(thanks to  for the cover)
Chapter I

Sora96 was an eccentric fellow. There are times when he is kind and ambiguous. And other times where he is driven mad with lust. Lust for a certain thing he cannot have enough of. Power. This is the tale of how he tried, became, and was an administrator. But with the loyal members who could not let such a thing happen, they banded together and formed a brotherhood against Sora96's evil. This, is their tale.

Sora96 was doing his usual things. Browsing other KH sites for new images and videos to download and put on KH13. That was how he normally did his work. It was worth some respect, but he grossly exaggerated this. Sometimes he would cry himself to sleep because he did not get the respect he believed he deserved. He was browsing the internet for more images when he saw something on the left, reading "MAN, 32, KIDNAPPED FROM HIS HOME." He read it closely. "That's it... That's what I'll do. I'll kidnap Daniel and force him to make me an admin... that will surely work."  He started laughing quietly to himself, his laugh slowly rising in intensity until he started coughing. He cleared his throat and switched tabs. Nobody was in his tinychat room except for 'guest-694316'. Probably someone who wanted to chat but glitched out or left. He thought, closing the tab.

He went on eBay to purchase choloroform and a black, skin-tight stealth suit that looked as if it would show off his manly curves. Gotta look sexy if I'm going to kidnap someone.

-

Snow was raising hell in status updates with other people, typing in caps and constantly questioning their sexuality like an average Call of Duty player.  He was getting so wrapped up in the intense moment that he clicked the "Add comment" button rapidly and made about 11 copies of his comment. "hehehe, oops." He said. RoxSoxKH was spamming his chat and calling him an asshole for leaving him in The Last of Us's online lobby to go play GTA V and for his sensless comments on said status. It was at the point now where he was yelling what he was typing out in an inarticulate and disturbingly high-pitched voice. "HAHAHA FGT I BET U SUK CAK 4 FUN U HERMAPHRUDIT POSER HHEUHESUHEUHAUGGJDFAJ!!1!" Jim shook his head at the rash of comments that came in on his status. He typed out an elegantly worded response on how you can't "flim-flam the jim-jam" unless you're a certain member.

-

Sora96's skin-tight suit and chloroform rag arrived in the mail shortly after he ordered them. "Thank you based Amazon Prime." He said in a swooning voice, opening the package. There was a neatly folded rag and what seemed to be a jar full of a strange liquid. A letter from Amazon was inside the rag which said, "Have fun with your kidnapping mission!" Sora96 chuckled quitely to himself, slipping on the suit over his clothes. He put the rag and jar in the suit's fanny pack and started to run towards the tree in a crouched manner as the James Bond theme started playing. Not the original tune, but the theme from Casino Royale. The camera shifts to next door, where DChiuch lived. There was a few trees seperating their houses, which made sneaking over there easy. He ran to the window and dove, somersaulting underneath the window. He opened the window slowly.

DChiuch was laying down on the couch, his head nestled on Aaron's lap. He was slowly fading in and out, about to fall asleep, as Aaron already had. Sora96 slid in like a snake and rolled to the leftmost side behind the couch. He went down flat on the floor and crawled to the front of the couch. DChiuch wasn't able to see him because his eyes were fixated on the TV set, where Twilight New Moon was playing. DChiuch swooned when Bella was trying to kill herself to make Edward's hologram appear and tell her not to do it. Sora96 dipped his rag into the jar and slowly brought it over DChuich's face, who did not notice because of the movie. When DChiuch fell asleep, Sora96 put the rag and jar back into his fanny pack and slowly drug DChuich off the couch. Aaron snorted violently, making Sora96 stop for a second, but continue after Aaron settled down. He slung DChiuch over his shoulder and went back out the window.

-

And that's chapter one of the ReMIX. More members will be included. I'm toning it down a little this time so I don't offend anyone, but if you haven't figured it yet, this is a parody, and is no way meant to realistically represent another member.

brought to you by snow
your fony yimyams and moomoos dilevurer

Edit:
If you would like to be in this story, please let me know in either a post or a chat message. If I don't know much about you, take that into consideration since your character will be subject to whatever ideas I may have for it. Anything your character does or says will not reflect my views on you and will be there solely for humor, not to offend or belittle you. People already in it are people I have at least a slight idea of what would offend them and what wouldn't, which is why they're in it. The things they do or say don't represent how I feel about them, and are just in for humor. If something in my story offends you, please let me know and I'll edit it accordingly.

