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Queen Tery posted a status update
I've edited my profile to include descriptions of my four currently posted stories! Check out the descriptions and see if it sounds like you'd be interested in reading!
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SoraKH posted a status update
Summer and KH13!!!!!
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Paranoia posted a status update
Roses are red, Voilets are red, Trees are red, My garden is on fire.
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FireRubies1 posted a status update
Hey I just f-ed you and this is crazy you had no condom so here's your baby
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FireRubies1 posted a status update
We need more lemon pledge
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Shana09 posted a status update
My brother is reading a book that uses the word gay but as its old meaning, happy. YOU CANT BELIEVE HOW MANY TIMES THAT WORD IS BEIND SAID.
Shana09 repliedIll type a line:
"There was a spark of gaiety in her eyes, but when I laughed she put her hand over my mouth apprehensively. I pulled her down beside me and we were both laughing. That is what I remember most about that ecounter. She was so gay, so natural of this gaiety she must have given to me, for I had not one moment of remorse"
Another line: (NOT SO FAR AWAY FROM THIS LINE)
I felt satisfied and peaceful but not gay as she did, no, by God not gay.
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Wolfgang posted a status update
HEARTBURN QAQ
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedHere's what you do. Lie diwn, put pillows under your back so the access to your esophagus is cut off and eventually the heartburn will fade away.
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Dracula X posted a status update
So oreo cookies are relasing gay pride rainbow cookie and the Christian fanatics are threating to boycott Kraft.......Faith in Humanity: -100
Queen Tery repliedSo, all I want to know is, what is your current Faith in Humanity #, now that its lost 100 points?
Queen Tery repliedYou haven't had any since 2010, yet it just dropped 100 points? lol Wouldn't that mean you would be at -100 or has your faith been fluctuating, but staying around 0 since 2010?
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedOreos are unhealthy. Blech/shot
I can't lose my faith in humanity. Too much of an optimist. You can tell by my sparkles. (ﾉ◕ヮ◕)ﾉ*:･ﾟ✧
FireRubies1 repliedI didn't lose my faith in humanity... just because I know there are intelligent people among these... ones I dislike
Queen Tery repliedFireRubies1 said it all. I am very cynical and skeptical. I will talk shit about the general public, a lot. But, I never forget that there are genuine people out there.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedYou guys should be like me. My ADHD makes me constantly happy all the time, so I'm like freaking sunshine and rainbows.
lulz rainbows
FireRubies1 repliedPUT ALL THE GENUINE PEOPLE TOGETHER
AND PUSH THEM SOMEWHERE ESLE... as long as we're with them.
Queen Tery repliedDracula X you make a valid argument. All you can really do is try your best to be one of those people and hope that your influence creates more of these people.
Queen Tery repliedThey will. The mailman is just really slow and likes to take his sweet-ass time.
Queen Tery repliedShit, I got a new zipper and everything! *zips it up, disgusted with myself*
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AnsemTheWise posted a status update
Looking for some ideas to top off a KH project I'm working on: http://kh13.com/forum/topic/36529-hearts-eclipse-kingdom-hearts-idea-contribution-thread/
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wayfinder823 posted a status update
too many people admit they have gloves fetishes. o.O Little weirded out..
Queen Tery repliedlol Whatever floats their boat, I suppose. Personally, I don't have one. lol
AnsemTheWise repliedI can't imagine how anyone could think that about gloves. Well, is it about the gloves THEMSELVES, or... I'm confused.
Queen Tery repliedYou guys have never heard of a glove fetish? lol It's when someone enjoys their partner wearing gloves, during.... well, you know.
Miku Hatsune replied@etyrx - I thought it was like... sticking your magnum in a glove or something. And then going to town on yourself with the glove on. Lol.
Queen Tery repliedlol I guess it could involve that, too. But, typically it involves a partner wearing the glove. lol I guess as long as a person and glove are involved everything matches up. lmao
Queen Tery repliedThat does not sound appealing. lol But, I will admit that it sounds dirty.
