Chapter One: Sora96's Quest

"I've had enough of this bullshit!" Sora96 practically shouts at his monitor. "I'm sick and tired of not being treated like I'm being important around here!" He complained to nobody in particular. "Not even Snow respects me!" He said, wiping a tear from his eye. "...that's it. I'll kidnap DChiuch... and force him to make me an Administrator..." He said, sniffling. "I'll show them that I'm important, too." He realized he had left a Tinychat page open, and his microphone was on. The username said "guest18152" so he shrugged it off as some noob member. He closed out of the tab and began typing out a long debate about why Miranda Kerr was sexier than Keira Knightley on an open notepad window.

 

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After he finished getting dressed and disguised, Sora96 put a rag in a small bucket of warm water which had chamomile and ground up sleeping pills, hoping it would be as effective as the normal drug. He wrung it out and balled it up in his hand. He went out his window and stuck to the shadows, and began his trek to Daniel's house.

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Daniel laid on the couch, his head on Aaron's lap. Aaron had somehow fallen asleep in his upright position, but Daniel disregarded it, his eyes fixated on the television screen. Sora96 slowly opened Daniel's window and slipped in quietly. He shut it behind him and pressed his back up to the backside of the couch. He could tell Aaron was asleep, so he snuck around the couch. As soon as he saw Daniel, he pressed the rag up to his nose. "Brayd--" Daniel was about to say, but lost consciousness due to the heavy does of sleeping drugs.

 

He slowly drug Daniel off of Aaron's lap and tried to lift him, but Daniel was too heavy. He didn't notice Daniel's phone fall out of his pocket. He drug Daniel out of the house through the window, closing it cautiously behind him.

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Meanwhile, Shana was in the locker room with baylaust and hatok.

 

 

Alright, I'm done writing. I promise the next chapter will be much funnier. For now.. I just need to try to get some sleep. >_>'' and sorry it's short. this went through SO many stages of development.

Edited November 9, 201212 yr by Snow

This is immensely entertaining.

Little known fact: rubber automatically makes bullets completely harmless

Little known fact: rubber automatically makes bullets completely harmless

 

Not necessarily. They can cause permanently damaged internal organs.

Not necessarily. They can cause permanently damaged internal organs.

 

Also, it can do all the things a bullet can do because it's moving really fast

She looked over to see TheApprenticeofKingMickey dragging an unconscious baylaust into a storage closet.

 

I'm surprised no one's pointed this out yet, since you all seem to be so opinionated about topics such as this.

Hey Snow. in the first chapter, it shown that a guest was listening to Sora96's conversation.

are u gonna use that guest for helping the KH13 gang find daniel? if so, then let me play as that guest, if that's allright. I wanna be part of the story.

 

Screw all fanfics, this is the best story ever!

Edited November 27, 201212 yr by Xamtweth-reconnected

Hey Snow. in the first chapter, it shown that a guest was listening to Sora96's conversation.

are u gonna use that guest for helping the KH13 gang find daniel? if so, then let me play as that guest, if that's allright. I wanna be part of the story.

 

Screw all fanfics, this is the best story ever!

 

Amen.... by the way draw almost done...

Best story ever!!

I'm dying from laughter after reading all this. And it's only Chapter 8. This, is, GOOD, STUFF.

 

A plane doesn't simply land in front of Wal Mart, but who gives a firetruck

Hey Snow. in the first chapter, it shown that a guest was listening to Sora96's conversation.

are u gonna use that guest for helping the KH13 gang find daniel? if so, then let me play as that guest, if that's allright. I wanna be part of the story.

 

Screw all fanfics, this is the best story ever!

 

that guest

is something that will twist the plot

so I'm sorry, but no

Snow, this is getting a bit insulting...

Snow, this is getting a bit insulting...

 

Bee had requested that you cry over her death, if tht's what's insulting you

Chapter 8: Blackest FridayShe looked over to see TheApprenticeofKingMickey dragging an unconscious baylaust into a storage closet.

I do not approve of this. I find this offensive and insulting as well as OOC. I know this story is for laughs but what you're implying is taking things too far.

Snow, this is getting a bit insulting...

I have to agree with coolwings. The way you're portraying and presenting people now are turning out to be a bit much. You're offending and insulting a lot of people not only with the execution but with the implied themes (such as rape and prostitution among others). Snow, you need to need to tone it down. And maybe add a warning at the beginning of each chapter that some content may offend others. And if a member doesn't like how they're portrayed, I want you to change it.Just like how I want you to erase the phrase of me dragging an unconscious baylaust out of the chapter.

The story needs more Door

 

The first chapters had me in tears. :,D

 

But I have to admit, some points are disturbing...

I do not approve of this. I find this offensive and insulting as well as OOC. I know this story is for laughs but what you're implying is taking things too far.I have to agree with coolwings. The way you're portraying and presenting people now are turning out to be a bit much. You're offending and insulting a lot of people not only with the execution but with the implied themes (such as rape and prostitution among others). Snow, you need to need to tone it down. And maybe add a warning at the beginning of each chapter that some content may offend others. And if a member doesn't like how they're portrayed, I want you to change it.Just like how I want you to erase the phrase of me dragging an unconscious baylaust out of the chapter.

Okay, I'll do that.

Wings meant that Keys was insulted, and I asked Keys about it, and they said they were fine.

Edited November 28, 201212 yr by Snow

Okay, I'll do that.

Wings meant that Keys was insulted, and I asked Keys about it, and she said she was fine.

 

 

KEYS IS A GIRL?

Okay, I'll do that.

Wings meant that Keys was insulted, and I asked Keys about it, and she said she was fine.

 

No I just used Keys as an example. I don't know if anyone got insulted really, I just said it sounded insulting. I've told you the rest.

No I just used Keys as an example. I don't know if anyone got insulted really, I just said it sounded insulting. I've told you the rest.

 

 

I wasn't insulted though.

And Keys didn't ask me to change and didn't really tell me h-- *their gender either, so I don't think there's a problem.

I wasn't insulted though.

But you said you were

that guestis something that will twist the plotso I'm sorry, but no

K, I understand, but if its alright, in the future chapters, can u add me into the story?

K, I understand, but if its alright, in the future chapters, can u add me into the story?

Open a chat with me so I can talk to you and get to know you so I don't offend you when I portray you, okay?

Open a chat with me so I can talk to you and get to know you so I don't offend you when I portray you, okay?

When I find time, I chat, but I'm using mobile now so I'm not gonna have time.

Sora96's response:

 

I thought this was about my lust for power? 

 

I thought they were on a plane to Australia? What are they doing at American stores?

 

What about DChiuch?

 

What the hell is Aaron doing? Last I checked him and his fellow Melbourne based members live closer to me than anyone else on the site?

 

How the heck is everyone on the same plane? I doubt you're all from the same state let alone country.

Sora96's response:

 

I thought this was about my lust for power? 

 

I thought they were on a plane to Australia? What are they doing at American stores?

 

What about DChiuch?

 

What the hell is Aaron doing? Last I checked him and his fellow Melbourne based members live closer to me than anyone else on the site?

 

How the heck is everyone on the same plane? I doubt you're all from the same state let alone country.

my logic defies all rational thought