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RoxSox posted a status update
Is Frozen like the shortest movie ever made or does the Youtube video have parts removed or something.
Philip Ellwell repliedRemoved for copyrights: Frozen's an hour and thirty.
Music numbers might be edited out.
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RoxSox posted a status update
Did Elsa just counteract like 100 years of Disney history by telling Anna to go punt when she brings home a boy she just met.
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Tigerruss posted a status update
Yaaaaay...I just got reminded of the stupid story I was working for fun where Kairi was really the big bad in Kingdom Hearts...
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did you make your other character?
rikunobodyxiii repliedIn the middle of it. Sorry I fell behind. I'll try to get her up as soon as I can.
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Atari posted a status update
I just got off punishment. Woo.

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Skhyatze posted a status update
No football in 7 months? What am I going to do?
Kaneki Ken repliedWell, there's always college basketball, basketball, with some nascar on the side.
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TheWayToDawn posted a status update
Man this sucks, I've been having ppl on fanfic.net tell me my grammar is wrong, I'm not putting paragrahp's in the right area's, my descriptions are kinda weird, and the more and more I keep hearing it... The more and more I think I'm a horrible writer. I know they're trying to help but it's starting to bring me down
Javelin434 repliedat least you're trying

I sorta gave up on mine because I figured I shouldn't even try, despite knowing it's an awesome story if I can pull it off...
Javelin434 repliedI suppose I could offer to help though. my time here RPing with people have taught me a few things on writing. More than the classes at college actually
TheWayToDawn repliedWell they are telling me a few things, but I mean seriously! It's not like I'm writing it for the newspaper, it's just all in good fun. But nooooo Fan fiction is now a serious game nowadays >
Saber Lily repliedWell. Its also easier tomread stories. If you didnt use proper grammar or proper vocab/spelling, storiee would be near impossible to read. Paragraph placement is important, but can be left out until you are comfortable with it all.
If you could point me out to your stories, I'd like to try and help instead of just syaing "this this this this and this are wrong"
Thing is, writing is writing. Doesnt need ro be serious, but when you just write a mass of words, i...
TheWayToDawn repliedOkay, here's the link to my profile. It has all my stories on it, just have to scroll to the bottom.
https://www.fanfiction.net/~xxxthewaytodawnxxx
Thanks Oath, I'm pretty sure I write words correctly, since I do you a spell checker after I'm done writing, but yeah I'm not to sure. It's just that ppl keep telling me what's wrong and don't tell me what's great about the story. Very few ppl told what's great about it.
Javelin434 repliedOath would be your best bet on helping you on this. I suppose I could try to offer help as well but I'm practically nothing compared to him
TheWayToDawn repliedLOL, I can use all the help I can get. I just hope I get better with my writing skill.
Cause I really want to write a book of my own. My fan fics are practice and fun.
Saber Lily repliedI want to write a book, too. Hence why, even practice, needs these little things.
I've helped Javelin out, and he makes lng RP posts than me. It would be humiliating if i dien't have the all-powerful excuse of smartphone.
Javelin434 repliedThere's a difference between RPing and story-telling, but the creative mechanics and some syntax are similar.
I'm swamped with schoolwork and my brain is being f**ked by math + science courses, so it's gonna be a while before I can start reading and helping. I might be able to check it out tonight and give some pointers/call out your strengths on this status post if you don't mind.

Hail Oathkeeper, btw
TheWayToDawn repliedOkay, thank you so much you two. You don't know how much this means to me, I've never had anyone try to help me with my stories/ fanfics. Thanks guy's

@Oath Fanfics are basically my practice, I try different writing ways with some of them and see how it works out, at least try to. But this practice is a fun practice for me, so it helps a lot, it doesn't overwhelm me.
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Sora-Lover posted a status update
Gnite everyone nanex is making me go to bed
Sora-Lover repliedNope I have the transformers, dinosaurs, towers and Godzilla plus the ladders I win
Sora-Lover repliedI have the all the other plants and stars plus all the stuff I sed before I win
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Spamification1 posted a status update
Just finished Metroid Other M for the first time. It's definitely not the best Metroid game, but it's not the worst either.
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Kaneki Ken posted a status update
superbowl's over, haven't received study guide for quiz on tuesday yet, so I guess it's back to FFXIII, beating some c'ieth missions.
Kaneki Ken repliedheh, that would be cool. Platinum a game under a certain time limit, and get paid for 2 months. Oh well, one can dream.
*groan* Don't like farming for Tetradic gear. But must be done. (Plus getting bomb cores does well for financial difficulties)
Kaneki Ken repliedmy bad.
Tetradic crown and its upgrade, tetradic tiara. You get those on mission 7 in ch. 11. Dismantle them and you get hermes' sandals, which adds haste for low health, and sprint shoes which is auto haste. Sprint shoes is a must for finishing c'ieth missions on time.
Kaneki Ken repliedGot the crown. But I can dismantle it, and upgrade it to sprint shoes. Just hope I got enough gil to do this or it's back to farming mission 7.
Kaneki Ken repliedI'm a bit of a perfectionist I guess ^.^
Got everything at sprint shoes star level, so life should be more easier now. Back to missions (thank God for making a teleport system, too much walking @.@)
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Danex Darkfire + posted a status update
aut viam inveniam aut faciam
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Pangoro "Sen" posted a status update
I think I read somewhere that KH13 starts lagging at a certain time of day. I think this is that time...
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Think Pink posted a status update
"i should sleep" i say as i don't go to sleep
Danex Darkfire + repliedWe will never sleep
Sleep is for the weak
We will never rest
Till we're all fvcking dead
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Shulk posted a status update
Uh... Football woo. (Trying to fit in with the football stuff)
Pangoro "Sen" repliedYa gotta be like Chris Redfield!*Takes a deep breath in, and follows it with the loudest shout ever*FOOOOOOOTBAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAALL!
Pangoro "Sen" replied...Why am I reviewing this? It's like reviewing that one specific Jutsu from Naruto because I thought it looked cool.
Pangoro "Sen" repliedI...can't even remember. I remember that it let you see through someone's body. That's all I can remember, though.
Pangoro "Sen" replied...Just gonna pretend like I know what you're talking about...(Maybe if I just watch a bit more of Naruto...)
Pangoro "Sen" repliedYeah yeah yeah, Naruto first, THEN school!(Seriously though, I meant after school. And before my Choir concert. With the high schoolers...I should be nervous, but I'm not.)
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Danex Darkfire + posted a status update
There's nothing surgery can do, when I break your little heart in two
Danex Darkfire + repliedI'm gonna break your little heart, watch you take the fall, laugh it all the way to the hospital
Neptune Vasilias repliedThen my blade will come out of the deep blue cause me and Poseidon are coming for you
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user1 posted a status update
So far the ps4 is really good, with many good ports of pc games. They are VERY good pc ports, but they are only some of the newest ones. Until I see a pretty good part of steams library on steam, I'm still going to hold off on the ps4. A pc is the best option atm.
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