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  1. ITzDarthLordRevan

    Drawing of my Norted OC!

    I suck at taking photos. Who knew! Since It seems to be the season on norting people, I decided to draw a norted version of my Kingdom Hearts OC, Violet. Or, as the Wayfinder Trio calls her, Vi! (Creative name for a purple-haired girl. I know. By the way, the color of her clothes are red and not pink. The camera on this thing just sucks.)
  2. Greethings keybladers of the light and dark. Steeghs (slayernl) is back after a long project what you will see when im ready in 2017 And this time i need your help . You see, the only things that i need are the followngs things. Avatar emote's in the story mode. (like the photes from below) Background photos for KHUX Sound File's as a Background (no copyright pls) And A KHUX font If some one can pls help me then you are my hero . Sorry for this wierd fomum but those are the last thing i need to do. Till next time Wielders.
  3. TheKeyofRose

    [Interest Check] SAO Roleplay?

    -Breaths in expecting the worst- Ok! So something I've been craving lately is a Sword Art Online Related RP we all know the whole shtick or I at least hope you do 'Die in the Game die in IRL' This would be entirely OC based thus meaning no canons beyond maybe little references here and there or a name drop, based off the game 'Sword Art Online: Hollow Fragment' but without Kirito and Friends involved would be a fight to get from Floor 75 to Floor 100. Or possibly an entire RPG like an adventure all the way to Floor 100. Just a matter of an Interest check to see if anyone would dig this as someone who is well-versed into everything SAO related I think i can confidently DM/GM the setting.
  4. Endless Thundaga