Edited December 28, 201311 yr by Snow

I was just thinking about this thread yesterday. I was sad I'd never see it concluded.You sir, are a freakin' mind reader.

I figure it's either now or never you know?

Yes it has. But alas your wait is near over. Once I have a layout of the entire story ready to go off of and the hype is sufficiently rekindled, it's back baby.

THIS THREAD HAS BEEN REVIVED! PRAISE DA LAWD!!!

Don´t play with our feelings Rox....

Don´t play with our feelings Rox....

I'm not playing boy-o. It's happening.

It's coming tomorrow anywhere between 8am and 5pm.

 

Brace yourselves.

It's coming tomorrow anywhere between 8am and 5pm.Brace yourselves.

My body is ready 

My body is ready

It better be, cause it's gonna be a whopper.

I thought it might be nice for you guys who haven't read in a while or haven't read ever to have

 

A RECAP OF PREVIOUS EVENTS:

Sora96 made a declaration once and for all that he would have his power through any means.He had kidnapped DChiuch, administrator of the website KH13, and was holding him hostage until he relinquished his powers to him.Aaron, DChiuchs friend and possible lover, caught on to the happenings, and pleaded for the members of KH13 to help him get DC back before something terrible happened.The members answered the call, going through hell and highwater to get to Australia, the backdrop to our little adventure.Some died along the way, such as the intrepid hero Tails, who had about three line of dialogue. Noobles fell at Sora96's hand, being pushed down the basement staircase. A tearful funeral was had.Zola and Xiro had arrived through means of magic. Jilly Shears had come by way of party boat, where he had banged celebrities and fought Krakens along the way. Some arrived by plane, others by sea, some by jetpack, some by ­the power of their hearts and imaginations, but all had arrived.And they all had done jack shit since they got there.RoxSox tried to motivate them to do what they came there to do, find DC, and stop Sora96's tyranny, but he was met by disinterest and general boredom.Meanwhile, DC escaped the clutches of the evil Sora96, breaking free of the ropes that bound him.This is where we left our characters. Our protagonists disinterested in being protagonists, and our predator losing his prey.

And now... we return...

This is what keeps me going in life

LUST 4 POWER -HD ReMIX-
Chapter X-2: Part 2
The Finale of Act 1 part 1 of 2 parts

 

Sora96 pushed through the Australian wilderness on short breath. He had been tracking DC, who had escaped him (for now), and he was hot on the trail. "I was going to give him time to come to an informed decision... but now... he will either give me what I want or suffer, that will be his punishment for trying to dodge the bullet."
-
DChiuch was struggling to escape. His hands and feet were still bound, so he had been hopping his way to safety the whole time. "What... was... I... thinking..." he said between hops "when... I... let... him... on... the staff." He then tripped over a rock sized spider and fell on his face, as was the way things tended to go in Australia. It was then that Sora96 spotted him.
-
RoxSox had given up on trying to motivate the other members. He didn't know what had come over them, but they all seemed utterly disinterested in going after what they originally came for. Whether they were all sitting around watching Australia's Got Talent or sleeping, nothing he did seemed to catch their attention, and so, he had given up. He'd renovated Sora96's former bedroom (they had all taken up asylum in his house. RoxSox never thought it strange that his parents were nowhere to be found.) into something of a lair.
He had brought out the sheets encrusted with... stuff... and burned them. He had wiped the harddrive of S96's computer, for all the downloaded material proved too much of a distraction. And he had exchanged the bed for a stylish futon, which he now sat upon drinking a Mountain Dew, with a bag of gummi bears at his side.

