Misuzu

Dying from drowning in a bathtub is just pathetic and embarassing. "How'd he die?" "...He drowned in a bathtub." "...Ah-" I'd start laughing, to be honest. I find that so stupid.

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Both oh their voices are beautiful - But that first cat just creeps me out...her facial expression and she doesn't blink AT ALL.

I love xionultima's music, and theirs fits this particular site more. KairiSora06, I LOVED yours. It seemed so professional.

It's not that so much as their speech-- they wont be able to swear or act completely like themselves. Disney are masters of violence. Imagine a Disney-fied world. Everyone's mother would be dead. If you think about it, in more than half of Disney movies, at least one of the parents, if not both are dead or missing. I find that odd...

5'7 is not freakishly tall, lol. I'm 5'8; shoe size 8.

From a more harsh point of view, (You want to be an author, so it's better you hear it now) there were a few grammatical errors, with some spelling ones. Try replacing common verbs with intresting ones. Thesaurus.com is yor best friend. You should really break up your paragraphs more clearly so we don't get lost while reading it. Also, when doing dialogue, You usually don't put more than one person speaking in the same sentence. It causes confusion with who is doing the speaking. Clean it up a bit and you're almost there.

I never said it was a bad thing. I'm just saying it is a bit typical, that's all.

Delighted.

...Wow. Seriously?

Tell me what you think, please? :] ~Epilogue~ Two worlds. Two spiritual beings. It all started with the Great One. In a universe of His own, the Great One created and created things of our world

Tell me what you think. :] [align=center]Crimson Chapter 1[/align] Feeling a wave of nausea sweep over his entire body, Jason sat up slowly in the hospital bed, his hand attached to the side of his head. He blinked twice and glanced around the room, looking for an answer to where he was. A nurse walked in briskly with tert taps of her heels clicking the ground, oblivious to his awake state. She checked his IV bag, replaced it with a new fuller one, and walked right back out the way she came in as if he didn't exist. Jason frowned, moaning aloud, "What happened last night..." He shook his head trying to clear up his memory, yet nothing came to mind but a now known ache that throbbed in his head. Groaning, he lay back down on the plush white pillows on his bed. Then, all of the sudden, two knocks sounded at the door, and his green eyes shot open, seeing who was the unexpected visitor. A smile was worn on her face, and he instantly recognized who she was. It was his girlfriend of three months, Erika. "So you finally decide to wake up, huh, sleeping beauty?" She joked, sitting on the edge of his bed carefully and having an overglazed stare at him as her smile soon faded as if someone took a needle and pricked her cheek. She kept her distance, and sat there with the same look on her face. "How long was I out?" Jason's expression changed to confusion, and he looked down, pulling out his white beater tank top to see if anything was on it. Nothing but a whole mess of blood stains. He wrinkled his brow and shifted his gaze back to her, ruffling his golden brown hair. "Do you know what the hell happened?" He asked her in a frustrated tone, hoping he'd get some answers already. "Yeah. And you were out for a week. You had me worried." She replied, glancing quickly at his neck and back down again. "But...I cant exactly say anything here." Her light blue eyes searched around the room as if she were trying to stray away from the subject, and she then stood up from the bed, twisting a piece of her california-blonde hair around her finger uncomfortably. This started to annoy Jason even more. What was so secretive that he couldn't hear at this instant? In anger, he slammed his fist down on the bed, sitting straight up, the heartbeat monitor started to beep too fast and Erika turned around swiftly, rushing over to his side and rubbing his shoulder. "You've gotta calm down, okay? You cant get your blood pressure up or-" She cut herself off, closing her gaping mouth and stopping her hand motions. "I just forgot, my mom is meeting me for dinner like, now. I'll visit you later, okay, Jason?" She assured, giving him a quick kiss on the cheek and heading out the door more quicker than necessary. "Bye!" He was more than mad by now, but he heeded her words and started rubbing his eyes, grumbling curses under his breath. What was she freaking staring at- He felt at his neck, where her eyes were basically blued to before, and trembled for a second. Feeling at the two marks on his neck, he knew what the big deal was. And he remembered what happened. The memories flashed through his mind like a movie in fast-forward. That week ago. That day his life changed.