    Kingdom Hearts: Dark Desires RP

    Twelve years after Xehanort's defeat, the worlds were at peace. Sora, Riku, Aqua, and Mickey all started to take apprentices of their own to continue the next generation of Keyblade wielders. However, Sora's pupil, Xavier, studied the history of the world of fairy tales, and became obsessed with reuniting all worlds to create one. However, as he acted, he unlocked many of the worlds' keyholes, letting darkness leak from each of them. Some were quickly devoured, and became sleeping worlds. Feeling responsible, Sora went into hiding without any trace of his whereabouts, the only way to find him was by Roxas and Xion. Unfortunately, Xavier caught up on this, knowing that if Sora was found and persuaded, he would stop at nothing to halt the apprentice, so Xavier took after Xehanort and transferred his heart into Roxas, making him an ally. As for Xion, Maleficent and Pete still remain at large as they too are aware of the risks of finding Sora, so the evil fairy kidnaps Xion, using her heart to fuel Maleficent's dark powers. In desperation, three friends were sent by their masters to find Sora, Roxas and Xion, stop Xavier, and restore the worlds. Worlds * Arendelle (Frozen) Jacob, Zion, Sarah, Avalon, Xarlucs * Jungle (Jungle Book) Jacob, Seracus, Ammit, Hanz * Polynesian Sea (Moana) Seracus, Ammit * Scotland (Brave) Annistha, Zanther, Lacuna, Lunaris, Ammit * Inca Empire (Emporer's New Groove) Susan, Ammit * Atlantis (Atlantis) Ximon, Xarlucs * Treasure Planet (Treasure Planet) Ximon, Xarlucs, Zion, Sarah, Avalon * Zootopia (Zootopia) Zion, Sarah, Avalon, Lunaris, Susan * New Orleans (Princess and the Frog) Susan * Destiny Islands Any characters * Radiant Garden Any characters * Twilight Town Any characters * Traverse Town Any characters * Mysterious Tower Any characters Sleeping Worlds * France (Beauty and the Beast) Jacob, Hanz * Pride Lands (Lion King) * Agrabah (Aladdin) Susan * Neverland (Peter Pan) Jacob * Halloween Town (Nightmare Before Christmas) Hanz * Olympus Coliseum (Hercules) Jacob Jacob and Susan-Destiny Islands It was time for Susan to complete her Mark of Mastery Exam, and she was excited. Master Aqua stood across from her on the beach of Destiny Islands, with newly fledged Master Jacob on her side, as well as Mickey, who came to spectate Susan's exam. Aqua steps forward. "Now for the final part of your test, you will face Jake in combat." She gestures to him to step up, to which he does. Her attention is then brought back to her apprentice. "Remember, there is no winning. Only truths for when equal powers clash, their nature is revealed." Susan nods in understanding. She knows defeating Jake is not her goal. "Yes Master!" She summons her Keyblade, as does Jake. She has a tight grip on the handle, she is nervous, and Jacob could pick up on this. "Are you ready for this?" Susan nods. "Yeah. It's a bit overwhelming seeing you as a temporary opponent, but I think I'll deal with it."
  5. Twelve years after Xehanort's defeat, the worlds were at peace. Sora, Riku, Aqua, and Mickey all started to take apprentices of their own to continue the next generation of Keyblade wielders. However, Sora's pupil, Xavier, studied the history of the world of fairy tales, and became obsessed with reuniting all worlds to create one. However, as he acted, he unlocked many of the worlds' keyholes, letting darkness leak from each of them. Some were quickly devoured, and became sleeping worlds. Feeling responsible, Sora went into hiding without any trace of his whereabouts, the only way to find him was by Roxas and Xion. Unfortunately, Xavier caught up on this, knowing that if Sora was found and persuaded, he would stop at nothing to halt the apprentice, so Xavier took after Xehanort and transferred his heart into Roxas, making him an ally. As for Xion, Maleficent and Pete still remain at large as they too are aware of the risks of finding Sora, so the evil fairy kidnaps Xion, using her heart to fuel Maleficent's dark powers. In desperation, three friends were sent by their masters to find Sora, Roxas and Xion, stop Xavier, and restore the worlds. -Each world and sleeping world may be visited by 4 characters max, except certain worlds. In the sleeping worlds characters cannot cross paths with each other, as they're in different versions of the world (similar to how it was in Dream Drop Distance) Worlds * Arendelle (Frozen) Jacob, Zion, Sarah, Xarlucs * Jungle (Jungle Book) Jacob, Seracus, Ammit * Polynesian Sea (Moana) Seracus, Ammit * Scotland (Brave) Annistha, Zanther, Lacuna, Lunaris * Inca Empire (Emporer's New Groove) Susan * Atlantis (Atlantis) Ximon, Xarlucs * Treasure Planet (Treasure Planet) Ximon, Xarlucs, Zion, Sarah * Zootopia (Zootopia) Zion, Sarah, Lunaris, Susan * New Orleans (Princess and the Frog) Susan * Destiny Islands Any characters * Radiant Garden Any characters * Traverse Town Any characters * Mysterious Tower Any characters Sleeping Worlds * France (Beauty and the Beast) Jacob, Ammit * Pride Lands (Lion King) * Agrabah (Aladdin) Yoshie * Neverland (Peter Pan) Jacob * Halloween Town (Nightmare Before Christmas) * Olympus Coliseum (Hercules) Yoshie * Twilight Town Zion, Sarah -All KH13 rules apply -No god modding whatsoever, there is no need for a god/ goddess -Romance is allowed, but keep it PG13 like you would see in the games -Different sexualities are allowed, but again, keep it PG13 -No controlling other characters without permission -I would like to keep the worlds Disney related -To show that you have read these rules, type in your favorite Keyblade below your character sheet -Character Sheet- Name: Age: Appearance: Keyblade (If a Keyblade Wielder): Weapon (If not a Keyblade Wielder): Powers (If any): Personality: Bio: Worlds you'll choose: Here's mine. Name: Jacob Sorreno Age: 19 Appearance: Blue eyes, 5"9', wears a black undershirt under a black short sleeved hoodie with black lining, wears black gauntlets with white lining, brown breeches with black tall boots, and has a black cape with white lining draped around his belt. Keyblade (If a Keyblade Wielder): Waking Leviathan Weapon (If not a Keyblade Wielder): Keyblade Powers (If any): Jake has control over light, able to forge weapons with this power. He can also fire projectiles Personality: Kind, brave, loyal to his friends, has a strong sense of justice, careful, and very calculating Bio: A strong and charming young man with an urge for adventure. He was born in Traverse Town, but his parents died to unknown causes. He was then taken under King Mickey's wing when he was 8 and met Aqua and Riku's pupils and immediately became friends with them. After years of hard training and just passed his Mark of Mastery Exam, Jake is ready to take on this big adventure. Worlds you'll choose: Arendelle, Neverland, Jungle, France Star Seeker
  6. My idea is that Sebastian yanks someone (Sebastian and this OC will be played by me) from 2017, transforms them into a demon to serve as his apprentice of sorts in butler-ing to the Phantomhive Household...and keep the three idiot servants in line. This RP will be mostly light hearted but will have the same tone and gothic/dark elements of the anime/manga. For example, what will happen when the stranger's belongings are teleported to the manor and Ciel and the servants try to figure out how to work a CD...using a record player! That sorta thing will be commonplace if anyone's interested? I need a Ciel and the servants can be shared between myself and the partner.
  7. Movies798

    Master Ava X Bronz Love After War

    Just a picture of my KHUx character and Master Ava.