There was a knock at the door. "I'm very busy." lied RoxSox as he knocked back what was left in the can. "No you're not" said the knocker as she walked in the room.
Before RoxSox stood Shana. She crossed her arms and looked at him with a very disappointed expression. "We're not trying hard enough." she said after a few seconds of silence too long.
"I've tried everything in my repertoire to get them to give a shit, and nothing has worked. If you wanna go give a rousing speech go right ahead I'll be here."
Shana nodded, and then left the room without another word. RoxSox's eyes followed her as she did, and when she was gone, he said under his breath "you'll do a better job then me."
He didn't know it, but she'd heard.
-
Zola and Xiro were sitting on the roof of the house. Zola had called upon her power as a White Mage to float a Firetruck across the ocean, and had then bestowed on Xiro the powers of a Black Mage. Together they were unstoppable. "You ever like... think about life and stuff." said Xiro. It should be noted that he was still nursing a concussion. "Totally."

 

Jilly Shears was sitting on a La-Z-Boy in the living room, playing Pokemon, while Lalablah and Caity sat in the corner exchanging various drug related stories. Contrary to popular belief, Jilly had neither an interest nor experience in this topic, so he continued playing Pokemon.

Megaman X and Flaming Lea were conspicuously absent. As were King Riku and Queen Tery. What the two couples could possibly be busy doing was a mystery to absolutely no one everyone.

 

Jim was watching Shrek 2 for the 5,000,004,678th time on the Living Room TV, reciting every line of dialogue from memory.

 

TheTimidLight was watching Rise of the Guardians for the 2,000,000,320th time. The only reason the number was less impressive then Jim's was on account of Rise of the Guardians having been released on DVD for a lesser amount of time.

 

Winner's Proof was in the kitchen making delicious food, tasting it as he went along.

 

All the other people were also doing some quirky shit or something.

 

Basically, every single person in the house was doing absolutely nothing. Which was not conducive to progress nor entertaining fiction, and it was time that someone cracked the whip.

 

-

 

Sora96 stood before DChiuch. "You ran from me. Why oh why did you run." Sora96 as he reached down and picked DC up off the ground, taking the ropes off his hands as he did it. "Now I'm going to have to do something I didn't want to." Sora96 then punched DC square in the face, which made him fall right back onto the ground again. "All you had to do was make me an Admin, and we'd have skipped this step entirely." he then kicked DC while he was down, eliciting a groan of pain, followed by "Fine. Fine... I'll make you a goddamn Admin."

Sora96 smiled, and pulled a phone out of his pocket. He brought it to the KH13 site, and handed it to DC. "Sign in. Make it happen."

 

And DC did. He pressed the buttons in the right sequence, and with a second of hesitation, he promoted Sora96's staff status to Administrator.

 

Sora96 suddenly felt very strange. A strange sensation was overcoming home, starting in his chest and working it's way through the rest of his body. It felt like... it felt like power. And then it felt like pain. Terrible pain. Sora fell to his knees, his back turned to DC, who had untied his feet and was now standing over 96, watching in silence. And then, Sora felt it overcome him. The power had made its way through him, and now the process was coming to an end. Sora96's hair began to glow yellow, and what was once pain was now pleasure.

  Sora96 had gone Super Staff.

 

-

 

Shana yelled at the top of her lungs. "EVERYBODY LISTEN UP."

The members in the vicinity all shifted their attention away from what they were doing towards her. The members not in the vicinity started to gather. And when Shana was confident that everybody of importance had gathered, she started to speak.

RoxSox had not left his room, but rather stood in the threshhold, listening.

 

"Aaron called us here for a very important reason. DChiuch was kidnapped from his home by someone he trusted, and as long as we are on this earth we can not let such a trespass go unchecked. That is why we came. To help. To end this before it began. But you'll all sat around twiddling your dicks for so long that it might already be too late! How does that make you feel? Does it feel good? Does it feel good to let someone down?" She looked over the room, looking at the guilty faces of them all.

 

-

 

Sora96 looked to DC. "Is this the power you've always had?" he asked. DC nodded and replied "It is as much a curse as it is a gift... you will find yourself wanting more of that power. But the only way to get it is to take it from another. I could never bring myself to claim Aaron's power as my own, and so I've fought that urge. But I fear... I fear you won't show the same restraint."

 

And DC couldn't have been more right. Sora96 now had immense power... but he wanted more. And according to what he'd heard... there was he could get it. "So I all I have to do... is take it from you?"

 

DC nodded.

 

Without a moments hesitation, Sora96's hands were around DChiuch's throat.

