to stop the rumors right from the source! I’ll try to report the results of the battle as soon as possible. Good-bye and see you soon!

 

How was it? Did you like? I'll write more about this story with time. Just share your thoughts below, please

Dang it, I fell behind. It's always cool to hear about a battle from different sides.

Thanks, guys! I hope you're ready for more parts, because tomorrow two more might be posted!

 

Not too much until the end, though.

 

If you want to post your theories about the end, feel free to do it

This is getting better and better!

I can't wait to read more.

GOOOOD!!!

keep going! Your getting really good and good and good all the time!

Just as I expected! Well done!!!

Thanks guys, here is a small update

 

May 20th

 

Drak

 

Hello again. How have you guys been? I haven’t been fine. Actually, I’m not the one who is writing this now. I can’t even write until I get better... which is very unlikely to happen... But I can’t die... Not yet... Until the end of this month...

 

Everyday, when I wake up, I feel like my body is slowly dying, and then, I pray to God, saying “Just a bit more, please”. So far, it seems to be working. I can’t lose hope... If I die, everything I’ve been creating so far will be destroyed in a single blow... I just can’t let that happen...

 

We have just come to far to lose! This person who is writing for me, is the second on command. His name is Thinog. If something were to happen to me, he would be the one to command everything... He’s been with me since I first built my religion.

 

So far, it seems like the enemy is not going to attack us until the end of the month, when, probably, the final and decisive battle will take place. Losing is not an option. Even sick, I will -- at least command -- our troops.

 

There’s a general in the enemy that I particularly dislike the most. His name is Tligh. If I could, I’d myself kill him. He is one of the few who isn’t even a bit convinced by my prevision...

 

Now, I’m afraid I need to go. I need to sleep the whole day. I know everyone dies, but my time can’t be now... Just two weeks more... Please....

Short but so emotional keep going

Poor Drake... I really fell sorry for him. But great story!!!

Short but so emotional keep going

 

I agree with you!

 

Short,bigger. but it still great for me!!

I've just added three questions to this thread. Please answer, so I'll know if you enjoy or doesn't enjoy the story

Good job

 

I agree with you!

 

Short,bigger. but it still great for me!!

 

agree as well

Thanks ;DD Just for you guys, a new update

 

May 23th

 

Tligh

 

Hello. I haven’t written for some days now... But, never mind. Have you all been fine? Because I have. We haven’t attacked the enemy since the last battle. We are preparing ourselves for the Final Battle.

 

There is no chance of losing for us. We’ll go with thousands of men, and with a variety of weapons.... Haha! And, I’ve heard that Drak’s situation just gets worse and worse. Without his help, his followers will surely lose... Ah! It couldn’t have a better end.

 

I, myself, will go and attack Drak himself. I want to take him out of the stage! Hahaha! It won’t be hard, I’m sure. I have been training to be a soldier! Although I’m a general, I’m more the strategist type. Now, I can really fight!

 

While I stand, I swear that no rebellion will be big enough to take over the world! We have to destroy it by killing the leader, it’s the only way. I’ll be known as a hero if I accomplish that!

 

We will attack them in four days, just right before the day of the prevision. It won’t be so hard to defeat him. May Heavens bless us! We are the right side! Justice is with us! No one can stop us from putting an end to this madness!!

 

I need to go, and plan more attack strategies. Sorry, but I have to go. See ya. Not sure if I’ll write before the Final Battle, though. Take care!

Both sides believe they're right, neither one willing to back down. The end won't be pretty, though it's going to be really cool.

Both sides believe they're right, neither one willing to back down. The end won't be pretty, though it's going to be really cool.

 

Exactly what I am thinking.

It's going to be awesome, dramatic and sad.

it's getting better, write more!

Thanks!

 

Ready for the Final Battle?

 

Pay attention, because the following parts won't be written like diary.

 

I'll write the battle like a normal story!

 

Exactly what I am thinking.

It's going to be awesome, dramatic and sad.

 

I agree.

A Frightful Prevision

 

Prologue For

The Final Battle,

 

May, 28^th 1:00pm

 

It was a calm afternoon. But this state would not be the same for much longer. The greater battle of the history of the Humanity was about to begin. It was going to take place in Drak's country, and it may also get outside of it. No one could tell which side would win. The entire humanity was participating in this battle. In number, both sides were equal. But in the end, only one would continue to stand alive.

 

The reason of the battle was the difference of ideals. While one side was defending that everything the Humanity had been doing was wrong, and their leader, named Drak, had make a prevision, which was called by most “A Frightful Prevision”, informed that if things did not change, the planet would meet a transformation in the end of this month. The other side did not believe in anything that Drak said, and stood to defeat him and his followers.

 

But this last side had a great advantage; the leader of the other side was very sick, and no one could tell if he would last until the end of the Battle or not. The enemy was praying for his death, because if he died, his followers would probably lose quicker and easier.

 

Now, the members of the side, which was against Drak, had begun to appear. They were heading to the Sacred and Pure land, a place where Drak and his followers called “Home”. Drak's enemy did not have a leader, rather it was split in Generals. These Generals were the Main Politcs, who refused to join Drak in his new Religion.

 

There were four Generals, and their names were:

 

-Tligh

-Omeyn

-Zarcy

-Das

 

Each one of them was going to come from different directions. They had 2,000 soldiers with each one of them. Besides them, there were still many people who did not have a leader, but could attack as they want. Attack, defend, or give up.

 

In the other side, Drak had put his trust in his best General, whose name was Thinog. This man was responsible for protecting Drak, and he had let the responsibility of the attack with three people, his best friends. Each one of them was going to have 3,250 soldiers to accompany them. Their names were:

 

-Papphy

-Eirwd

-Poeh

 

There were also the people in this side, who did not have anyone to lead them. They could do anything they want, but Drak had asked them to protect the palace, and ensure that no one arrives to his chamber.

 

The stage for the battle was set. Who would win? Who would end up losing? Find out in the next parts of this great and historical conflict.

 

 

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Feel free to share your thoughts below

 

 

And I hope you're looking forward to see the end of the Final Battle.

I cant wait 4 more!!!!

Nice so you know what to do

I loved this story is really amazing and can't wait for more.

This battle is going to be pure chaos. Many will die... and the battle's outcome can change humanity completely.

awesome