Hello guys. I've sent this first part of the story to some members here, and they liked it a lot. So, I thought it'd be better to share it with everyone. Hope you like it

 

 

 

A Frightful Prevision

 

At a night, of May 29th of the year 2049, to be exact, something strange happened. But, before discovering what occurred, it’s better to know what had been happening in some time before that day. In the next lines, you will be able to read and put your imagination to work -- or at least give it a try -- in order to understand everything that this story has to tell.

 

-> March 11th <-

 

Today was an excellent day. Why? Because I got a promotion, and the rumors of some kind of “threat” coming to earth have been almost completely destroyed.. But, there are still some people who believe that we may be in risk of facing the last days of our lives -- of the humanity.

 

There were already many people who predicted a lot of things like that, but in the end, we are still here and alive, after all. Yet again, it’s still too early to say that this prediction is completely impossible to happen... Even I, who was instructed to calm the people, and tell them not to panic, still have doubts if this is really only a false rumor, or if it’ll really happen... But I pray that it doesn’t happen.

 

However, you might be interested in knowing what that prevision has to say.. But I think it’s still to early for me to tell it.. After all, what IS supposed to happen is only in some months, so I’ll tell about it in the near future. At least I managed to accomplish my duty; the people seems to be more calm now. We just need to carry on with our normal lives, that’s it. No need to worry.

 

 

-> March 30th <-

 

It has already passed some days since I last wrote in this diary. I can’t believe I am really enjoying this -- although it was an idea of my own daughter. But, returning to the main subject, there are more and more people supporting that prediction.. My duty has become very hard, even though people do respect me. When I’m not around, many of them begin to talk about it. I have been busy during this time I was off.. Me and the other politics -- we need to make sure that the people are not attracted by that idea -- but what if, we ourselves are?

 

I am not saying I believe in it, but I can’t tell the contrary as well.. Something just tells me this is not really wrong at all. But, who knows? It might be only my imagination. Maybe I’m just getting old. With almost fifty years, it’s hard to face what I face everyday. Well, let’s stop talking about my personal life... My main goal with this is to find out more about the rumors...

 

So, as I’ve said before, many people continue to fight for these ideas... And look, we haven’t fought since 1927... And, with our own people.. Where will this world end? Can’t people have different opinions without respecting the others? Maybe this is really the end of this race -- which was once a pure and good race, in which people treated the others well, and not only worried about their interests, the money -- its name? Humanity.

 

But, if we think properly, this wouldn’t be a bad end at all.. You might be calling me a crazy or something like that, but see: We’ve killed thousands of animals, and don’t come with the argument: “we need to eat”, because in those thousands, many were only killed because men have their own interests.. They want to make new things, and don’t care with what or who they have to cross down to achieve their goals. With time, the humans have been more and more selfish.

 

I remember.. In thirty years ago, we weren’t so bad as we are today. We had water, but what have we done with it? We spent it without caring about the consequences.. And who is going to pay for that? We. It can be sooner or later, but we will end paying for what we’ve done. Nowadays, it’s very rare to find the old and good water. With the new technology, and since we don’t have the food we used to, we have to eat some strange things made by these scientists.. But I can’t badmouth them, can I? Because, if it weren’t for them, we might have met our end sooner.. In 2040, 91.56% of the entire rain forests of the world were completely destroyed, and with it, many species of animals, our natural resources... But I ask: Is this really good enough? We have to get rid of the forests to get more technology? Really?

 

My answer to this question is this : No, we shouldn’t have done that. But who am I to say this to the entire humanity? I would end up being killed by the owners of the factories and others.. But, while our great technology doesn’t build a Time Machine, we have to hang on. Do you know how we live today? Thanks to the Factories and their gases that have destroyed our Ozone Layer, we were forced to build new houses.. Ones with Oxygen. Why? Because it’s very rare to find some nowadays. The rays of the sun have turned the temperature to 58.5Cº, which makes it almost impossible to hold on that temperature for more than twenty minutes.