    © Movies798 Jan 16, 2017

  8. What up everyone! I decided to draw my own Kingdom Hearts character from Unchained x with Master/Foreteller Ava. Plus, since there's no backstory to our characters in Unchained x, like where they come from or how they ended up in Daybreak Town? I decided to draw a picture of Master Ava and my character Bronz falling in love after the Keyblade War. Please enjoy latest drawing!
  9. yuu.h.andre@gmail.com

    Some drawings!

    Hiya! I've been drawing, drawing...AND DRAWING! I am on a rampage for some reason so... I decided to share some of my favorites with you! Be sure to tell which one you like the most! Hope you like them!
  10. Muke

    - Blank Slate -

    Hello, and welcome to "Blank Slate"! Our Adventure begins in TWILIGHT TOWN. In the ever orange world of Twilight Town after 10 years the time of the Great Struggle has finally arrived once more! Participants and spectators are now gathering from all corners of the known universe to fight and feast for a whole week! Here is the Thread where you can sign in and get informed about out RPG and our Characters.
  11. Muke

    Blank Slate

    Hello there, and welcome. "Blank Slate" is a Story, which is set in an Alternate Universe to the KINGDOM HEARTS Series. ~ THE PLOT ~ Troubling news has been spreading around... there is a thief who goes from world to world, stealing important artifacts and leaving behind a new swarm of deadly enemies, which the locals have named Formless due to the fact that they initially appear as white silhouettes, taking on the form of the environment shortly after. Who is this mysterious thief and what is he planning? Nobody can tell as of yet. At the same time, in the ever orange world of Twilight Town after 10 years the time of the Great Struggle has finally arrived once more! Participants and spectators are now gathering from all corners of the known universe to fight and feast for a whole week! Pity, they do not know yet that this world is the new target of the culprit... ~ THE CHARACTERS ~ There are three different types of characters in the game: - Player Characters - Supporting Characters - Plot Characters Players can have 2 Player Characters and can freely use the Supporting Characters during the game. Supporting Characters are: - Characters of the present world the character is in, except for the Villains of the worlds and Yen Sid. - Simple enemies Player Characters: Player Character can't be Main Villain, Characters of featured worlds and Characters conflicting the state of the AU version of the Kingdom Hearts Universe (see below in State of Universe point) ~ CHARACTER SHEET ~ Name: Gender: Age: World of Origin: Bio: Appearance (describe or link picture): Personality: Choice of Weapon (list magical abilities as well): Additional abilities: Traits: - Strength - Agility - Intelligence - Speed - Luck (Divide the following: - 1 A class - 2 B class - 2 C class) (classes are from D to S -> D is poor; C is average; B is exceptional; A is professional; S is mastered) ~ State of Universe ~ Xehanort does not exist, the events of the games never actually happened. The Land of Departure exists and Eraqus - alongside Aqua - trains many excellent Keyblade warriors. Terra and Ven together left the Land of Departure and on Destiny Islands found their own personal students, Riku and Sora. Radiant Garden exists in its state from the Birth By Sleep era, which means that Ansem is still the wise ruler of the world, while Braig, Dilan and Aelous are guards; Even and Ienzo are scientists; while Lea and Isa are simple inhabitants, along with Kairi (who never had to leave the world). Roxas, Naminé, Vanitas and Xion do not exist in this Alternate Universe. Pure Heartless exist, while Emblem heartless do not Nobodies and Unversed exist, though in few numbers and will probably NOT make an appearance within the game Worlds Starting World: Twilight Town Additional Worlds: (not necessarily in order of appearance): Yen Sid’s Tower [Mysterious Tower] Tangled [Kingdom of Corona] Big Hero6 [san Fransokyo] Frozen [Fjord of Isolation] Pocahontas [A Brave New World] Wreck-it Ralph [sugar Rush] Percy Jackson [Camp Halfblood] Avatar: The Last Airbender [Countries of Elements] Puella Magi: Madoka Magica [Mitakihara City] Radiant Garden [birth by Sleep Version] Patchwork Paradise [a "Blank Slate" original world] So, let us begin with our Adventure! [by Muke and Griewer] Players and their Characters Muke Griewer XxUtopiaxX Silvia
  12. Tihusky

    Power Of The Keyblade

    SOOOOO more fan art with my OC Moji Just using the power!!! Enjoy

    © Ti/Spazzyhusky

  13. Ian Manning

    FMK SPOILER!: Crimson VS Isaac

    In the secret HQ of the Eastern Liberation, Isaac emerged before his army to reinitialize his status as leader, but to his shock, the current leader, Crimson, arrived and challenged the Freezing Alchemist! Ice Alchemy and Flame collided as the two were seemingly even, but Isaac's Red Stone gave him an unseen advantage as he froze Crimson into a block of ice and shattered him into millions of pieces! Isaac and his soldiers cheered at the Red Stone's power, believing themselves to be unstoppable... Until Crimson revealed himself, alive and unharmed, while increasing the Freezing Alchemist's bodyweight through his outer (and inner) shadow! However, instead of killing Isaac, Crimson reported that King Bradley, their archenemy, was heading to Central City, and he would allow Isaac to take back his army so that they could use their 'new power' and destroy the fuhrer. And with that, the Golem King vanished through a dark portal and left the Eastern Liberation plot...