 

-

 

"Right now at this very moment, we are failing our mission. Sora96 is out there and he has DC. And yet we do nothing. Does that seem right to you?"

 

-

 

Sora96's grip tightened as the light slowly left DC's eyes. "Maybe if you hadn't run away... I'd be more charitable."

 

-

 

"I say we get off our asses, and we go save DC!"

 

-

 

DC was grasping desperately for breath. Every second that went by his life came closer to an end. But he wouldn't let it end this way. Not without a fight. And so he called upon the power that he had worked so hard to keep dormant. And then all at once, it erupted from within him, his hair glowing and energy pulsating from the palms of his hands, he broke free from Sora96's grasp.

 

He sent Sora96 skyward with an uppercut. He then flew into the air, and slammed the flying boy into the ground, leaving a small crater. 96 crawled out, and then propelled himself at the airborne DC. The two grappled in mid air, and 96 quickly lost the upper hand. DC applied his skills, and gave Sora96 a quick one-two combo to the gut and face, which sent 96 flying. DC chased after, chaingrabbing him and applying the same combo, over and over until they were a mile from their original starting point. Sora96 plummeted to the ground, near unconscious. DC set down on the ground next to him. "You can't win, 96. Power isn't everything. Sometimes you need skill to back it up."

 

Sora96 reached out and grabbed DC's ankled, ripping his feet out from under him. He then used his incredible speed to go around DC's back, and as DC stood, Sora96 summoned energy into his fist, and punched DC straight through the back, and out his chest.

 

DChiuch fell to his knees. Dead before he hit the ground. And Sora96 stood above him, his still beating heart in hand.

 

Energy flowed out of DChiuch's corpse and into Sora96. A whole new sort of power now flowed into him.

 

And he smiled.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

credit to Squirting Demyx for the Super Staff Sora GIF.

 

Discussion is encouraged. I really wanna see what your guys actual thoughts are. Likes and "Awesome chapter!"s are nice and I love them, but I really feel the most gratification when I see people talk about what's going on, Gives me more to go off of.

Edited August 29, 201411 yr by RoxSox

This is pure gold

LUST 4 POWER -HD ReMIX-
Chapter X-2: Part 2
The Finale of Act 1

part 2 of 3 parts

 

 

Zola and Xiro had not heard Shana's summons. They were too busy chillaxing on the roof, talking about things. It was then that Zola spotted an interesting sight in the distance. A lightshow of sorts. Glowing golden streams of light going back and forth, dancing across the evening sky, before setting down on the ground, where one of the lights then went out. "...something tells me we should look into that."

 

Shana was still trying to get the members to give a shit, to varied success. She had tried rousing speeches and inspirational words and insults, and still nothing worked. RoxSox had finally left the the threshhold of his room and was now sitting on the coffee table, at Shanas feet, chugging a Mtn. Dew.

 

It was then that Zola charged into the room. "I saw something..."

 

She then explained what she had seen, painting a vivid picture. "I don't know if it has anything to do with them... but, something in my gut tells me we need to check it out." This proved to be all the motivation the members needed. The lot of them packed up their shit, and within a small amount of time, they had set out.

 

Aaron set off with them. He had finally gotten over his week long hangover and was ready and able to join the search. Before they left, he had confided in RoxSox a terrible feeling he had had a little while ago. "Like it was a legit disturbance in the force."

 

RoxSox didn't want to alarm him by telling him he'd had the same feeling.

-

 

Sora96 had not moved. He had been still as a statue ever since that climatic moment when he'd...

He was having a hard time facing the reality of the situation, but never did he feel bad about it. He was simply processing the information of what had occurred, while at the same time his body was processing the energy it had recieved.

 

-

 

The members had set out on foot. The sighting Zola had didn't occur but a few miles away by her estimation, and so it was decided amongst them that walking was preferrable to figuring out the logistics of fitting their 20+ numbers into a Firetruck.

 

The group had plenty of time to talk amongst themselves along the way. Queen Tery (Trey) and King Riku (Briana) finally acknowledged the fact that Briana was very very pregnant. They had formerly glossed over the fact, despite the massive bump being obvious. "When is she due?" asked Think Pink, "He's due pretty soon. Haven't figured out a name for sure yet but we'll keep you updated." said Trey.