 

Ahhh.. If only I could go back to 2012 or 2014, when our world was so amazingly good to live.. But I can’t blame it, because it was our fault -- we were the ones who didn’t listen to what was right in front of us -- The terrible future we were creating. Those amazing campaigns for the reforestation.. Nowadays, it doesn’t exist anymore. The Humanity is too busy to think about protecting the less than 10% we still have.

 

Oh.. It’s late. 11:59p.m. I need to go sleep now. Might come back and write more in this diary in a week or so. Who knows? Maybe more and more people will continue to support that prevision. Bye for now.

 

->April 12th <-

 

I guess I haven’t had much time to write here. More than one week, eh? But don’t worry, I have a good reason for that. Nowadays, our population is around 5,000,000,000 of people. Why am I informing this, you ask? Because between this incredibly big number, 1,000,000,000 of people have just began to support the prevision! My duty has become more and more difficult with time. So, I have to spend most of the time doing it. I’m getting tired of it.

 

Besides that, do you know what’s the worst? The day of the prevision is coming. It’s in a bit more than one month. As time passes, I’m getting more and more frightened. I know nothing will happen, but still... What if this time, the prevision is right? Well, you might be curious to know what the prevision says. However, I’m afraid I don’t have a proper definition , since it’s strange, because there are subgroups. Some say that it foresees the end of the World, others say that it’s the end of our Planet, that the world is going to be rebuilt, that some other species are going to invade the Earth... That’s why it’s so hard to block its advance, since it has many currents.

 

Although the politicians don’t seem to believe in that, I’ve been told that they’re making some new vehicles, which are capable of flying without oil, and that can use its lasers to destroy anything. What they do not know is that, even I am building a new escape route, for myself and my family. But I can’t talk about it now. However, I am praying that I don’t need to eventually use it in the future.

 

Wait! What? My friends -- the other politics responsible for maintaining the peace between the people -- have just warned me that the leader of the prevision has been spotted! I’m sorry, but I need to go right now. If we kill him, we may have a chance to stop the rumors right from the source! I’ll try to report the results of the battle as soon as possible. Good-bye and see you soon!

 

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Still very interesting.....

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Thanks guys! Your comments make me just be more happy to write! Next part coming tomorrow, so stay Tuned!

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March 10th

 

Hello. Sorry, it’s been a long time. I hope that, unlike me, you guys have been fine. I think that by my last words, you must be curious to know why these past few days haven’t been so great, right? Okay, I will tell you. First, I can resume everything in three words : politics and money.

 

First, as I’ve told before, I was just waiting for the reaction of the enemy. And, as I thought, they did not waste any time to show their response to my prevision. As their first measurement, they’ve begun to have a special TV program that has one hour, and is showed in every channel, to tell that the Humanity has nothing to fear, because while the politics are in charge, there is nothing that cannot be avoided. There is one good thing, though. I’ve heard that almost no one watches it, and instead, they just turn off their televisions.

 

Seems like God is helping me with his powers... So, as I was telling, they have taken more measurements. They forbade every and any person to speak about it in public, and said that if they capture someone talking about it, they’ll use a potion, which was recently created by some great scientists. Its effects, you ask? It forces the person to tell the truth no matter how much they want to hold it. Times have changed... Someone from thirty years ago could never imagine that something like this would ever exist. The future is here, and believe me, it’s not good.

 

However -- I created a place where people who follow my prevision and believe in it can be safe, and together -- it is called “House of the Believers”. I know it is not a very good name, but that was what I managed to come up with in these hard times I’m facing now. Okay, there is still some other things the government is doing. Please keep reading this, as you might be interested in knowing which measurements they’re doing.

 

1°- The government’s priority is to find the leader, the source of this “crazy and silly prevision” -- at least that’s how they call it -- and eliminate him or her at once. They think that if they can get me, they’ll slowly wipe out anyone who tries to replace me, and with the followers without a leader, it’ll be easily to annihilate them.