    © Kingdom Hearts and Fullmetal Alchemist are both licensed by Square-Enix. The secondary licenses for both franchises are Disney (Kingdom Hearts), Aniplex, Bones Inc., and Funimation (Fullmetal Alchemist).

  14. Roxasrox

    The Lost Apprentice

    I made this and I'm not really sure what else to do with it, so I guess I'll just post it here. It's a KH story about an original character I made up called Ziemia (Polish for earth, trying to keep up that trend) and her apprenticeship. Set pre-BBS. I originally meant for it to be longer but I decided I'd leave it hanging here. The context of the story should imply their fates. Hope you like it. ----- Ziemia sat quietly reading in her chair while her Master studied at the desk opposite her. While Ziemia filled her head with loosely fictional stories passed down through generations, her Master worked hard at unravelling the truth from the long-forgotten past. Ziemia highly admired that about her Master. He was so knowledgeable already, but he’d stop at nothing to learn even more. Meanwhile, all she ever did was drink in tales and fables even though there was still so much to learn. She didn’t mind that too much. She was still learning a lot from her Master every day and as long as she enjoyed her novels, did it matter that they weren’t real? Anyway, Ziemia found that she could learn a lot about herself by absorbing the views and thoughts of her authors and their characters and assessing them. Sometimes she did this with her Master, although that was hard to do since he didn’t see much point in them. Still, Ziemia was learning about herself through books and about the worlds around her through her Master. She was content. Yet as much as she tried to convince herself of that, she envied her Master too much to avoid comparing herself to him. His criticisms of her cut deep and her flaws were so apparent in their training against his perfections. She didn’t wholly like her Master and she certainly didn’t agree with him all the time, yet still she longed to have his power, his wisdom and above all his confidence. Whatever her differences with him were, there was nobody she respected more. Ziemia turned the page, almost at the end of her chapter. Most of the books she read were based on accounts of the heroes and villains of the Keyblade War, sometimes by surviving participants and other times by observant witnesses. They often weren’t accurate accounts (and when they were, her Master would take more interest), but Ziemia was only interested in the characterisations and stories. She loved it when one story portrayed light as the ultimate force against darkness, while another displayed darkness as the greatest power a warrior could ever wield and both would have convincing ideals behind it. Between both sides, Ziemia felt like she was learning more about light, darkness and the war than she ever did in her lessons. Her Master was quick to remind her that experience was the most valuable way to learn, but encouraged her to keep an open mind about light and darkness. Master and pupil had spent many sessions discussing the advantages and disadvantages of both light and darkness. To her Master’s disappointment, Ziemia was unwilling to utilise the darkness in her heart more than she was comfortable with. She’d never push it to be more than a dark corner of power she could weaponise in controlled bursts, afraid to try and unleash it any further. “Light and darkness are a balance,” her Master would say. “Unless you learn to balance the darkness in your heart with your light, how do you expect to reach your full potential?” “Forgive me Master,” she had replied once. “But if I’m not careful, the darkness will consume me. Many past warriors fell to their own power because they thought they were above it. Who’s to say I won’t corrupt myself? Someone could even use my own darkness against me!” “You think so?” Her Master stroked his chin, which was lately growing a small beard. “Darkness is difficult to master, yes. But once you accomplish that task, you need not ever fear it again. And you’ll never master it as long as you fear it.” “Of course, Master. But I need time. Under your tutelage, I know I’ll get there one day… It’s just not today.” “Ziemia…” He turned his head in thought for a moment. “There are times when people must take risks in order to proceed. Safety will not help you learn anything.” Yes, but it might help me live longer, Ziemia thought to herself but didn’t retort. She knew her Master was referring to her armour, which she still wore when they travelled through the lanes. Her Master was familiar enough with darkness to travel without it but she didn’t have faith that she’d cope that well. She hesitated before she next responded. “So have you mastered your darkness already, Master?” She felt nervous about the question but the old man smiled and answered easily. “Yes. But it’s not something I accomplished by cowering from it, Ziemia. You’ll understand one day.” “Of course,” she replied as she bowed. “Thank you, Master Xehanort.” *** Ziemia finished her chapter and put the book down. Her favourite character had just been killed. She always needed time to think when that happened. He’d trusted the wrong person and lost everything right when it counted. It was a dramatic, sudden and unfair end to such a worthy person. Sometimes life and death were equally cruel, but at the end of the day it was always their decisions that brought them to their close. Nobody was more at fault than their own selves. Ziemia wondered what legacy she’d