 

RoxSox and Winner's Proof were discussing the weather. Which was a rather difficult conversation to maintain, because the weather in Australia rarely changed, it seemed. For the duration of their time there it had hovered between hot and really hot. They changed the subject to women, which again was a hard discussion to maintain, for RoxSox had no knowledge of the matter.

 

Zola and Xiro were practicing their magic on one another. "Okay when I cast this spell, you have to reflect it in time, alright?" said Xiro, twirling his staff. Zola nodded, and the two of them stopped walking briefly to get into position. Xiro cast Fira, and the ball of flame erupted from the end of his staff. Zola cast reflect, and his spell met hers. She had blocked it in time, but they had overlooked the small detail that reflect bounces the attack back and now Xiro was running around, his entire body engulfed in flames. After a bit of time, Xiro managed to cast Water on himself.

 

Quite the site to behold, really.

 

Lalablah was lost in her own head, looking up at the sky, (the sun had now fully set, and the stars were glowing in full view.). As she wasn't looking where she was going, she of course did not see the small Hedgehog cross her path until it was too late, and for the second time, she kicked Colonel Random. Col. Random had been going on his own adventure, ever since he left the plane he had arrived to Australia on. He had seen things and done things you wouldn't believe.

His small little hedgehog body was punted a few yards away, where the softness of his own fur buffered his landing. He stood up on his four legs, and yelled "Hey! Watch where you're going!" in his squeaky little Hedgehog voice. RoxSox broke away from Winner and approached the fluffy Colonel. "Random! Fancy seeing you here!" RoxSox said as he picked the Hedgehog up and placed him in his shirt pocket. "I shall be your valiant steed." he said to Random, and he rejoined the group.

 

The Colonel entertained the group with some of his wild stories for some time. "...and then, her husband shows up!" but it was then that Zola interrupted to say "I think we're getting close."

 

Everybody shut up and started to pay attention to their surroundings. They split up into seperate search parties to comb the area.

 

It wasn't too long before they found the crater. "Hey guys!? You should come look at this."

 

It was a large crater, about 10 feet in diameter and perhaps 4 foot deep at its epicenter. "What could have caused this? There's no meteor or anything in the hole... upon closer examination they started to notice that the hole in the center was vaguely human shaped.

"That's a bit spooky." said Rox.

"Scary..." said Daniel Black.

"Skeletons." said Jim.

After a bit of a chuckle, they got back down to business. "How did this get here, who put it here, and why." "All of those are very good questions. And I have the answer for none of them."

 

It was then that they heard the laughing.

 

~

 

 

 

 

 

One more part of this and then Act I will be complete. Also it should be noted that this is part 2 out of 3 of chapter X-2: Part 2, the finale of Act I. I don't even know how it got this complicated.

 

Discussion is encouraged, and Part 3 will be up shortly.

Edited August 29, 201411 yr by RoxSox

Did...did you just kill off DC?

 

But lmao I was not expecting that super staff gif. I nearly choked laughing at it

 

10/10 chapter would tap

 

EDIT SHIT I POSTED THIS AT THE SAME TIME YOU POSTED THE NEW NEW CHAPTER THIS IS ABOUT PART ONE LMAO

 

EDIT 2: hilarious as usual. I especially liked the part of Xiro bursting into flames. Seems like something he would do

 

Damn quota >_<

Edited August 29, 201411 yr by Sora.

LUST 4 POWER

-HD ReMIX-

Chapter X-2: Part 2

Part 3 out of 3 Parts

The Epic Finale of Act I

 

Laughter was always something attributed to joy. And granted, this laughter was indeed joyous. But there's something to be said for a sound that can illicit simultaneous rage and fear, and this laugh did exactly that.

 

The group consisted of many members. RoxSox, Winner's Proof, Colonel Random, Lalalablah, Megaman X, Flaming Lea, Queen Tery, King Riku, Caity Raindrop, Crona, Jaune Arc, Daniel Black, Jim, Jilly Shears, Zola, Xiro, Xylek, TheTimidLight, Think Pink, and Aaron. The sound of this laughter alone told them that not all of them would be making it out of their immediate situation alive.

