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dusk posted a status update
i feel like sleeping.. but then i feel like doing something productive, like playing video games
EternalReckoning repliedPlay games dude
what progress does sleep make? Its not going to level up your characters or kill sephiroth. youre question has already been answered. Give in to your inner Geek! :DD -
The Transcendent Key posted a status update
I'll probably see The Wolverine tomorrow with my mom and my stepdad!
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Damn, that song is so epic honey! Thanks to you I love The GazettE!
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Shulk posted a status update
I've had this weird urge to do an Animal Crossing webcomic, but I only have Paint on my computer, and I don't have a scanner. ;_; Crap.
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Col.Random posted a status update
Well KHchi got boring fast ._.
EternalReckoning repliedgive square time, Nomura knows how to make a good game, and the game still has to be updated and finished, it will get better and better you can count on it. i've personally given up until its in english and more complete though, atm its pretty alright
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http://kh13.com/forum/topic/60686-kh13-august-summer-seasonal-pokémon-tournament/ Btw heres the new tournament.
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Love the dubstep version of Girls Generation
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Robbie the Wise posted a status update
Saix is an angry guy.
Col.Random repliedIt doesn't matter if he could do better.
Hoes like Saiix are always after the man with power (and money)
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Destati_Dream_XIII posted a status update
I don't see the toolbar at the bottom of my screen that lets me chat with people on here anymore D: Was that function removed or is it just me having this problem?? O_o
Destati_Dream_XIII repliedOh I can see the chat toolbar again now that I cleared the cache! Thank you
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Kirie posted a status update
I hate people who talk about making food on the internet because then I get hungry & I want to make some too (ﾟ´Д｀ﾟ)ﾟ I want some ficking H A S H B R O W N S
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Kirie posted a status update
can i just like be lazy the rest of my life and sit on the computer all day
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Ghost posted a status update
Hmm..should OC stories be in first or third person? All the ones I've seen are in first, but I'm not quite sure. I'd make sense though, right?
Dracozombie repliedIs this fanfiction or, like, an actual original story? Because using the term "OC" tends to imply the former.
Dracozombie repliedIn that case, I strongly suggest third person. OCs already get a bad rep because it seems like the whole universe centers around them instead of what most people read fanfiction for aka the canon characters. Third person allows multiple viewpoints so it gives other characters some focus, unless you're having multiple POVs that are all in first person.
Ghost repliedYeah, I was planning on switching POVs. Trust me I hate first person but I feel like the reason OC stories are often done in first person is because, you're already inserting your own character so how else are people going to learn who they are, how the character acts, etc. It doesn't sound as good as it would in third person though. I mean, I did the intro in third person and it sounded great, but when I switched it to the actual
Ghost replied-actual storyline it just sounds really "ehhhh". Hmm. This is gonna be tough. I think I'll go back and edit it and make it third. Actually nevermind, first ill read it over and if I think it'd sound better in third person, I'll edit it.
Ah fūck, now I know why I haven't done an OC story since middle school
Dracozombie repliedReaders will learn how your OC is precisely by how they act, showing how they feel, etc. You can do that in first-person and third-person. Whether your story is in first or third, developing your character follows much of the same rules. It's just that first person tends to be more limiting in comparison.
Ghost repliedYeah, that's pretty true. And I don't care for switching POVs often so...third is the way to go. Even in roleplay I always write paragraphs in third, it's just what I prefer. Plus, depending on who the character is you sometimes can't be as descriptive as you want to be - rather than fact, everything they think is based on opinion. It's just not for me. Thanks you guys!
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Yang posted a status update
I'll be gone all week next week. . . THAT will be interesting.
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*Throws mud at you*