leave behind; what lessons would her life set an example for teaching? She had no doubt her Master would leave greater ones, but she still hoped to match him in some way. He encouraged her to follow him in everything, but she wanted to be known for her own accomplishments and her own dreams. Characters that lived and died as somebody else’s number two were never respected and hardly loved. Besides, she knew from books that following too strictly in the footsteps of another was dangerous. If you follow the wrong person, their failures become yours. Indeed, Ziemia sometimes wondered if she was following the right person. Her Master’s knowledge was unrivalled, but his methods and ideals were highly unorthodox. She was unlikely to find a better Master anywhere else, but perhaps she should be more concerned about finding a good Master than a great one. For all his criticisms of her cowardice, she’d already taken a big risk in her life by siding with him and following in his footsteps. The pupils and teachers of her old school had been unnerved by him, but she decided to give him a chance and asked to become his apprentice. In some ways, she was glad that she did. She’d learned so much more since leaving her home and she’d never really fit in with the others anyway. There were times that she missed someone that she’d been close to, but still she’d always felt like an outcast. A friend that was never needed and rarely missed. Not that she’d come to Xehanort seeking companionship, but perhaps that was for the best. She didn’t know how to work well with people and so she was probably better off alone. All the same, Ziemia couldn’t figure her Master out. She’d lately been reading books that took time to write about character motivations: what these people were after, why they were after it, how far they’d go to get it and why they failed to achieve it. Sometimes she tried to apply this to her Master. What was he hoping to get out of all this learning? And why did he never feel the need to teach all of this history, even to her? If she didn’t understand where her Master was going, how could she claim to understand why she was following him? Master Xehanort stood up from the scrolls he was reading, a slight air of frustration around him. For some time now, they’d been spending their days travelling to whatever storehouses of records or banks of knowledge they could find. All to learn about the Keyblade War, which Xehanort appeared to already know inside-out. The more Ziemia thought about it, the more she wondered what the point was. Each time, Xehanort would absorb another vault of words, only to leave in disappointment or annoyance and repeat the process. Only now did Ziemia realise that he must be looking for something but whatever it was, he wasn’t finding it. “Ziemia, we’re leaving.” It was all he needed to say. Ziemia rose obediently, packing her book into her bag as she did so. Together, they headed out the door and into the open air, where Master Xehanort summoned his keyblade to open a gateway. Ziemia couldn’t resist a glance back at the little hut they’d just left. It seemed to have some kind of historical significance to Xehanort but even so, he had no real need of it. It was a cosy place though; the closest thing the two of them had to a home. They moved around so much, Ziemia didn’t consider anywhere a home anymore, but they stopped at this little place more frequently than others, usually just as a rest stop where the two of them would catch up on some reading. Ziemia was growing fond of it. It made her miss having a real home. Part of her even longed for a real friend, despite how much she tried to dismiss that gap in her heart. She turned back to her Master, who was waiting by the gateway. He looked at her with the anticipation of disappointment that he typically did while he waited for her to equip her armour. Ziemia was already reaching for her shoulder guard, about to summon it, when she hesitated. Maybe it was her latest reflections, maybe she was still sore from the loss in her book or maybe she was just sick and tired of never knowing what to do. Ziemia didn’t know for sure, nor did she really care. All that concerned her in that moment was stepping up and making a difference in her life. She wanted to grow beyond her Master’s shadow, to evolve as a keyblade warrior and as a person. It was a sudden spontaneous urge, a flash of desire, an impulse that meant the difference between order and chaos, light and darkness or life and death. It didn’t last, but neither did it refuse to leave a mark. Ziemia felt caught in a gravitational pull while she held on for dear life. She was struggling with the logic and sense of knowing her limits while respecting the dangers and the imbalance and ego within her that was pushing to defy her limits and make a difference in her life. She found herself at war with herself and no amount of inspirational words from the people she’d read about could put it right. There were too many factors and too many opposing sides to bring her to peace. She looked at the only real factor present, raising her eyes to meet those of Xehanort, looking to see what his reaction was. Her hand was frozen, hovering inches away from her shoulder guard; her hesitation was extremely obvious. Xehanort could see it and from the look he was giving her, Ziemia thought he looked intrigued yet doubtful. He raised an eyebrow at her, giving her the barest of smirks, as though daring her to make a move, not once saying a word, simply watching to see what she would decide. Ziemia