 

They all watched as Sora96 hovered in front of him. He carried a body in his arms, which he dropped in front of them. "Look at what has become of your precious leader" Aaron was on his knees at this point, huddled over the corpse. "I have obtained a power unlike any other. You can no longer stop me. It would be best if you all went home." No one seemed terribly responsive at this idea.

 

There was a long quiet, broken only by Aaron's sobs, and the occasional chuckle from Sora96. They were all speechless. Processing information like this takes time. But alas, someone broke the silence... "Who do you think you are?" said RoxSox. "Why is it that you seem to think you're entitled to-" before RoxSox could finish his statement, Sora96 had released a blast of energy in his direction, and Rox flew to the side in a crumpled heap..

 

This caused the rest of the group to charge forward, shock overcoming fear, and before anyone could fully grasp what was happening, people were falling to the ground dead all around them... first it was Crona, vaporized by a particularly strong blast of energy. And then TheTimidLight was caught in a cross fire, falling to the ground, cold. Jaune Arc was next, he had charged directly at Sora96, leaping into the air to grapple with him, but was blasted out of the air like a clay pigeon.

 

Sora96 relinquished his assault long enough to say "WOULD ANYONE ELSE LIKE TO CHALLENGE ME?". In the battle between opposition and silence, silence prevailed.

 

Sora96 smiled to himself. "I didn't think so."

 

Aaron had not moved for the entire series of events. He was huddled over DC's body, and seemed to be comatose. Sora96 approached him. "You know, before DC died... he made a mention of how he always had to resist the urge to steal your powers. I have no intention of resisting that urge..." Sora96 grabbed Aaron by the collar of his shirt, and raised him above his head. He pulled his other arm back, as if to punch him, but he stopped. "You know... perhaps something else could be done with you, my dear friend. Yes. I shall wait and see."

 

Sora96 punched Aaron, but only hard enough to render him unconscious. He threw him over his shoulder, and faced the survivors.

"I think I've taught you all your lesson. Go home. Take your dead with you. Surely you're smart enough to realize there's no hope you could ever win."

 

And he was gone. In a flash he had disappeared. Leaving only the dead and the living behind him.

 

-

 

Shana had taken it upon herself to ensure the dead got a proper send off. She had lined the bodies up in a row. Crona.. Jaune Arc.. TheTimidLight, looking just as pale and cold as the character he so revered. Alas she came to RoxSox's body. He was in the fetal position, huddled around himself. She reached out to turn him over, and as she did, a gasp of air sounded out. "This one's alive!" said Shana as she tried to tend to his wounds.

 

But there were none. "I saw you get hit... why don't you..." before she could finish, her eyes fell on RoxSox's shirt pocket. There lied the slightly charred body of Colonel Random. A tear fell down her face as she cradled his small body in her hands. Rox was conscious at this point, and was looking up at him. "He saved my life."

 

They took the deceased back to Sora96's house, where they, Colonel Random included, were buried alongside Noobles.

 

Nobody asked if anyboy else had any words to say, because they all knew they did not. There really was nothing they could say. Time heals all wounds... but time moves only at the speed it desires, and sometimes, it's just not fast enough.

 

-

 

They spent that week very quiet. No one went home. But no one was ever really there in Australia. They were nowhere. Lost in their own minds, often spending their days staring at the ceiling without ever getting up.  One day, someone finally spoke. "What do you think their last thoughts were?" Nobody had an answer for that question. And the quiet took over yet again.

 

-

 

Another week past. Still no one went home, but finally, some people were there. Some had overcome the trauma of what they've witnessed. Finally able to grasp the full weight of what this had become. Common thoughts among them were "This was supposed to all be in good fun... why did this have to happen?" And they started to feel less sad, and they started to feel more angry.

 

-

 

At long last, their anger had finally overcome their grief. And thoughts of fighting were entering their minds. Thoughts of winning. They could not bring back the dead, but they could avenge them. They could not right the wrong of the past but they could prevent further wrongs from being wrought.

 

And so they agreed, that they would not lay down without a fight.

 

-

 

Sora96 lied in wait. He was sure that the members were not foolish enough to fight him. But still a small doubt lingered in the back of his mind... what if? And so he prepared. He took his time doing so. He fashioned an empire. An empire from stone, an empire of blood, an empire of tyranny. He would have an army. Whether he needed it or not, he would have an army.