 

2°-Any person who is courageous enough to proclaim himself/herself a follower of my prevision, will be taken to the jail, and will remain there until they find and kill the leader. It’s pretty obvious -- they want to end us one by one -- and surely, they’ll use the potion on everyone they manage to catch.

 

Well, these are the measurements they’ve taken so far, but I bet they will create many laws with time. However, I have nothing to fear, since I’m fighting for what I believe in, and for what our God really wants! I have to go now. See you soon, and hope you’re as curious as I am to find out what the government will do to get us! So, stay tuned for my next entry!

 

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Dude... try to write books or something! You have a talent!!!

March 29th

 

Hello, my dear friends! It’s been a while, hasn’t it? Well, today I have good news to tell you! A lot of people have been drew to my prevision! Seems like God is doing his part very well! So, it won’t be too hard to make everyone believe on it! We just keep getting more and more followers every day! I’m feeling like a real leader! But, of course, there are still the POLITICS, whose goal is to stop me at all costs. But they won’t find me, not yet. I’m doing every thing I can to slow them!

 

You might be wondering why the people are getting too attracted by my prevision, aren’t you? Then, I’ll tell why. I have taken some measurements to get more and more followers, and I’ll tell you these measurements now.

 

-I have made a campaign on the Internet, and the page has already 679,999 likes! The computers nowadays are what people most enjoy, and so I couldn’t avoid using it!

 

-I’ve been explaining the situation of our world in my Campaigns, using these arguments:

 

*The Earth has lost most of its rain forests, because men don’t care about the nature, but only for their money and interests, which has lead us to have almost 10% of what we once had.

 

*The factories... They just keep polluting our Ozone Zone, and thanks to that, the Oxygen has become very rare. Because of that, we need to live in special houses -- which were created by the biggest enemy of Religion -- the Science. We can’t get back to when we still had a lot of Oxygen, but we can save what we still have by stopping the Factories at all costs!

 

*The animals of our world -- they have been almost completely wiped out because men need clothes and other futile things. They keep forgetting that we won’t have food if we keep killing our animals.

 

*It’s all the Humanity’s fault. There is no one else to blame. We’ve done everything... We almost destroyed the Nature that our beloved God created with so much detail and care... But we still can re compensate him, by preserving the little we still have!

 

These are the ones. Pretty convince, aren’t they? I think I’m doing my mission pretty well. Hope God is happy with how I’m doing what he asked me. Now, I just have to wait until the entire Humanity is attracted by it! And then, we will save our world from the wrath of the Heavens! Yes, we are finally achieving our goal!

 

Oh, before I end this entry, I have to tell you guys about another dream I’ve had. I was able to talk with God again! It was so wonderful! I bet he’s always with me, in my heart! Okay, you’ll be able to read our conversation in the next paragraph!

 

“My friend, I have some more things to tell you.”, he said. “Okay, I am here. Just tell me, please!”, I said. “You are doing a fine job, indeed... But as you may be well aware, there are people who won’t be changed without a... a bit of my magic, right?”, he asked. “Oh... you mean the politics and the people who loves money?”, I asked. “Yes, you won’t have to worry about them. I’ll put our idea on their heads slowly. They’ll be attracted to it with time, and you’ll be able to save the Earth from destruction. You’ll be a hero.”, he said. “Okay, my God. I just have to thank you again for choosing me. I’m so grateful”, I said. “No problem. You’re one of the best people I’ve ever seen. I was right to choose you. Now you need to wake up, good-bye, my friend.”, he said.

 

And then I woke up. I had this dream yesterday. I was so proud to hear his words... I am so honored! I just have to wait more so everyone will begin to hear me! See ya when I write my next entry! Stay safe, and do something good for our world!

 

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I loved it! It really gets you thinking about what's going to happen. I also loved the title. It fits the story good, I think.

Like others have been saying, you should really look into getting published, Lu Xun. You got some serious talent.