was torn, but looking at Xehanort’s face made her lose focus. She could already see his face falling when she hit her pad; she could picture him shaking his head in shame as she passed through the portal wearing the protective gear that he loathed so much. She’d put up with his gripes at her reluctance for so long that in that moment, her annoyance took hold. She made her decision and lowered her hand. Master Xehanort’s slight smirk became a wide grin as Ziemia spurned her armour and stepped forward to travel without it. Even so, he never raised his brow, as though he were taunting her even now. As Ziemia came to a stop in front of him, staring at him with resolve, he still said nothing. He merely nodded his approval and stepped into the lanes between. Ziemia held back for a couple of seconds; one last hesitation of nerves forcing her to ask herself what she was doing. But there was no going back now. Even if she wasn’t ready, she had to make this choice. Ziemia summoned her keyblade and stepped into the darkness.
  15. Hey so since Ive been reading some Kingdom Hearts OC fanfiction lately, I really want to share my thoughts on OC's. Anything I say is strictly my opinion and is not meant to offend anyone. (Also Im thinking of starting a RP Topic) So basically, Im getting the idea that Kingdom Hearts is known by everyone (fan or not) to have the most Mary Sue / Gary Stu OC's. People hear "Kingdom Hearts OC" and they think "Oh boy, here we go." Here's my input centered on Kingdom Hearts OC's and some can be applied to Kingdom Hearts in general. 1. Is your OC an important character to the story? Do they disrupt canon? If your answer is no to both or just one, thats great! Just because your character isnt spotlight, doesnt mean your character isnt interesting. In fact, many readers might like your character better because they're not in their face so much and have an easier time balancing the characters they already love and their characters they will learn to love (Your OC's!) If your answer is yes to one or both, THATS ALSO GREAT! Want to know why? Because Im reading that story for your character, to see what they provide to the original story. Im really tired of people labeling characters as Mary Sues and their male counterpart Gary Stues/ Marty Stues just because they are focused as the main character or if they change things in canon. I want differences! I want some change! Literally the act of adding a character into the story is breaking canon, so it is impossible to do that without disrupting canon. Now the only thing I want to point out is when you change canon Do: - Create reasons / plot devices for your character that either simulate within the story or add in original events -Allow your character important roles that make your character interesting (yes that includes what people consider "cliche prophecies") Don't or Try To Avoid: - Removing main characters from the story -Altering the characters personalities -Creating Unreasonable love interests (mostly with main characters) -Do things that go against established rules of the stories universe without plausible reason ^ Ive read a Fruits Basket OC story where the main character had the two boys fall in love with her and she was trying to choose between them. (Ill talk about love interests later). But the thing is, she just removed Tohru from the story. Tohru, the MAIN character. She wasnt mentioned or anything. The story ended up being to depressing and nothing at all like the fruits basket feeling the anime gave off without Tohru there to show them the bright side, so I exited out and stopped reading. Ive read MANY stories where Kairi is shallow and mean and a bully. Kairi can be slightly bossy and very stubborn, but she is NOT mean. Kairi is a Princess of Heart. Kairi has a heart of pure light. Do you think someone with a heart of pure light is going to bully someone? Me neither. Please dont butcher the characters personality! I like the characters that are established, otherwise i wouldnt be reading a sotry that has them in it. Its okay for characters to slowly change with your characters help, but that takes time and even then, a lot of their original personality is going to stick. Ive read a story where the girl was a Princess of Heart, but she turned into a heartless. That's not possible unless there was a certain reason for that which can work with the details of the universe. 2. Is your character paired with a character from the series? Love interests are okay. Love interests are not bad. Love interests and stories with pairing are some of the best! Do: Either establish a background (childhood friend?) or slowly make the character comfortable with your character that would allow them to have a relationship Don't: Make the main character someone who they are not! Make the main character fall in love with your character instantly! Example: Vanitas tells your OC after spending two days with her "You make me want to be a good guy" NO VANITAS IS NOT GOING TO DO THAT! Maybe if he is tricking her.... Vanitas might however, have a few quarrels with your character and develop an unhealthy obsession with them... Setting up romance takes time. Sometimes people click together quickly, but if your character is going to influence the other characters romantic or otherwise, please make sure it makes sense. Be careful with more than one love interest when using main characters. Lots of people like to have two characters to spice up the story and make the character jealous, or give the readers another person to cheer for. This is used in a lot of girls books, "two boys one girl" But having two who are in love with your character because he/she is so charming, attractive, and perfect isnt plausible. Characters can be popular, but that doesnt mean everyone is going to be in love with them instantly. Anything over two main character love interests is something I would avoid. 