 

And while Sora96 fashioned his empire... the members fashioned their rebellion.

 

-END OF ACT I-

Edited August 29, 201411 yr by RoxSox

*cue sad music*

 

Well... damn. Sora96 is OP

*cue sad music*

 

Well... damn. Sora96 is OP

 

This is what I listened to as I wrote it... might enhance the effect while reading it I dunno.

 

http://youtu.be/PKZNXFodeYs

This is what I listened to as I wrote it... might enhance the effect while reading it I dunno.

 

http://youtu.be/PKZNXFodeYs

firetruckING QUOTA

 

Damn that made it firetrucking magical ;-;

So Aaron disappears again 

Dat finaleIt's like the red wedding from Game of Thrones all over again xDDo continue, I like where this story's going and your writing style certainly makes it even more fun to read

...

Well, I'm dead...

Damn. Make sure they find my Orbital Laser Brick Cannon system. If I was vaporized, I'm almost certain it won't help, but, oh well.

 

Still, damn. So many dead. Why, RoxSox, why!

I was waiting for this gold mine of comedy to be revived!!!

 

If S96 becomes too OP for erryone to take care of, throw a Kairi plushie at him. If he threatens the plushie... Well I wonder where you would take the story...

Okay so later on I will be answering questions and responding to ya'll but right now, while I still have access to a Laptop, I wanna give you guys an idea of what's going to be happening.

 

This was the end of Act I. I had this planned when I stopped writing several months ago, and it always irked me that I didn't just finish this last bit up before taking a hiatus. Now it is finished. Not the story, that goes on, but the first act is.

 

Chances are, I'll be waiting until I am back on my feet in a new place with consistent internet before I begin Act II, lest I never finish what I start. (Going to the library is a a pain in the ass).

 

Please be patient while I figure out real life, and as soon as it is figured out, I will return with the next chapter of our little story here.

 

There will be Three acts ultimately. like any play structure. And in my time away, I will work out the kinks in the outline I already have made up of the the events that will take place, meaning that when I do get back, I will be better then ever.

 

 

 

Now. I still do go to the library from time to time. This means I'm not 100% incapable of writing something while I'm there... I've been kicking around this idea in my head that I think you might like. It be a way for me to write L4P without committing to the main story line.

 

If you look back at the story so far, you will find that many events in these characters live have blank points where what happened was never gone into or never gone into in great detail. You may note from the very recent chapter that Colonel Random's character went on adventures in his time offscreen... I might write what I call "DLC" chapters that serve as a means to enhance the depth of what's gone on and what will go on. Fill in those blank points and give you guys something to bite at.

 

And they'll probably be a lot funnier then what you might expect from me following this last chapter.

 

So yeah. TL;DR: Taking my time off for real now, please be patient, Act II will kick ass whenever it gets written, and you will probably get short stories set in the Universe. Maybe throw out some ideas for those short stories, I might play off them. Make observations from the story and tell me what you might want to see delved into more... should be fun for all of us.

 

One other thing... I really like seeing a discussion take place in this thread. Seeing you guys talk about the story makes me feel better about it then just a Like or a "nice chapter man" ever will, (as much as those things make my heart go pitter patter) so please don't be afraid to discuss and theorize as to what future events might be. I've left hints for you.

I thought this was great, every act was great overall 10/10

I actually want to be part of the story or the rebellion against Super Sora96!!!!!!!!

 

Since you said you wanted to make DLC  short stories for other characters I would like to help you out with them or writing them for you then showing you if you like them enough, if you want.

I have a question if you do allow me to write short stories of other characters , which ones do you want me to write about ( or do you want me to write about all of them?) and how do you want me to tie into the next story?

Edited August 29, 201411 yr by MasterRoxas13

"Time heals all wounds... but time moves only at the speed it desires, and sometimes, it's just not fast enough."

 

That's just beautiful.

 

I must honestly say I did not expect the story to take this route, but then again the fun of this story is that it's hard to know what to expect. Super Saiyan Sora gif was not expected, but hilarious.

 

...I'm not sure I want to know what 96 wishes to do with Aaron. X_X

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