Thanks for the comments ;D

 

 

April 10th

 

Hello, my friends. Today I’m so happy! I’ve heard that around 20 or 30% of the entire population of our world has already begun to follow my religion! Hahaha! I’m feeling so good! I’ll be the one who will save the HUMANITY!

 

But, as you all may know -- there are still some things that must be taken care of. These politics -- I hope God is doing his part. However, I’m aware that someone that works for them has already found me... And, thanks to that, I’m moving to the country that accepted my Religion to rule it -- We’ll rename it “Sacred and Pure Land” once we arrive there.

 

I’m sure that it won’t be easy, and there will be soldiers to stop us... But, now is the time that these powers said he’d gave me must appear! It’s to save us -- the ones who believe on him, and that are willing to fight to save our beloved world!

 

Everything has been carefully planned, but I still think that these politics will find us, and try to kill me. They must think that once I’m dead, they will succeed on recovering the people’s trust and wiping out my prevision.

 

Ahh! I’ve had another dream, in which I talked with God. It was yesterday, and here you go the details! Enjoy the next paragraphs!

 

It took me some time to sleep, but once I managed to do it, I slept like a stone. Then, I heard a voice -- the same voice I’ve heard in the other times -- which asked how I was going. “I’m doing fine, and we’re about to go to our own country! I can’t believe we’ve grown so much with so little time!”, I answered. “Yes, yes... But be careful, from now on, your true journey starts -- it won’t be easy, and very dangerous... But I’ll be with you all the time.”, he said. “Okay... But how will you help me? I’m pretty sure you can’t just appear and use your powers... Right?”, I asked. “Yes, unfortunately I can’t do that. I’d be violating the free will I gave to your kind, but I can act indirectly.”, he said.

 

Then, for some time, we stopped talking, and I felt incredibly strong. And so, we began to talk once again. I was the one to start the conversation this time. “I’m feeling so stong... What did you do?”, I asked. “I used a bit of my magic on you.”, he replied. “Does that allow me to do something that no other human can?”, I asked. “Of course, you’ll be like a Semi-God.”, he replied. “Can you tell me which special things will I be able to do?”, I asked. “No, I’m sorry, but no. You’ll have to wait until you actually need to use them. But don’t worry, they’ll protect you from any harm. But not I must take my leave.”, he said.

 

I woke up, and I was still feeling very strong. So, I contacted my strategists and we began planning our escape... I pray that it works... But it doesn’t matter, I will defend my people from anything! With these new powers, I’m invincible...

 

But I need to go now. We will depart in a few days, and therefore I need to be ready. See you soon. Hope you pray for my success.

April 21th

 

We’ve successfully arrived in our new home! We are now safe! Hahaha! We will save the Earth from these monsters who just think about money and their own interests... I think you’d be interested in knowing the details about our last battle... It wasn’t so easy as we thought.

 

First, as already expected, there were soldiers who tried to kill me, and stop the followers of my Religion. We offered a resistance, but one of their soldiers accidentally shot at a baby of my followers. Both sides were sad with this event, and so the medics of my Religion quickly arrived, and treated the baby. It was like a miracle -- it didn’t die.

 

So, with the baby cured, their soldiers began to advance once again. But, this time, they had to deal with me myself. I just raised my arms, and powerful winds arrived from nowhere -- even I was surprised at that moment -- and these winds forced them to retreat. This was the power God had told me. I couldn’t believe I was the one who had done it, but there was no time for that.

 

So, without any obstacles in our way, we managed to arrive at our new home, with the exceptions of a few people who had died in the battle -- they’ll be forever remembered as heroes, just like me -- who gave their lives for their ideals.

 

Now, victory for our side was almost eminent -- we had surrounded the small country with soldiers, and the palace where I’m living now -- it is almost impossible to attack it. And look, just a few weeks until the day of the Prevision arrives! Hahaha! We will win! God is at our side, after all. There is nothing that can defeat us!

 

However, I’m sorry, but I need to go to a meeting to talk about our future plans. I’ll write my next daily report soon! Be safe until then!

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