3. Does your character wield a Keyblade (or weapon that is special to only the main characters)? If no, cool. Your character can represent a weapon that is unique or at least less comon that fits better with that character! If yes, also cool! Im so tired of people getting mad because an OC wields a Keyblade. The game is Kingdom Hearts! What did you want them to wield, a freaking banana peel? (lol reference) Your character can weild a keyblade, in fact, most of the time I expect it. 4. Is your character a Princess of Heart (or have a heart of pure light)? Your character can be a Princess of Heart. I accept that. I am willing to beleive that there can be an extra PoH just as I am going to accept that there is an extra character in this series. But if they have a heart of pure light, I need to see that. All the PoH's have a good personality. They are caring and kind individuals and I need to see that in your character. Also, just because your character is kind and caring doesnt automatically make them a PoH. A character that is rude and profane is not going to have a heart of pure light. Side note: Its my pet peeve when an OC swears in Kingdom Hearts fanfiction. Captain Jack Sparrow himself said "You cant swear in Disney". Its weird for them to be with the kids and in Disney worlds, and then they drop an f bomb or call someone a B and then its like what? Your character isnt fitting in. Ive never heard that language from Sora, Riku, or Kairi's mouths in the game. It may be normal in our universe, but not theirs. Be careful if making your character a PoH or light heart person AND a Keyblade wielder. We know Kairi can do this, but even she had to get her keyblade from Riku. She didnt get it herself. Also, Kairi and Bell or more likely to engage in a fight than Snow White and Cinderella. It has to do with personality. It can be said that because they are a PoH that they can wield a Keyblade more easily, but though the strength of heart of a PoH might seem like good reasoning to become a Keyblade wielder, thats not usually the case. Kairi is more the exception than the rule. I dont know how to explain it, but be careful with combining these two. Like, I was reading one of these stories where I really liked the character, she was a keyblade wielder (obviously) and at the end - bam! Its revealed she is a PoH. And I just thought it was kind of unneeded. If it matches your character then sure, let her or him have a heart of pure light, but if its not needed or affects the story in any good way, whats the point? Seems like overkill. If your character has a heart of pure light, please dont make the character be allies with the dark side or something or shes using dark powers. Thats destroying canon (and not in the good way I stated). Their heart of light isnt going to be comfortable with beings of darkness. There will be distrust.Maybe they might want to help said evil character? but not likely. No. Even Sora wants to help Malificent when shes in danger of being killed, but other than those moral obligations, light side and dark side remain enemies. And NO YOUR PURE HEART OF LIGHT CHARACTER CANNOT USE DARK POWERS OR THRIVE IN WITH THE REALM OF DARKNESS OR ANYTHING DARK RELATED. THATS FINAL. Mary Sue Traits that I dont count as Mary Sue traits and my OC Pet Peeves 1. Dislikes: People who hurt my friends. ^ That line is used by many OCs and is a joke that every Mary Sue/ Gary Stu will have it. But I disagree. Thats a perfectly reasonable line. Every good friend is going to care about their friends. That is literally a quote that would most likely be used by many main characters. I dont get the people who criticize it. Is the character supposed to NOT care about their friends? Are they supposed to make friends with the people who hurt their friends? What do you people want that dont agree with that line? 2. Characters who are friends with the cast Whats wrong with that? The OC is likely to be friends with the main group considering they are likely to also be their ally. If the character is going to be annoying or something they WILL teel them so, and the character isnt going to get along with everybody, but that doesnt mean they cant be BFF's with Sora and travel the worlds with him. After all, I want the character included in the story! 3. Characters who say the exact same lines as other characters! Or draw important moments from main characters! THAT IS MY PET PEEVE. PRETTY MUCH MY ONLY ONES. Your OC is an Original Character. I want Original content. I dont want a carbon copy of Sora or a replacement of Kairi or whatever. Its okay if your character agrees with a lot of the things the cast says, but they arent going to say the same thing! Its fine if its a reaction word or line like "What?" Or "Well lets go!" But so many OC stories are just the original script with them rotating lines. Bad Example: My random made up character for this instance is say, Marceline. Marceline is in the first KH1 scene with Sora, Kairi, and Riku. Marceline is with Kairi who is leaning over Sora. Sora wakes up and is startled by Kairi and Marceline laughs. "Gimme a break, Kairi" Sora complained. "Sora, you lazy bum . I knew Id find you snoozing down here." Kairi