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Godot posted a status update
maybe i'll write my own shit then uwu
Queen Tery repliedI have been writing for my own enjoyment for more than 6 years and I love it!
TheApprenticeofKingMickey replied
I'm planning to write a slice of life, slightly romantic, coming of age story. It gun b good.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedI usually write fantasy romance stories so it's going to be a change for me. owo
Queen Tery repliedI write a lot of action stories, but I try to challenge myself. So, I have worked on romance, drama, and comedy(comedy being the hardest for me to write) in an attempt to become a better writer. I usually mix in some action, though, since it makes it easier for me to write.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedIt's really personal so maybe you'll be the only person to read it.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedMy cousin, who also writes and critiques, said that I create humour in my stories without trying so she says, "Don't try to make it funny, just write naturally as you usually would."
Queen Tery repliedThat usually does allow for the best comedy. I find that when I try and force it, it isn't very funny, as opposed to just letting the comedy happen on its own.
Queen Tery repliedSometimes I find that visualizing a funny scene in my head, makes me laugh, but when I read what I end up writing down, I don't find it funny. Then I get pissed. lol
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedUsually, I have the main scene set up in my mind but the little parts I improvise on the spot and I guess that's how the humour comes out?
Queen Tery repliedI don't know about either of you, but I tend to not write a story, until I've come up with the beginning and the ending. It makes things so much easier to write, knowing where I'm going. I've only written one story, without knowing the ending until about 1/4 of the way through.
Godot repliedi kind of work out the story as i go along. like, i'll have some major points already plotted out, but everything else will just come gradually.
the hardest part for me is coming up with a good beginning. i've had times where i literally have the entire story figured out, but no way to begin it.
Queen Tery repliedI can understand that. I find that opening with a confusing beginning or something in medias res are good ways to begin. They usually grab the reader's attention.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedPretty much what Mado said. But I can always come up with a good beginning and ending. My family says I have knack for it. It just comes naturally.
Queen Tery repliedMy first major story is also my favorite. I had gone through editing the whole thing, 3 or 4 times, before it reached it's final 123 pages. After a few years had passed, since I started writing that story, I had been cleaning up my room and I found the original, written in a notebook. I laughed at how much it sucked. I couldn't believe that I enjoyed writing something that sucked that much. But, I'm glad that I didn't realize how much it sucked at the time, otherwise I never w...
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedI remember writing my first story. I was a major Twi-hard. /feels ashamed
I made the characters really similar to Bella and Edward. Main character was a Mary Sue. They had no depth, the plot sucked horribly and there was too much dialogue with not enough description.
And the saddest thing is
I got the highest mark in my class for it.
;n;
Queen Tery repliedlol It's always nice to see improvement in yourself. I had the same problem with character depth and development. There was none. But, after talking with my friend, who also enjoys writing, he gave me advice about giving my characters more depth and stronger personalities. At the time I had no clue what he meant. He explained it a bit and I figured some things out on my own, but I'm glad that he talked things out, like that. Actually, for a while he had never read one of my stories, b...
Queen Tery repliedbut had only heard about them from me. He recently read one of my stories and was blown away. He complimented me on my pacing, dialogue, and characters. Which is funny because I hate writing dialogue.
Queen Tery repliedMine also involved demons. lol To this day it remains my favorite story and I hope to one day get it adapted into a film.
Queen Tery repliedI've started enjoying it a bit more, as of late. Only because it's gotten easier, but when my characters didn't have any depth, it sucked because I was practically repeating things and it was really bland.
TheApprenticeofKingMickey repliedI tend to use body language as a form of character interaction because descriptions are my thing. It makes the scene pretty powerful and leaves a huge impact on the reader.
Queen Tery repliedI agree, that does leave a pretty lasting impression. I tend not to describe things, beyond necessity, though. Mostly because I suck with descriptions, which is the main reason I write film scripts. Descriptions aren't crazy important when writing a script.
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Amun Ra and Anubis are my favourites too. 8D Bastet ties with them, of course.
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