According to my religion, it is wrong. In my opinion, however, people can choose whatever they want on this earth. It's what's going to happen to them after life that I can't prevent with that opinion.

I agree. It's a bit juvenile for my liking. Unless you want to appeal to younger kids, then its fine. But I'd like to see something a bit less typical.

The second one is quite lovely.

You're pretty cute. :]

Welcome. :]

That's me. Don't believe me, you dont have to. I edited it a bit on photoshop.

1. Perfect ? No. 2. Tall ? 5'8. If that's considered tall. 3. In your pajamas ? Mhm. 4. Left handed ? No. LAST- 1. Friend you saw? Lola. 2. Talked to on the phone : Jodi. 3. Person to text you : Ryan. 4. Was today better than yesterday ? No. FAVORITES : 1. Number : 21 2. Color(s) : Purple, red, turquoise. 3. Fruit : Peaches. 4. Place : Puerto rico; the beach at night. QUESTIONS & ANSWERS : Q: What was the first thing you did this morning when you got up? A: Laptop. Q: Do you have anything bothering you ? A: Of course. Q: What's the last movie you saw ? A: Bruno. Q: Where is the last place you went ? A: The movies. Q. Do you smile a lot ? A: Sometimes too often. Q: Do you wish upon stars ? A: Who doesn't? Q: Are you a friendly person ? A: I can when I want to be. If you tick me off, your dead on my list. Q: Where did you sleep last night ? A: My bed. What did you think I was going to say? A park bench? Q: When was the last time you cried ? A: I dont recall. Q: What was your last thought before going to sleep last night ? A: I dont remember. Q: Rate life as of right now one being bad ten being great? A: I dont rate my life due to the fact its always changing. Q: What do you hear right now ? A: Rain. Q: Does anything hurt right now ? A: My back is killing me. Q: What's your favorite month ? A: Anything in the season of winter. Q: What did you do last night ? A: Msn and tokbox. EIGHT EMOTIONS : 1. Are you missing someone right now : Dearly. 2. Are you happy ? Not at the moment. 3. Are you sad ? A little. 4. Are you bored ? Naturally. 6. Are you nervous ? No. 8. Are you tired ? It isnt 12 AM yet, so yes. ABOUT YOU : 001. Real name ? You can find that out on your own. 002. Nick names ? Simba, Godzilla >.>, Bubbe, Muscala, Mousie. 003. Eye color ? Icy blue. 004. Zodiac sign ? Leo. 005. Male or female ? Female. 009. Smart? More like amnesiastic. 010. Hair color? Blonde and brown under. 011. Tall or short? ...Wasn't this asked already? 013. Sweats or Jeans? Shorts, come on. 014. Phone or Camera ? Phone. 016. Drink or Smoke ? Drink. (rarely a mojito or two.) 020. Tattoos ? Possible a chinese symbol for 'dream' or 'eternity' one day. 021. Righty or lefty? You asked this one already, as well. FIRSTS : 024. First best friend? Lola. 025. first crush? 5th grade? 027. First pet? Two moronic cats. 028. First big vacation ? Dont remember. 049. Eating? Ate a bagel this morning. 050. Drinking ? Water. 052. I'm about to : Type? 053. Listening to ? Bring Me The Horizon. 054. Plans for today ? Nothing. 079. Drank bubbles ? What the hell? 080. Lost glasses/contacts? My reading glasses are in use. 081. Ran away from home ? Ish. 084. Broken someone's heart ? Yes. 085. Been arrested ? No. DO YOU BELIEVE IN : 090. Miracles? Yes. 089. Yourself ? No. 092. Heaven ? Yes. 093. Santa Claus ? Only idiots believe in such a fable at my age. 094. Love ? True love. Not the word thats being tossed around like its nothing.

Twilight Saga was great. I'm about to read Everything Is Illuminated. A friend made it sound amazing. I'm into more of the deep, strange, dark, and romantic novels.

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My favorite cutscene had to be when I thought Goofy died. I'm sorry, but he bothered me so much.

Saw Bruno the other day. I was quite disgusted.

Thank you. :]

Thank you everyone for the warm welcome.