said. "No this huge black thing swallowed me up. I couldnt breathe I couldnt -" Sora tried to explain, but was cut off by Kairi hitting him. "Ow!" Sora whined. "Are you still dreaming?" Marceline asked in between laughs. (Kairi's line) "It wasnt a dream! Or was it? What was that place? So bizarre..." Sora "Yeah, sure" Kairi and Marceline dismissed. (Same time) (Kairi's line) "Say Kairi, what was your hometown like? You know where you grew up?" Sora asked. "Ive told you before, I dont remember." Kairi answered. "Nothing at all?' Marceline questions. (Sora's line) "Nothing." Kairi answers her. "Do you ever want to go back?" Sora asked, "Well Im happy here" Kairi answered after thinking "But you know, I wouldnt mind going to see it." "Id like to see it too, along with any other worlds out there. I want to see them all. " Sora dreamed. "So what are we waiting for?" Marceline asks excitedly to her friends. (Kairi's line) "Hey, arent you guys forgetting about me?" Riku asks them, appearing suddenly. "I guess Im the only one working on the raft. And youre just as lazy as he is!" he said to Kairi. "So you noticed." Kairi joked. "Okay we'll finish it together!" Marceline suggested. (Kairi's line) ^That scene added nothing. Marceline just took lines that were already there. And even worse writing, some people just have their OC say the line at the same time or they take most of the lines from a certain character, which to me is a big no no! BAD! Those are the main characters lines! Unless one or two lines are better suited for your character and are small lines, only then can that be done! Better Example: "Gimme a break, Kairi" Sora complained. "Sora, you lazy bum . I knew Id find you snoozing down here." Kairi said. "Kairi, he was probably having a good dream!" Marceline protested. "Sorry Sora.." she apoligized. "Thanks, Mar. But it wasnt good. It was bad!" Sora whined. "Tell us about it." Marceline suggested. "This huge black thing swallowed me up. I couldnt breathe I couldnt -" Sora tried to explain, but was cut off by Kairi hitting him. "Ow!" Sora whined. "Are you still dreaming?" Kairi asked, trying to move away from talks about nightmares that could lead to more. "It wasnt a dream! Or was it? What was that place? So bizarre..." Sora asked. "Yeah, sure" Kairi dismissed. "Say Kairi, what was your hometown like? You know where you grew up?" Sora asked. "Yeah, I'd like to know more about that myself." Marceline agreed. "Ive told you before, I dont remember." Kairi answered. "Nothing at all?' Sora asks. "There's bound to be something there." Marceline suggested. "Nothing." Kairi answers her. "Do you ever want to go back?" Sora asked. "Well Im happy here" Kairi answered after thinking "But you know, I wouldnt mind going to see it." "Id like to see it too, along with any other worlds out there. I want to see them all. " Sora dreamed. "So what are we waiting for?" Kairi asks excitedly to her friends. "Hey, arent you guys forgetting about me?" Riku asks them, appearing suddenly. "I guess Im the only one working on the raft. And youre just as lazy as he is!" he said to Kairi. "He's right, Kairi. You are pretty lazy." Marceline teased. "So you noticed." Kairi joked back to Riku and Marceline. "Okay we'll finish it together!" Kairi suggested. Here is a better example because Marceline isnt stealing lines from characters. She has her own lines. Also, for the love of decent writing, out of all the lines you steal, dont steal the main characters important ones! Marceline cant steal Sora's thunder at the end of the game and say "There's no way your taking Kairi's heart!" Marceline can't take Riku's lines of "We can't let fear stop us! I'm not afraid of the darkness!" Marceline can't take Kairis lines of "Don't ever forget: wherever you go, I'm always with you." Those are their lines. Marceline needs to find her own lines. I've read a story where in CoM, the OC just exchanged the entire "Forgotten but not lost" conversation and promise with Namine. That was an important interaction between Sora and Namine and it was just given to the OC. And the OC didnt even care about Namine the way Sora did with his fake memories. She never searched for her the way Sora did, but the author for some reason though it was fitting for her OC to take that scene from Sora and give it to her OC. Not trying to hate but no. Those are important lines to those characters, dont take them from them. And if you absolutely have to and must, lets at least hope it matches the OC's situation more than it would said main character... Well there we go! My input and suggestions and all that. Its long. And i dont think I even said everything I wanted to say.
  16. flametheskull

    Himura

    Name: Himura Age: Unkown Weapon: Dragon Thorn (Keyblade) Abilities: Fire, Fira, Firaga, Dark Firaga, Ghostly Scream, Poison, Dark Shield, Dark Aura, Blackout Back Story: Himura doesn't know where she comes from or why she is, who she is. She woke up one day in the realm of light and learned that she was able to wield the keyblade. She later finds out that she is a heartless, the very first human heartless(or at least she believes that) and she wonders how she is able to wield the keyblade, since creatures of darkness are not able to and heartless weren't created yet. She went to Yen Sid and he said the heartless don't exist yet and that he believes she is from the future. She sets out on adventure to find out who she is, meanwhile every keyblader is getting ready for the keyblade war. 102550100 NestedThreadedFlat Oldest FirstNewest First